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Children Dream - and you are of no exception

Just a... Idon'tknwowhat x3

Seven Tines

Little one, why are you cying?
Can you not wait until you've grown?
You will have your sprawling antlers soon,
I promise you little fawn.
If you can tell me why you want them,
I will give them here to you.
But antlers are not just yours you see...
The seven tines belong to all of us.

The first is the center that supports all the rest.
It belonged to the fawn that stood on shaking legs.
The weak thing that could stare nothing in the face,
and whose mother stayed always, close at its side

The second is the guard that rises close to the skull.
It belonged to the weaned fawn, stronger on his legs,
chasing birds and butterflies.
The foolish little figure that disobeyed its mother
and stole the shoots from under her snout.
Easy prey for the eagle.

The third is the first inward facing tine.
It belonged to the buck, leaping with all
his vigor..
He that is challenging his elders for
hierachy and strength.
His mother comes to comfort him, when the
leader hurts his pride.

After this is the second inward tine.
It belonged to the young stag.
He whose hide shone like a raven's feathers,
and whole musk covered every tree.
His mother watches him go away
Forced by the leader, by age, by time
He will not see her alive again
Entering the new world alone

The fifth is the last inward tine.
It belonged to the hearty old stag
The scars on his body tell a long tale
He searches for company
A herd that is his own
But time pushes him back on himself
He fights but gains no glory
In ceaseless battle, he wins but one
A doe much angered and confused, he has
Impatient and unmoved, she is
But there is only warmth in company here
and the winter passes smoothly

The sixth tine sprouts outward and carrys but one more.

So much for a new year...

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Pierce's Story

This is the story of my deer, Peirce.



The forest was eerily quite. Only the chirping of birds can be heard. Peirce the fawn loved to play in the forest, run in the meadows, chase butterflies, and play with other fawns. This day he had been so excited to play that right when he woke up he ran deep into the forest while his mother was asleep. But after waiting for the sound of a deer running though the woods, or to see a deer run around, Peirce could not see or hear anything but birds. The fawn did not know why no deer came out today, so he sighed and headed back. He wanted to see his mother on this silent day. Peirce stopped. He thought he had heard something. For a moment the fawn stood, waiting for anymore signs of something there, but the sound didn't come again. So Peirce kept walking back, when he heard the sound of a deer's hooves pounding the ground. A deer! Which was his mother when he saw the doe run towards him. "Peirce! What are you doing? Get to safety NOW!!" The mother yelled. Peirce tilted his head in confusion.
CRACK!
"Follow me!"
CRACK!
Peirce followed his mother, unaware of what was happening. The fawn heard another crack, and saw his mother's right hind leg bleeding. "Run, Peirce! Run!"
Peirce ran as fast as he could. As he ran he heard two more cracks, no following cracks afterward. But he still ran, as his mother said so. Peirce kept running until he found a little spot surrounded with bushes, flowers and rocks.
The fawn waited for his mother.
Peirce waited for hours. Soon it started raining. Peirce usually liked the feeling of cool, wet rain droplets falling down his back, but this time he didn't. He had waited for his mother for a long time, and he rather would be rained on with his mother. And he waited... and waited...


Peirce could hear the sound of his own hooves clopping the ground. Why did a fool like him wait so long? The fawn must find his mother. Or maybe his mother was looking for him.
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You're gonna catch a cold from the ice inside your soul

A man sat on the bench of a park, it was dark; about an hour or two past midnight, and clouds had hidden the moon and stars, save for a few rare patches in the sky were a few isolated stars shone with cold pinpoint light.
The grounds were empty. Completely deserted and still, as if untouchable by time.
Of course the ground were empty, it was freezing. Ice had glazed over the white snow which had fallen earlier. No grass was visible, the trees were stripped, vulnerable to the wind which whipped at their bark. You could hear them wail and cry as the wind rushed through the limbs of the trees.

On this cold wooden bench the man sat alone, he was crying.
Hot tears roll down his cheeks, they sting his eyes, they stain his face, they drip down his chin onto his lap.
Gloved fingers clutching pale blond hair.
His body heaves and shudders with his breathing.
He hunches over, cradling his head in his hands.
Why was he crying, he asked this to himself every time.
For nothing.
And absolutely everything.
Everything brought together and delivered in one upheaval of emotion. So many things at once that one single reason would not explain a fraction of it.
His lungs convulsed, and he choked as he struggled to take in air, unable to catch his breath.

It continued for a while.
It continued until he was subdued to nothing more than a few whimpers, as a few more burning tears crawled down his face, and his hands lay numbly in his lap.
His face was flushed, his eyes were drained to a dull shade.
He lifted the bottle from the ground next to him and took a few sips. He didn't have the energy to drink more, and dropped it into the crackling ice covered snow.

He turned himself to lay on his back, knees bent so he could fit on the bench. His face was towards the sky but his eyes were closed. The cold air froze against his slowly drying skin.
He was breathing.

Walking on water. Day #1 Try#122

Alright! This is my chance to be good at something in forest while I'm still a fawn! Here we go.

Day: 1 First day of practice on walking on water. I can do this no problem.. just give me a few minutes and I'll have this mastered in no time!

Try#: 122

...Title?

What's a title used for..? How do you get one?

[ prophet;innuendo;rum;IorderyoutoAWAKEN]


'Dear God,

I believe I have found your kingdom.

Yours,
Prophet.'


[ it started with the blood of literacy ; incomplete ]

[=10]
It was a rainy night, you know. I still remember looking out at the windowpanes and seeing great droplets of water committing suicide, ending their lives as they had been forced to do. I remember taking one moment as a photograph in my head and keeping it for a while, my reflection looking tired and impatient in the window. I recall the sky that night, black clouds billowing and draping upwards to the velveteen abyss that hung above the rest of the world and I, the pale moon a signal, a mournful warning. I knew it would not be long until my fate was decided.
What you must know about me and the others is that our world is just like yours. Exactly the same, in fact, but the main difference is that in our world, black magic runs amok, white magic is scarce to come by, and our royalty is rather old-fashioned and traditional...at least, it was back then. I believe there have been stories written before about this world - something about a man that worked in a theatre, two friends united then lost, never to remember eachother, nightmares...Part of a dream I had, you know - but in my world, people call my dreams prophecies.
My name is, appropriately, Prophet. I have been a poet all my life and I hope to continue that, with or without my prophetical abilities. But I must be silent about my current state, for a little while.

As I said, it was a rainy night when they came for me. The guards took me, one for each arm, and they half-led, half-dragged me down the stone-walled corridor. I wasn't struggling. I was just too tired to try and walk properly. Prison food is not pleasant and as far as I know it never has been, not here. I closed my eyes as they dragged me, and I tried to summon the poet inside me, the one that I had been known as - but he would not surface. I felt hollow. I felt cold, inside and out. I felt dead already. And I felt even more extinct as I eventually looked up into the stone-cold eyes of the king of our time.
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