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Seed's Story: In Which Seed Meets His Shadow

((Yeah, I know. Two parts in one day. But I wrote this story almost just to write this.))

The Index
Chapter 4: In Which We See That While Squirrels May Be Evil, Butterflies Are Usually Lawful Good.

Seed's Story, Chapter 5: In Which Seed Meets His Shadow


As Seed climbed the Twin God’s Hill, the sun set behind him. His shadow walked ahead of him as if it were checking the hill for pitfalls. The light bathed the world in changing colors – it had been red a little while ago, but had since shifted to mauve, making everything it touched a little darker. The Hill seemed much bigger, climbing it in this place, this land-before-lands. It felt like a mountain, disguised as a hill and covered in tall plants with big leaves. As he walked, those plants broke up his shadow into a thousand little fragments.

The trees around him rustled, “You’re getting slower. You cannot make it.” “Cannot.” “Cannot.”

He picked up his hooves in defiance, moving into a quicker trot. “I. am going. Home. Whether you like it, or not.”

“Home? Where’s that?” A voice came out of the earth – a rustling voice, but also a real one. It had a somewhat sad air to it – an older deer’s voice, though not an old one’s yet. It had the gentle sounds of a whistling mask mixed in – and it dawned on Seed that the voice he was hearing was his own, coming from his shadows and the trees.

“It’s where my friends are,” Seed answered, looking down. He had always been a little obsessed with light and shadow, the same way as he was obsessed with greenery.
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Seed's Story: In Which We See That While Squirrels May Be Evil, Butterflies Are Usually Lawful Good.

The Index
Chapter 3: In Which Seed Forgets His Greek Mythology, With Unfortunate Results

Seed's Story, Chapter 4: In Which We See That While Squirrels May Be Evil, Butterflies Are Usually Lawful Good.


“Why are you doing this?” In her stillness, The Oak knew many things. Her branches were as wide as the sky, and through them, she saw the world. So she turned to her fellow trees, who had once, every last one of them, been acorns on her branches, and asked. “What on earth do you hope to gain from the little thing?”

“We want to gain nothing.” “We want to gain.” “To Gain.” “To Gain.”

“Cut the bull.” The Oak stared them all down. “What do you want him for?”

“Want him? What makes you think,” said the trees with an innocent tone, “that we want him?” “Want him.” “Want him.” “Want!”

“Your back-up singers are singing a different tune,” she said, matter-of-factly. “Tell me. Is it to start sapping all the deer from the forest? Or is he some sort of funky tree messiah? Stop me if I’m getting close.”

In the distance, the Oak could hear the trickling river and the croaking of frogs. There wasn’t even the sound of real rustling, the wind moving through the trees. They were silent and still as stone. No leaves fell in the forest, for a second; no flowers, either.

“We want…to know,” they whispered, in truly perfect unison. “We want to know his life. To know doing. To know running, and soft touches of friends. What we are missing.”

The oak struggled for something to say to that. She knew those longings – how could she not, watching deer move in and out of her, cuddling close in the rain, dancing around her? They were so pretty and bright, like little stars.
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This was so completly randommmmm~ :3

Read moarz ;-;
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Seed's Story: In Which I've Assembled an Index

This is an official index of my ongoing story, Seed's story. I am not very good at thinking up titles. This will eventually include all chapters and other required reading, and if there's any illustrations or other related stuff, I'll put it here, too:
Oh, and Commentary, now that the story's over. Skip over the italics if this is your first read-through, I'd advise.

[center]Before You Get Started: Required Reading

A Forest Fairytale
Seed's backstory, in fairytale format. Since this story is all about the consequences of his backstory, and working through the issues of identity and home that this creates, it is essential that you have a rough idea of the story.

Prologues

The Near Prologue
Note that this prologue was written over a year before the rest of the story; as a result, it's only vaguely connected. The only skippable part.
Despite being skippable, I don't cringe...much... when I read this. It sets up the basic conflict of the story pretty well. I only went and called it "the near prologue" after writing the "distant" one. I abandoned it for over year because I didn't know where to go. The basic steps were the same -- I knew I wanted Seed to go outside the ordinary bounds of the Forest, but from there...eh?

The Distant Prologue
[i]This is one of the three chapters for which I wrote this entire story: I nearly did it as a comic, but decided against it a while back. This is much cooler anyway, right? ...yeah, right. Still, I like the idea of deer having to pick their names out from the void. I deliberately withheld the answer here so the answer to the question in the penultimate chapter would still be a little surprise -- but not too much of one.
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Seed's Story: In Which Seed Forgets His Greek Mythology, With Unfortunate Results

Chapter 2: In Which Resistance Is Futile

Seed's Story, Chapter 3: In Which Seed Forgets His Greek Mythology, With Unfortunate Results



He had been walking for what felt like forever; the trees hadn’t tried talking to him again. The Oldest Forest was as lovely as he remembered it. Like the forests where deer wandered, it always seemed to be Spring here. Only someone making careful observation, only someone dreaming slowly, could see the difference. So here, the trees were always soaked in white blooms that drifted in front of his face as he walked like snowflakes falling around him. In the places where the light shone red and the flowers stopped falling, it felt like autumn; in the places where the blooms were too high up to see, it was summer. But Spring was everywhere, tangible as air.

If he weren’t trapped against his will and lost, Seed would have been awestruck by it, even after the near eternity he had spent there, once. His neck hurt, his head felt heavy. He walked with blocks of ice for legs, not bending so much as folding to let him fall, and then catching him before he hit the ground. Somehow, this moved him along. His golden eyes vanished behind his heavy lids, as he struggled to stay on a side of conciousness. He had to stay awake, awake until he reached home. He kept repeating that idea in his head. Then he heard a rustling – not the trees speaking, but something moving in the bushes. His ears perked up as he turned his head.

“Why, hello there, Mister. I haven’t seen the like of you before,” a little voice said. Out of the bushes emerged a little brown squirrel with bright green eyes the color of spring leaves. “What are you supposed to be?”

“I’m a deer…I’m lost, actually. I don’t live in this…place,” he finished, lamely.
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What is it...

"to be human?"
Is it the shape of one's body?
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Armageddon-I stand ALONE.

First off, if you don't like gore, don't click read more. (Heheh..rhymes.)
Second off, If you do like gore, do click read more.
RATED PG-13. No cursing or junk, just blood, gore, and all things evil and disgusting. So thanks. :3
And by the way, this is human-ized deer, meaning they are two-legged and speak and can move and do most things humans can.
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