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You know, i was just thinking....

It seems like alot of the posts from 'popular' people get more comments on there posts then anyone else. Like yawn, she posted waarjid for nopje and it was beautiful! Just as beautiful as solaya's ice and amika and she has six comments! and the birthday gift for shimmy that has 5 comments! Why don't you comment on yawns or even mine? I am beginning to feel as thoguh you guys don't like me because noone comments on mine! And probabley yawn feels that way to! IF you are going to comment on one picture, and you see that somone elses picture has no comments, just be nice and just say thanks for the picture! OR, thats nice! or something so you make that person feel good and not left out. because, i know how i feel like the person i give a picture to doesn't like it if they don't say thank you! I won't say names because i know that would be rude. Crybaby's bio has 251 comments! Were tobbie's bio has 2! That makes people feel bad... just try to be nice! I was nice enough to try really hard on a picture of sao and xav and such, and i didn't even get a nice! or thank you! ...
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Spin me a web of nightmares and lies, and I'll tell you "It's Reality." [Story]

WARNING.

THE FOLLOWING STORY CONTAINS POSSIBLY DISTURBING IMAGERY AND SITUATIONS.

YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED. EVEN THOUGH WARNINGS GET YOU NOWHERE.




Drip…drop. Drip…drop.

Water, seeping through the cracks, spilling onto the floor below. The dull sound is but one of the few things audible in this dark, dank place. Rats skirt past your feet, their soft fur one of the few things almost comforting to feel. They squeak quietly as they run by, the usual chit chatter of their kind. A part of you can almost hear the dripping sarcasm in-between garbled vowels; or perhaps, you’re simply imagining it.

We see you’re here again. Welcome back.

You’ve been here so many times, and yet it’s still hard to define what is real here, and what isn’t.

It’s cold here too. There’s no draft here. It’s just…cold. It’s that feeling you get when you’ve realized you’ve stepped a little too far into the neighbor farmer’s yard. You’re the one who gets left behind by your cohorts, the one who’s left staring down the blank eyes of the shotgun.
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"This Place" Fox

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Return to Nature - Story XI

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You've daydreamed all day today. Your little fawn, Vito, has filled your imagination. You wonder what he will look like when he's older, how he will behave, what his personality will be like...

You come home and find the little plush fawn sitting on your chair, as if he was awaiting your arrival. You smile and pick him up, sitting in the chair and resting the little fawn on your lap. You stare deeply into his plastic eyes, and almost in a trance, you feel yourself grow tired. Sitting back, you fall asleep.

"Good morning, Mother.", you hear a voice say. You awake to see both Vito and your deer waiting for you. Vito has grown a little since the last time you saw him.

"Mother?", you ask. Your deer nods, "You were the first person Vito saw when he was born, so he sees you as his mother. Don't worry about it.", they reply. You tilt your head at the little one, who eagerly smiles at you. He is quite handsome for a little fawn.

You soon discover your surroundings - a gradual slope rising up, grass everywhere with boulders that seem to litter the place, and a trail that goes up the side of the hill. "We are at the base of a mountain, and today we will be climbing to the top to meet an oracle.", your deer says to you.

You want to ask what they mean by 'oracle', but you see Vito start to make his way up the trail, and look back at you. "Are you coming, Mother?", he asks. You smile and nod. You trust your deer and know it will be explained later. Following the fawn, you watch him as he frolics and bounds on the trail. Your deer stays behind you, who seems to be enjoying the walk as well.

The three of you go up the slope, none speaking but all finding the climb to be a little more difficult with each step. At one point Vito, who has found himself to be more tired than you or your deer, sits on the trail. "This is hard!", he says at once.

A Fairytale

Author's Note (Nov 10th, 2010): The story of Hook, Line, and Sinker is finally complete. Smiling

Author's Note: One year ago I started a story. That story told the unfortunate tale of three characters for whom it was named. The 'Hook Line Sinker' Fairytale was and still is one of the longest stories I've composed and yet, it was ordained to be so much more. In honor of the characters themselves, and the wonderful community members who stood by me and supported me so amazingly, I continue the story, as it was meant to be told.


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Tabiu's Memories~

Memories

Tabiu's light grey eyes fluttered open at the sound of his mother's voice. "Tabiu.. Tabi," she spoke softly in his ear, nuzzling his head. He looked up at her, yawning, "Yes mother?" he tilted his head, before realizing that there was a small fuzzy shape lying beside her. "Who's that?" he gasped, leaning down and sniffing at the younger fawn. She smiled, "This is your brother.. Dieu," she told him, "say hello to him." Tabiu looked down at his sibling, sniffing him, "Well hello there," he spoke to him softly. His ears perked up as the fawn looked up at him, before pressing his nose to his, and then laying back down. Tabiu giggled, "He doesn't do much, does he?" he asked, looking up to their mother. "He's just a baby, Tabiu, you know that," she whispered, nosing his cheek, "in time, he will start speaking." He looked up at her, puzzled, "When will that be?" he asked, tilting his head. She rested her chin on his head, "Soon, Tabiu," she answered him, "soon."

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|I need to add something here.. I don't know how to word it though.. so I'll get back to that later. XP|
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Tabiu's ears quivered at the sound of rustling beside him. He opened a tired eye, barely able to see in the darkness. He felt.. an odd silence around him. Lifting up his head, he glared through the shadows, looking around. Suddenly, he felt pain piercing his chest. Where is he? He sat up immediatley, glancing around franticly, "D-Dieu?" he called out, quiet enough as not to disturb any other deer. Tabiu stood up, and creeped out of under the large tree trunk, peering around, "Dieu?" he whispered hopelessly, staggering about the quiet plains. As he sniffed around a bit, not being the best tracker, he managed to find.. nothing. His ears flattened, and he suddenly broke out into a run, pain and fury pulsing through him. Where are you?! he shouted repeatedly in his head as he flew through the clearing.
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Dieu & Tabiu - A Delve Into the Past ||Please Dun Post! D:||

(This ish an Rp between my Tabiu and Emerald's Dieu. These will be scenes that we will later act out in forest. =3 Remember, this is before Dieu and Tabiu had left, Dieu remembers none of this. ^^ Like it says in the title, please do not post.)

Tabiu's grey-blue eyes slowly open as he heard his mother's voice.
"Huh.. what?" he mumbled sleepily, shaking his head as he sat up.
"I said I'm going out to get something to eat," she answered him, smiling in amusement.
He yawned, "Oh.. okay."
he murmured, laying back down.
She smiled, looking down at the two of them, "Sleep well my little ones," she spoke softly, before sliding out of under the large tree, and disappearing.
One of Tabiu's eyes opened as soon as he stopped hearing her hoof-steps.
"Alright, she's gone!"
Tabiu sprang out of his flowery nest.
"We can go now!"
He said to his sibling, bouncing over to him.

(Fail first post fails. o-e Dun worry, they'll get larger as we Rp. '^^)
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Return to Nature - Perspectives I

((The Perspectives series focuses on you looking through the eyes of another species. I may not write very many of them but they will be fun to write))

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"Roots"

Trees are wonderful organisms. We live next to them in our daily lives, though they probably never know we are here with them. To understand a tree, why not consider their life as your own?

You begin as a seed. Where you come from may never be known, but you somehow make it into the ground. Maybe you found your own way there, or maybe someone cared enough for you to plant into the soil, but you've made it there. You were dormant, waiting for something to ignite your life, and that is this moment.

You take what you need to grow. Your mother, the Earth, gives you water and nutrients, and shelters your fragile body. Your father, the Sun, warms you and sends powerful rays that help you grow. You have a planet and a star that love you deeply, and from that you become stronger.

You dig your roots into the ground, and slowly emerge from the soil to explore the world around you. This will take time, but you continue to nurture from your mother and father, and little by little you sprout. You observe the beautiful world around you, and find other trees who are much larger than you but are there to give you support and friendship.

You try out a year on the world, growing easily in the spring, having a wonderful summer with your father, watching the others around you start to wither in the autumn, and feeling the bitter cold of the winter. The world can be rough to live on, but you persevere, living for another spring, growing stronger and bigger every month. You have big dreams, and not even the elements will stop you from achieving your goals.

Finally, you have become a tree. It was a long time but you reach up to your father and hold tight to your mother.

[ just the same ; Delilah & Zukra's brief history ]

Care to hear a story?
Very well then.
Come sit with me.
I will tell you of two deer I once knew.

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Lord of Zombies - Corg's Contest

Contest info here.
*Warning* Mature theme and a little gore. Read at your own risk

Many of the deer in the Endless Forest honored and worshiped the Twin Gods, knowing that they were always protected under their watchful eye. They thought that the Gods' presence would be just as endless as the Forest itself. They waited anxiously for the Autumn to come, so they could once again meet a great zombie whom we call the Big Zombie Deer or BZD. The BZD hated the little deer, and often threatened them if they came close. He longed to be free from his chains, so he could stay on the land for an eternity instead of trapped for months of each year.

Little did anyone know, but the BZD himself was a god deer much like Michael and Auriea, but one of evil intent. The Twin Gods used their forest magic to keep the BZD under control, and he succumbed to their will, letting the little deer cast spells on him that in return transformed their bodies to look like his. They still were living, but had the illusion that they were of the dead like the BZD was.

One musty day, two fawns decided to play a game of tag on Twin Gods' Hill. One of them noticed something strange on the ground. He scratched at it with his little hoof, and found an old tome that was written in a strange language. The little one tilted his head at the artifact, and curiously he and his friend dug it out. The thing was circular like a wheel and looked just as old as the Twin Gods' statues, and the two noticed that it let off a strange glow.

"Let's take it to the Pond and wash it off. Maybe it's just dirty.", one of the fawns suggested. The two tried to lift the heavy stone, but as soon as they were able to get it to move, it began to roll down the hill. They shrieked in horror and tried to stop it, but it was too late - the tome rolled off and crashed into one of the stones of the Birch Forest.
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