Divine Sanctuary Index (Chapter 4 started)

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I've been wanting to finish up Divine Sanctuary, so here is the index:

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4

So in this story, Quad is given different teams of talux (winged TEF deer) to help him with various tasks. If you haven't read the previous stories, I won't spoil what all happens but every deer has an ability and their own set of wings. Your deer can still participate even if you haven't read them.

Below are some ideas for powers/abilities, but this is not a definite list and any ideas are more than welcome. Just if you can't think of something and want to be in the story, that's what this list is for. PLEASE, if an ability has already been taken, choose another (unless it's noted that there can be multiples) or suggest one of your own:

Taken Abilities -

- Light (illumination)
- Darkness (blindness)
- Fire
- Water (purification)
- Earth (vegitation growth)
- Wind (levitation)
- Mind Reading
- Bone Animation (creates distractions from nearby animal bones)
- Poison/Unpoison
- Future Sight (would be a scouter)
- Camouflage (camos the group)
- Super Speed
- Sleep (sedative ability)
- Lightning (paralysis)
- Super Strength

Available abilities -

- Protective Bubble **can be more than one**
- Healing/regeneration **can be more than one**
- Weak Abiogenesis (creates one object at a time) **can be more than one**
- Create your own!

Below are abilities that I will NOT allow in the story. This list is tentative and more may be added:

- Flight (the deer can already fly, so it's not necessary)
- Vampirism/Becoming a Vampire (no use, and you would have to only come out at night....which I don't plan to write any night missions)
- Animal Morphing (no, your deer will not morph into another animal, including wolves. The reason why is that there would not be any reason to have an ability like that, because if you wanted your deer to be more agile, you could choose the 'Super Speed' ability, or create an agility or stealth ability. In short, there will be no transforming into wolves or any other creature ability in this story.

Here are the signups, and there is not a set number of members per team yet:

Violet Team:
- Kinsha (Pega) **Camo Ability**
- Xylia (Sarie) **Mind Reading Ability**
- Chanse (Sarie) **Wind Ability**
- Toukan (Pega) **Empath**
- Nekura-Raikou (Zerg) **Lightning Ability**
- Lithium (MickKreiger) **Control Ability**


Green Team:
- Seed **Earth Ability**
- Lemon **Healing Ability**
- Devren (Silentlikethat) **Empath**
- Envy (Vira) **Poison/Unpoison Ability**
- Tally **Protective Bubble Ability**
- Raffles (SilverDragon) **Weak Abio Ability**

Blue Team:
- Troll (Liëka) **Water Ability**
- Tuna (Fayne) **Super Speed Ability**
- Phee (Rainflower) **Protective Bubble Ability**
- Raimundo (Starbright5000) **Sleep ability**
- Nerri (Zeekii) **Enhanced Hearing**
- Timberrc (Timberwolf) **Time Place Shift**

Red Team:
- Rutilus (Dannii) **Fire Ability**
- Liëka **Bone Animation Ability**
- Yorres (Io Rez) **Light Ability**
- Martisol (AnimalArtist) **Future Sight (Scouting) Ability**
- Darkweaver (Zerg) **Darkness Ability**
- Bastilion (Pega) **Super Strength Ability**

8U You can certainly use one

8U You can certainly use one of my deer, if you like <3 I have Taliene, Rutilus, Jared, Lorak, Danielle, Maha, Nüwa, Ares and...well, lets not count Jareth since he's a fandeer :3...Take your pick!

-- Dannii <3
quadraptor's picture

Aww you got rid of Tybalt?

Aww you got rid of Tybalt? I liked him...

Anyway...uhh...I wouldn't mind seeing either Rutilus or Jared in the story. Is there anyone in particular you'd like me to include, and also I'd need to know what ability you would be interested in. Eye


LMAO. I love Tybalt :c But

LMAO. I love Tybalt :c But dskghskjg ah well.
8D I guess Rut could be in. Jared is too much of a coward. Aaaand I s'pose Rut would be fire? xD Or electrocution.

-- Dannii <3
quadraptor's picture

I'll put him down for the

I'll put him down for the fire ability since that's one I need to have.

Thanks! XD


lemon's picture

Feel free to use Lemon, if

Feel free to use Lemon, if you'd like! c: I'm pretty sure she'd be Healing/regeneration.
I thought I'd also mention that I'm really a fan of your writing. <3

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quadraptor's picture

Great! I'll add her to one

Great! I'll add her to one of the teams! Thanks Eye


IoRez's picture

Yorres would like to be

Yorres would like to be involved! He would definitely be a Sorceror of Light (Red team).
Bio here


Yorres, Lightbringer

you can use any of my deer!

you can use any of my deer! 8D if/when you pick one, you can choose an ability or you can ask me. xD I really don't care. <3
quadraptor's picture

Sarie - Thanks! I'll take a

Sarie - Thanks! I'll take a look later (gotta go to work right now), but I'll let you know.

Also notes for Troll: basically he's quietly depressed in a corner for most of the time, but if there's a common cause (as I suspect there will be in such a story as this) then he will, equally silently, go beserker-warrior-mode (ie: fighting heroically to the point of mad self-sacrifice, a disregard of personal harm over others, only still without telling anyone how he feels)


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Oh heck, I'll be ironic and

Oh heck, I'll be ironic and say Kinsha has camouflage.
Oh, and Toukan has his own abilities already, if that works. He's somewhat of an empath naturally (senses other's emotions), and when he sleeps, he can separate his spirit from his body. He's unaffected by his leg then, his antlers are a bit larger, no one can see him of course (unless they can see ghosts and spirits), yet he can physically interact with things. In "spirit mode", he leaves his body where his body is, and can only travel so fast as a normal deer can run, but when he's going to return to his body, he can do that from anywhere, without needing to backtrack. Downside to this ability: his sleeping body is, well, asleep. It's unprotected. If something happens, I'd imagine he'd be forced to return to it though.

An extra thing: these two would be best in the same group. Toukan's fine on his own, but Kinsha's still really shy and awkward around others. He's better with Touk around. =]

If you need to know their personalities, you know the bio's linked in my sig. =B

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"If you don't like something, tolerate it."
Seed's picture

I'll volunteer Seed to have

I'll volunteer Seed to have the Earth (plant growth) ability: It fits him, given his name and his established-but-not-yet-fully-explored plant-based backstory.
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Lyeekha's picture

....If you find you have

....If you find you have spaces, then Liëka would be great for the Bone Animation or Mild Abio (albeit a mild Abio with a darker theme).

Only if there's spaces though! I just like to stick my oar in. |D;

Martisol would love to be in

Martisol would love to be in this ^^ I could imagine her with the Future Sight ability or Super Speed, or the ability to go through different worlds and take others with her... or maybe the ability to call other animals to help with her mind or something. lol You could put her on Rut's team for the best cooperation lol BFFS -shot-

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Sarie - Is there anyone in

Sarie - Is there anyone in particular you'd like in the story? Or actually, is there anyone you could see as a mind reader or someone who could use wind/levitation abilities?

I *could* have some neat dual-ability involving Vipin and Aspen, but I'd need some help coming up with an idea that would work like that, and also it would be your choice if you'd like to have both of them involved. (Liëka and Pega have two characters in the story so it's perfectly fine)


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Judgement wants in with the

Judgement wants in with the Darkness power.

Judge: SINNER. EVEN ONE SUCH AS YOU KNOWS THE HOLY POWER OF MY--

Yeah. Definitely darkness.

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hmm, not really. mind reader

hmm, not really. mind reader or levitation? oooh uh...I can see Xylia or maybe Aspen as a mind reader, probably more Xylia though. and wind...probably Chanse 8D

I would love to include my

I would love to include my deer Raimundo but you don't know him xDDD
But if you do want to include him heres his Bio
8D
quadraptor's picture

Sure, I will include him!

Sure, I will include him! Any ability you think he'd be suitable for?

(I'm surprised noone has taken the darkness ability yet. Most people on the internet are all "I LIKE VAMPIRES AND DARKNESS AND EVIL!!")


Lyeekha's picture

Well, I was tempted. But

Well, I was tempted. Sticking out tongue But bone animation is more Liëka's style. I mean, if you were to include Artemis, then she'd definitely take that, being one of Chaos's lot (BZD).
fayne's picture

I WOULD LUUUUUUURV to have

I WOULD LUUUUUUURV to have Tuna on the blue team. c: WITH THE MYSTICAL ABILITY OF FISHSLAP super speed? please and thankyoooou. :> <3333

THE HAIR FALLING OUT THING STILL MAKES ME LAUGH BTW

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Lyeekha's picture

Yay Troll is not alone no

Yay Troll is not alone no more! ....I'm sure they'll get on..... splendidly! ^_^;;
fayne's picture

FDJKGDKG YES "HAWHAW HAW

FDJKGDKG YES

"HAWHAW HAW YESSSSS"

"...what."

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silentlikethat's picture

Would it be alright if my

Would it be alright if my Devren could join? And if he could have the power of an Empath as well like Toukan?

quadraptor's picture

Sure! I'll add him to the

Sure! I'll add him to the green team if that's alright!


Zergarikiaka's picture

You can use my Darkweaver in

You can use my Darkweaver in the red team if you want. 8D
I think he'd have the Darkness (blindness) ability. XD

Or my Nekura-Raikou, on violet team with Lightning (paralisis) ability. 8D

both?|D

Yay ! You can use him for

Yay !
You can use him for the Sleep one if you want 8D !
IoRez's picture

Light and Darkness on the

Light and Darkness on the same team?
We are Nigh Indefeatable!


Yorres, Lightbringer
Lyeekha's picture

I did wonder at that, but

I did wonder at that, but yay! ^_^
quadraptor's picture

It'll be interesting. I'll

It'll be interesting. I'll probably have the two of them act somewhat bitter toward one another, or some neat hindrance of each others powers when they use them.

I didn't realize that...but hey Zerg said red team so >> <<


IoRez's picture

That's what I was thinking.

That's what I was thinking. Maybe their powers cancel each other out, which would explain why they're so antagonistic to one another.


Yorres, Lightbringer
Lyeekha's picture

...well... there are a few

...well... there are a few points that perhaps ought to be taken into account in Liëka's section and in Miscellaneous here...
Vira's picture

Can Envy be on the green

Can Envy be on the green team with Poison/Unpoison? |D

Rainflower's picture

Sign Phee up for Healing or

Sign Phee up for Healing or Protective bubble, doesn't matter =3
That is, if you don't mind me asking XD
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Vira - Of course! Thanks

Vira - Of course! Thanks for signing up!

Rainflower - I wrote you down for a protective bubble on the Blue Team. Thanks!


Zeekii's picture

Hm...I'm not really sure

Hm...I'm not really sure what this is, just stories you are writing with people's deer in them with different abilities, or? Anyway, if you wanted you could use Nerri with the sedative ability, I don't mind ^^
edit: Read that Rai already has that one, maybe healing?
quadraptor's picture

This is the last of five

This is the last of five stories I've written, basically in the previous stories you find out that the deer of the Endless Forest are granted unique powers, and there's an evil infectious stoat running around trying to take over the world, so we gotta stop her! Eye

Here's the link to the first four stories. I need to update it with this one.

Eventually I plan to publish these and have hardcopies of them available.

Actually the sedative ability has not been taken yet. I'll put Nerri down for it.


silverdragon's picture

why haven't i seen this

Shocked why haven't i seen this before?
you can use Raffles with Weak Abiogenesis (because that's the last one ? XD)

if you want to...

edit: hang on my eyes are playing tricks on me, i now see more that haven't been taken so you can change it if you like
Zeekii's picture

Oh neat, sounds very

Oh neat, sounds very interesting. I shall definately start reading them xD
Thanks for putting Nerri on it too Smiling
Tally's picture

If you would like Tally

If you would like Tally could have the bubble protection thing and she would like to be on the team with Envy please. Sticking out tongue

I have not read them but i will regardless of if shes in them or not. <3

xD Whoops I guess Raimundo

xD
Whoops I guess Raimundo will have to be Super Strength then (8
( I commented quite a while back about the sleep ability xD )
This looks awesome 8D
Zeekii's picture

Yeah, I commented about

Yeah, I commented about that. Raimundo can have the sleep ability if you want him too, that's why I edited my first post because I noticed you had already taken it Sticking out tongue
I thought of one for Nerri now lol, could she have enhanced hearing? Like hearing things from miles around? Seeing as I think it's only fair Raimundo gets to have the sleeping ability. Star commented way before I did XD

I don't mind Zeekii (8 Super

I don't mind Zeekii (8
Super Strength is cool too and I don't want to bother Quad 8D
You can keep the sleep ability if you want Smiling
quadraptor's picture

OCRAP! I didn't see yours

OCRAP! I didn't see yours there StarBright! I'm so sorry!

Hang on, i'll figure this out...

Edit - Fixed. I might open back up a few, maybe offer one more Light and one more Darkness or something.


Vira's picture

it seems I forgot the link

it seems I forgot the link to envy's bio, sorry about that D:
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Awesome. I would like to

Awesome. I would like to volunteer Heroine with a power i stole from legend of the seeker myself. Confessing. If she touches someoen and releases her power they fall under her control...and in love with her, they also can't lie to her.


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quadraptor's picture

Oh I can totally use a deer

Oh I can totally use a deer with that ability! I have a great idea for it, too! Thanks!


quadraptor's picture

Hey what would you guys

Hey what would you guys think about there being an alternate ending to this story? I'll have one ending that is the definite (real) ending, but then have an alternate ending just for fun (it's kind of inspired by Silent, I think she'd really like it Eye )


Pegasicorn's picture

If no one else signs up, and

If no one else signs up, and I'm allowed to put a third in, could Bastilion perhaps have Super Strength and be on the red team? He could keep Darkweaver under control if he gets a bit insane. XD;

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Pega's Forest Philosophy: "Look for Friends. Let Love find you."
"If you don't like something, tolerate it."
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Done

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XD; Awesome. --- The

XD; Awesome.

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Pega's Forest Philosophy: "Look for Friends. Let Love find you."
"If you don't like something, tolerate it."