Kaoori: HEY.

I'm curious, do you have a 'voice actor' for your character(s)? Is there someone who you think of as having 'their voice'? I'd love to know what your characters sound like!

Ila is going to be in the forest now, she is going to keep herself to the pond.
If not her mother or siblings is around of course.

^^

If you interact with her please tell me.
:3

I've seen a few people mention how they'd appreciate some critique so I'm offering my services. If you have literature or visual art that you would like critiqued, I'm more than happy to have a look-see and mention anything that strikes me as could be improved. I will critique any media, any subject matter, but poetry is not my strong suit so I won't have as much to say about those sorts of pieces.

Just comment on this blog with a link to anything you want critiqued and I will respond sometime today.

Inspiration

I apologize if I get his speech or personality incorrect.





The pond was unusually high this night. His gaze looked to the heavens, seeing the moon much larger and redder than normal. The sight pleased him. Red was his color...the color of kings.

Here he stood watch over those who slumbered. Mere pawns, but perhaps...a rook, knight, or bishop could emerge from them. They had potential...to become loyal, to serve the crown...to even die for their king.

But who was worthy? Who of these lowly peasants could fill the ranks of the king's loyal militia? Who among them would give their life for the crown?

He walked on, the cooling waters pleasant to his hooves, but he looked for something else. Somewhere fit for a king. As he walked on up the hill, he soon found a great tree. It was the biggest of all in the Forest, and just looking at it's grandeur was inspiring. He peered in. No commoners in here. Nothing but a hollow ambiance. It seemed like a suitable place for a king to rest his weary bones.

He sat and watched from within the shelter of the Oak. It was his castle, the sound echoing into his mind and breaking the silence of the night. He began to drift into a slumber when he heard something...a quiet whisper in his ears.

"A chamber fitting for one of royalty such as yourself. Yes...you claim this old tree as your own, just for this night, but I could give you the entire Forest.", the voice was chilling and raspy. The king turned to see who was talking to him, but saw nothing but darkness.

"Show yourself!", his voice was loud and booming, a commanding authority to those lesser than him.

He turned and was taken aback when the slender creature was standing before him, blocking the entrance to the Oak. [=darkgrey]"The entire Forest could become your kingdom if you would simply serve me.

Sorry IT is out and I couldn't back up my friends list! So moonsorro (I hope I spelled that right) I need to add you as a friend again! I'm on right now and would love to meet up with you!

Natali opened her eyes and at first didn't know where she was. Then she remember about the running and ball of light. She found a small lake and some grass that didn't have any bugs or dirt and ate. She returned to the portal and lightly touched it with her hoof. Again everything around her became too white to look at and she shut her eyes. She opened them and she again was in the white room. She started running as fast as she could hoping this would take her to the forest. After running for several minutes she realized everything wasn't white anymore and she was in her familiar forest. She found Crucio by the lake passed out and she sat in his fur. Then finally went to sleep once again.

Gender: Stag, male
Title: none yet
Picto: [X]
Set: Orca pelt, Dotd Mask, Purple Flowers on Antlers or Candle Antlers
Color: #7D478C
D.o.B. ~May 19th
Age: 1 deer year ( 4 month in real )
Orientation: Bisexual

Appearance:

At the moment:
- DotD Mask
- Orca Pelt
- Candler



Mate: None, and since he likes stags more than does. ( Thats his little secret. ) he's kinda alone. ^^
Friends: None yet
Family: He had a brother, who died in an accident looong time ago. His family is elsewhere.



Personality:

• Friendly, playfull and social deer.
• Sometimes shy and unsure about what to do.
• Likes beeing with others, but sometimes he thinks, they missunderstand him.
• Often very active, dancing, jumping around ,running~.
• If he's in a bad mood, he separates or just wanders off. Sometimes he lowers his antlers and shake his head, but he prefers not to fight. So pls just leave him then.
• Never hurt fawns or does! He will protect those beeing attacked by others.