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The Deer Who Yearned To Be a Bird - Part Four

Chapter Four: Plots

“Coom on, ye daft munkin’, geet a move on!” Credit squawked into the fawn’s ear. The fawn had been, naturally, fairly reluctant to leave behind his mother. Wouldn’t she be worried? Wouldn’t she fret over him? Well, these questions didn’t plague the fawn’s head. He was more preoccupied with his fear of the strange birds leading him deeper into the woods.

The trio traveled on for about an hour before they stopped at nearby spring. The little fawn dunked his head into the water and opened his mouth, periodically raising his head to breath, of course. Twas the only sensible thing to do, after all. The two crows hopped about scouring the grass for insects.

“Oi, Debit, yoo sure about this?” Credit whispered to his white-tipped comrade. Debit nodded his head, “Aye, the wee hinny asn’t even got a name, and-“ he quickly stopped and shot his beak into the ground, retrieving a small, repulsive creature. He swallowed it whole. Credit respectfully waited until he was finished, and asked, “D’ye think Master Bartleby weel like im’?” Debit just looked at him and said, quite frankly, “What d’ye think, ye bluidy fyeul? Les’ keep goin’ or I’ll blaa yer lugs off!”

And with that, the two crows grabbed onto the poor fawn and led him onward. The crows thought of how much their master would enjoy this new arrival, while the soon-to-be-dubbed Turkey just watched the birds in the sky.

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Sorry for the shortness, and hooray for more bad/inconsistant accents! Wait, shouldn't I be working on that challenge? I should, shouldn't I? Aw well, might as well get to that...

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The history of Alaska (Alaska's story)

you didn't think I would post it HERE did you? when it's already been written up and I've already posted it? (link below)
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2 a.m

'Why am I still awake?'

Can't stop thinking about her, can't stop.
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The Deer Who Yearned To Be a Bird - Part Three

Chapter Three – Twins

The little fawn began to notice the decay around the early evening when he woke. He studied a cloud of flies quite intently as they buzzed and flew over his mother. He didn’t bother to stop them, they were simply too fascinating to resist. Besides, it’s wasn’t like his mother didn’t mind their company.

After a few hours of staring at the dense black cloud of tiny scavengers, the small fawn heard the raspy call of a crow only inches behind him. He screamed in surprise and looped around face to face with not one, but two crows perched on separate branches. One had white wing tips, an oddity among the species, but the other had an even stranger likeness, a white beak.

“Assa! By, this little fyeul is hangin’ around the hause with this ol’ dead hinny, eh Debit?” The white-beaked one said. He was speaking in such an old form of language that the fawn didn’t even to begin to comprehend it. He merely took it as disorganized jibberish. The crow with the white-tipped wings pecked his companion and chided, “Ah, haddaway Credit! Be nice to the young hinny. He don’t look much canny by the looks of him.”

Perhaps we should detour away from our story to briefly talk of these two. Debit and Credit were born in a nest not far from the old oak. They were the last surviving nest mates and unlike other crows who simply went their solitary ways. When they flew off they decided to become companions and travel about together. Their story is rather dull, yes? So with that let’s continue with our orphan fawn.

“Ah, bluidy el’ Debit, Les joost geet on, ya?” the brash Credit sighed. “Hoo ‘bout w’ take the hinny with us?” Debit asked his brother, a sudden gleam in his eye. “The poor little bastard… it’s almost neet. Let’s take him, Credit.” Debit flew down from his branch and perched himself on one of the fawn’s little nubs of antler. Credit said nothing more but swooped down to follow and grabbed the fawn’s ear with his talon’s tightly.

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I f O n l y

"I'm not seeking it, but I wish it would find me..." -Xeoduz's thoughts on love...- (read more)

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At Last, an Important Question.

They had met for the day only just then – but at the same time, each in their own world, they had chased after one another until that point – where at last, Nevilly realized he had been standing there all the while. They settled down next to one another.

Seed shook his head and chuckled. “Well, that was an interesting way to start the day. “

““Hnngh, sorry if I'm acting a bit weird. I'm just tired, that's all,” Nevilly said as she leaned against him.

“I've seen odder things happen. But...seeing you there, not noticing me, not responding to me...seeing a path you could take where I wasn't in it...Made me certain of something I've been thinking over.”

“I guess I've lately just become a bit numb to things around me. This will pass when I can finally relax and just do nothing.” She glanced up and saw the expression on his face – it was an omen difficult to read, like a cloud that could bring shade or rain. “Hmm? What have you been thinking, then?”

“Well, what I realized was...I don't ever want to go down that path. I couldn't bear to live in a world where I didn't see your eyes lighting up like the summer sky on a sunny day, a world where whatever meager offerings of pretty words I have wouldn't still manage to make you smile, a world where I could think of my life..and not have you in it.” Like always, when the words took control of his mouth, the trouble on his brow melted away, and his mouth shaped the words with a faint smile. “I don't think I can ever love anyone again, after you... and I want your life to be my life, your joy my joy, your pain my pain.” He paused and let the furrow return to its place on his forhead, let the weight of what he was saying – what he was about to say – take over for him.
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The Deer Who Yearned To Be a Bird - Part Two

Chapter 2: Stiffness

The end was coming. The old doe knew this. She finally came to realize with a sickening fear that her child would never really ‘grow up’. No matter how old he was, his mind would be the same. Sure she knew this deep down, but she had continued to latch onto the idea that someone would always be there for her child. Of course that was merely wishful thinking. She was now accepting fate. She knew now that when she died, her fawn would die alongside her.

She had to teach him. She didn’t care if it was fruitless. She didn’t care if he would not understand. She had to at least try and teach him the ways of the forest.

The lessons didn’t last long. The fawn would only scamper along on unsteady legs and gaze at his mother with adoring eyes, eyes that showed no sense of comprehension.

The old doe, after many days and hours of lessons, finally lost hope. Her joints were hurting more than what they already did, and her breathing more labored. “It’s almost here…” she would constantly, almost obsessively think. As all living things do, she concentrated only on the pain, and the sweet embrace of death that laid itself before her.

One morning, the fawn awoke and looked at his mother’s face. Her eyes were open and glazed over, and the fawn thought this quite peculiar, but paid no considerable mind to it. Perhaps it was too early for them to wake. Slowly, he lowered his head down and nestled it against the stiffening body of his mother, oblivious of the likely fate that awaited him.

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Yeah, a day after. Updates for have always been pretty irregular. So don't expect a timetable. I just write when it comes.

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Interactions/forum roleplay with Blukii

I decided this will be an interaction blog thingy just for Blukii. It will be a lot cleaner and easier for me to keep up with. I want to get some experience doing forum roleplays, but the freakin' writer's block keeps getting in my way. I may start off with just my characters speaking, and little descriptive words until I get the hang of this.
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