Feel free to interact with the character here.
Also, my game loves to freeze up on me. If this causes me to miss something such a sa greeting; it is most likely not on purpose. If I do not respond, please repeat the action.

Finally back after a break due to feeling sick! I've missed the forest.
Added a little information to his way of speaking.

Vent writing ahead.























Here I sit, behind these bars
Nothing but an open field to see
No possibility of parole
No bonds can be paid for my crime
No get out of jail card

Here I sit, watching free birds fly
Watching deer in the distance
Wishing I could be like them
But then remembering what I am
A prisoner who could never be free

Here I sit, waiting for my fate
Wondering what will ever happen to me
Dreaming of what I'd enjoy in life
But dreams are nothing but false
My crime seals my life away

Here I sit, deep in my thoughts
Reflecting on my sentence
Wondering how the crime I made
Could ever be punished so severely
I am a living example of such

Here I sit, behind these bars
One who committed the ultimate crime
Of being born, of being alive
And not being able to pay my debt
Because life is a costly mistake

Kaoori: HEY.

I'm curious, do you have a 'voice actor' for your character(s)? Is there someone who you think of as having 'their voice'? I'd love to know what your characters sound like!

Ila is going to be in the forest now, she is going to keep herself to the pond.
If not her mother or siblings is around of course.

^^

If you interact with her please tell me.
:3

I've seen a few people mention how they'd appreciate some critique so I'm offering my services. If you have literature or visual art that you would like critiqued, I'm more than happy to have a look-see and mention anything that strikes me as could be improved. I will critique any media, any subject matter, but poetry is not my strong suit so I won't have as much to say about those sorts of pieces.

Just comment on this blog with a link to anything you want critiqued and I will respond sometime today.

Inspiration

I apologize if I get his speech or personality incorrect.





The pond was unusually high this night. His gaze looked to the heavens, seeing the moon much larger and redder than normal. The sight pleased him. Red was his color...the color of kings.

Here he stood watch over those who slumbered. Mere pawns, but perhaps...a rook, knight, or bishop could emerge from them. They had potential...to become loyal, to serve the crown...to even die for their king.

But who was worthy? Who of these lowly peasants could fill the ranks of the king's loyal militia? Who among them would give their life for the crown?

He walked on, the cooling waters pleasant to his hooves, but he looked for something else. Somewhere fit for a king. As he walked on up the hill, he soon found a great tree. It was the biggest of all in the Forest, and just looking at it's grandeur was inspiring. He peered in. No commoners in here. Nothing but a hollow ambiance. It seemed like a suitable place for a king to rest his weary bones.

He sat and watched from within the shelter of the Oak. It was his castle, the sound echoing into his mind and breaking the silence of the night. He began to drift into a slumber when he heard something...a quiet whisper in his ears.

"A chamber fitting for one of royalty such as yourself. Yes...you claim this old tree as your own, just for this night, but I could give you the entire Forest.", the voice was chilling and raspy. The king turned to see who was talking to him, but saw nothing but darkness.

"Show yourself!", his voice was loud and booming, a commanding authority to those lesser than him.

He turned and was taken aback when the slender creature was standing before him, blocking the entrance to the Oak. [=darkgrey]"The entire Forest could become your kingdom if you would simply serve me.

Sorry IT is out and I couldn't back up my friends list! So moonsorro (I hope I spelled that right) I need to add you as a friend again! I'm on right now and would love to meet up with you!