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The Deer Who Yearned To Be a Bird

Chapter 1: Vacancy

“Boy, come here.” The old doe called to her fawn. The little calf had been staring at the grass for quite some time now. He watched the blades solemnly rock back and forth with open mouthed curiosity. At his mother’s call he slowly moved his head up and walked towards her, occasionally missing a step. His face wore a dull smile, his eyes vacant.

The old doe had known since his birth that he would be different. His mind was not necessarily blank, but it carried a certain amount of emptiness that any one deer could note. She had been warned not to carry anymore children at her age. However, despite her divine properties, she was still an animal. An animal that, like any other, had to carry on the genetic code, no matter what the cost.

The calf was now lying next to her, nuzzling against her shaggy pelt for warmth. Unlike many fawns, he was born with whitish pelt tinted with pale brown. The cream coloured deer looked at his mother with longing, trusting eyes.

“Who will care for him when I’m gone?” his mother thought with a sudden jolt of fear. She was getting to be quite elderly now. Casting spells had become more than tiring; it had become life-threatening. She knew her time was coming to a close. The fawn had already started to sprout little nubs for antlers, yet he continued to act as a newborn would. He was now staring up at the sky, watching two bluebirds circle overhead.

“Perhaps I’ll live long enough. I hope I do.” And with that fleeting thought the old doe went to sleep.

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Yes, I know, I've only just started yesterday. Oh well. I felt like writing. I'm not very good at it, but I felt like it. I hope doing this will help me to improve.

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short stories

Saosin sat next to me and shivered. I couldn't tell exactly what he was shivering about, but I could sense the nearby wolves. that was probably the reason why he was sooo afraid. The wolves were raging throughout the forest. thier red eyes gleaming through the darkness. the next second I closed my eyes, saosin was gone. At first I thought I was just dreaming, but then it really happened. I saw myrfor standing right in front of me, his red eyes gleaming in hunger. my bones felt cold under the sweat of fear. Instead of running, I had someone to thank. that would be hakilu. He saved my life from joaro once, but now I had to return the favor. myrfor had been chasing hakilu for a long time. I had to kill myrfor. so I got up on my hind legs and snapped him in the face. He took two seconds to recover and I lashed at him again, but he dodged me and grouled. His eyes froze me and I couldn't move. before I knew it he lashed at me, but the only thing I saw was blood dribbling down my side. changed my ways and stood next to myrfor. He looked at me like I was crazy, and scrached me cold. I lie on my side and wait for my death but then I was healed and looked throught the shadows. I felt so weak a moment before when myrfor was here but now I was strong again as I waited for saosin to come back I saw kaori. She told me saosin had been with hakilu the whole time I was here. I stood and still could tell she was lying because she always twitched her nose when she lied. I didn't tell her that she was lying and stood and waited for saosin. He then came around the corner of the great ruins and said," you have saved us all from myrfor, you shall be praised." of course I wasn't looking for thanks but he still bowed to me anyway as a piont of graditude. I have much to be thankful for after that day, but I will always remember that battle with myrfor and the heart of the ruins.
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A Memory. #2

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Seed's Story: In Which The Story Concludes

The Index
Chapter 6: In Which Community Aid Is Called For


Seed's Story, Chapter 7: In Which The Story Concludes


Seed listened. As he wandered through the trees, he saw things, flickering at the edge of his vision – a heart hanging from a tree branch, hoofprints in the invisible ground. And voices – not the voices of the trees, but whispers that were carried on a substance sweeter and finer than air.

“You were the joyful reason…” “From a seed to a tree; a fawn to a stag..” “And now I dun' have mom and dad, I need you,” they whispered, they entreated, trickling in at first like a light summer shower.

He turned away from the trees he was looking at and went to look over another section. But something in this riddle wasn’t right.

“…and I hope to know you well enough one day to call you a friend.” "Where are you, Seed?" “I can't even imagine a forest without him." “He creates life as if he was a god himself! Not real life, I mean.. it's in my mind.” These trees, thin and dull, the flowers mere flowers, the bark mere bark – it kept out the rain and insects. It didn’t shield friends or hide a heart. He looked away – he had an idea…

“Seed eyes see lots what others can’t,” the voices said. They felt like strong touches, like a pressing wind that guided him down a single path. “I k-k-know you as a w-wonderfull p-poet, a t-t-talented stag.." [=#458B00] “Oh but only a day ago we had relished in one anothers company.
Sonata's picture

Monster

Cut warnings;
Blood
Nameless fawn death

Greetings

Hello! I'm new here, very new. So there's little I do understand about this game and also I have problems.
Questions:
1) When do I "level up" so I'll look like a big "deer"? Also, there are severla players, having masks, different colours etc. How do I get that?
2) My "name"/symbol that is supposed to be over the head of my character, is no showing. Why?

I've looked in the FAQ and nothing shows up.

Anyone who can answer this?
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21 woke up

    "... my goodness!"
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hey mackezie!

I am so happy that you are my bestest friend! Then I wouldn't be able to play the endless forest because I wouldn't know about it! I wouldn't be able to draw deer as well as you do. although you have mess up pictures(a lot of them) I thought they were really funny because sometimes you would just draw the deer's butte and move on to another deer. I also thought that it was funny when alexa was doing the YMCA dance to the song and then when she jumped up, she farted! It was just like "jump toot". That was sooooo funny! We must have went on about it the whole rest of the day! I mean, it was sooooo funny. Uggh...holden just farted...nasty! I'm really excited about you coming over today. I can't wait to show you how good I sing!
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Seed's Story: In Which Community Aid Is Called For. [No, Really, Community Aid Timez! Please help!]

The Index
Chapter 5: In Which Seed Meets His Shadow

Seed's Story, Chapter 6: In Which Community Aid Is Called For


Seed could feel his body changing, the knots of his muscles become the grain or green wood. He didn’t care. All he could think as he listened to his own voice writing his faults into the clear night air, pounding him with all the things he had always worried were true, was
Please…Payton, Twin Gods, Anyone… Help me.
He opened his eyes into the darkness.

A poppy fell very slowly from the heaven, light as a feather. The wind caught it and cradled it in its arm. Even in the dark night, it was blindingly red – the sweet red of a rising sun, or clouds at sunset. It was the red of a tongue, or lips ready to kiss. The petals were soft and thin, lit by a light from within so each thing vein glowed. Seed didn’t know how to interpret it – poppies had always been flowers of hope to him, hope and first love, new life, sweet kisses. But poppies, as he always said, were funeral flowers – the death of hope, the end of life – for funerals and ghosts. Poppies were the flowers of dreams, the younger brother of death. As it fell, teetering this way and that, he couldn’t decide what it meant that it was.

As it reached the ground, it exploded into a bomb of poppy stalks, into a circle of red light that banished all the shadows and made the forest lit by day once more. Standing there were two great deer, one delicate and red, one masculine and gold, but somehow also exactly one deer larger than either.

“You have called,” said The Red. “We have answered,” said The Gold.

“What is this?” “what?” “what?” The trees chorused in surprise.
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