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KybaWhiteWolf's picture

Hi everyone!

Hello there pals!! As you can see I'm new in this game....but actually, I was here to ask you a question, well, three:
1- Is there a page or somethin' that you can choose how your deer (or fawn) will look like in the game? (if there is such a page, can you give the link to me please?)
2- Is there a way to keep the white pelt on?
3- Can you add friends in the game or just here?

Please answer!! Laughing out loud
See ya then, BYE!
BluedeerLegend18's picture

A Bead and A Feather

When the wind blew, the orange and yellow leaves flew with it. And when they landed, they made a rustling sound, the drum beats of August. But this drum beat was broken, as a new drum beat echoed throughout the golden forest. The nearby Frotchah tribe was dancing and celebrating the birth- a special birth.

And so were the other Frotchah tribes. They danced and celebrated, the drum beats beating though the forest.

And, in a castle, a beautiful castle where the King and Queen lived, the special birth was happening. King Malik looked out the window. He could still hear the drum beats and dancing and celebration. Then he looked around, at all the stained glass. And soon, two little ones will be walking around this castle, looking at all this beautiful glass.

Malik looked up, where a big stained glass window looked down. It showed a purple dragon and a Frotchah, but instead of fighting they were peaceful, and sat down together.

Malik came into the room where Queen Malika lied. She smiled, and pawed at two necklaces. Since they knew she would have twins, they made two necklances so they knew who was who until they were old enough to talk.

Malika lifted up her bushy tail to reveal two squealing female newborn fawns. Malik and Malika smiled, as they squealed playfully.

Malika looked at the two necklaces. One had a bead, the other a feather. She picked up the one with the bead and placed it around one of the fawn's head. "You are Jamirah, little girl." Jamirah squealed loudly as if she approved of the name. Malika took the one with the feather and put it around the other fawn's head. "And you are Lillian, young girl." Lillian didn't say anything, only sat around ignoring her sister.

"Can't you believe that one day, one of these little fawns will be the Queen of Frotaynar?" Malika looked up to Malik and smiled. He smiled back and nodded.
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Sword of the Samurai (Quad Human)

The monastery rose up high above the mountains, a pillar of exceptional craftsmanship while seeming to fit with the natural look of the land. It was as if the Buddha himself put it there for those outside to gaze in awe.

The Man in the White Kimono climbed the steps leading up to it. He had been traveling for a long time, and was not going to back down on his quest, despite admittedly being weary from travel. His sandals were worn nearly paper thin, and his clothes were stained and ripped from the journey. Clearly he would not look his best at the summit, but there was little he could do about that.

The air was colder with each step, and even near the top of the stairway leading up it began to snow just a little. He was finding his lungs feeling more heavy as the altitude affected his breaths as well. The higher he climbed, the harder it was to breathe.

He crawled at the very top. After the last steps, he took deep breaths and could not stand, remaining on his hands and knees as the altitude got to him.

He looked up to see someone standing there, offering him a small cup of cool water. The monk smiled as he accepted the cup and drank. "Welcome, I hope your stay will be pleasant.", he spoke. Standing, the man bowed and nodded, "The climb was certainly worth it.", he replied. The monk motioned for him to follow, and he did so.

"I take it you are here for the sword?", the monk asked him. "How did you know?", the man questioned in a curious tone. The monk lowered his head, "Most who come here are only interested in that weapon of death. We try to show them the light of taking a peaceful route, but they insist on claiming the sword. A few have dropped their violent paths for the life of a monk, but those who have come just for the sword take the test and leave empty-handed.

Turk Tales

This blog is a collection of short stories about my vulture character Turk, based on In Forest events as well as his experiences before entering The Forest. Stories are posted oldest to newest, for new stories please scroll to the bottom of the blog.
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4:00 AM (Shortstory)

It was 3:59 AM in a dark bedroom. A strange ambiance kept the room from staying silent. The tower fan at the foot of the bed blew gently, keeping the room cool and a comfortable current circulating. A wind chime nailed on the wall next to the bed was lightly sounding as the current moved past, making wooden clonks much like a shishiodo. A Native dreamcatcher also flutters above the bed, the feathers in the breeze as if they were moving all their own.

There he slept, covered in fleece blankets, some nights having strangely pleasant dreams, but this night he was haunted by a terrible nightmare he could not escape from. One arm dangled off the bed, he always seemed to fall asleep like this. Pressed against his back was a warm dachshund who dozed this night as well.

The clock changes to 4:00 AM, and a gust of unnatural wind blows through the room. The wind chime rattled loudly, the blankets and other things seemed to flow like waves in the ocean.

At the foot of the bed was a glowing specter, body fully white and glistening brightly in the darkness. Four beautiful wings outstretched and flowing in the strange wind.

And then the breeze died down, back to the simple flowing of the fan. The man and his dog remained asleep during this, though both were shivering now - not from the cold, but from the darkness.

The specter was a beautiful deer, his brown eyes filled with compassion and love. He approached the side of the bed and rubbed his white chest against the man's hand.

"That's quite enough, Iugulare. Let him go.", Quad's voice spoke in the near-silence. The stoat emerged from the bodies of both the man and dog, and looked up to the deer.

[=darkgrey]"He belongs to me.
BluedeerLegend18's picture

Into the Mists

WIP
Usernames's picture

~Never gonna leave this bed~

~.!.~
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Separated (Quad's short story)

There was supposed to be the song. That wonderful song they always sang. The high but wonderful notes in the sky, as they flew in the azure ceiling of the world. The azure blue always went beautifully with their bright red feathers.

But the song was not there this time. Only the eerie wind. He peeked out, looking for them.

Little did he know, him and his siblings were separated from their parents, forever.

He looked out at the beyond, the beyond he never saw or touched with his talons. He slowly climbed to the edge of the nest. The eerie wind blew though his unfledged body, giving him chills. Then... chirping. Where was it? Were they back? He turned around, but the song faded away, and they were not back. He slowly turned away and out of the beautiful forest that lay in front of him.

The song came back. He whipped his head back to see his siblings watch him fall, falling to the ground. He screeched, flapping his wings, but he fell, not flew. He landed, sending dust everywhere.

He was... alive. He was hurt from the fall, but he was alive. How did this happen? He was not supposed to fly until his feathers grew. But he fell. Not on accident or purpose.

Now, not only was he separated from his parents, he was now separated from his family.

He heard rattling. Why? Why instead of a song, he heard eerie wind and rattling? And now he heard a snarl, and teeth. Then another snarl, mixed with the sound of blood spilling. Pain. Blood. A hurt screech. Then the yelling. He closed his eyes. Would he die here? Would he never get to fly, to feel the wind blow though his feathers?

He opened. He saw no more teeth, he saw a creature, who looked down at his body. Blood, gushing out of his side. He whipped his head to look. He saw his unfledged body covered in blood, and his wing covered in blood, dangling from his body. He screeched in pain as the creature picked him up.

His wing, separated. Everything was separated.

Hours later, he awoke.
BluedeerLegend18's picture

"Stop! Go away!"

STOP! GO AWAY!

PLEASE!

The pain... hurts... so... bad...


Stop whining!

You are a rat! Stupid and ignorant, and not listening to anyone! You are selfish, you think everyone can like you with just one word, you think you can make the world a better place.

You are the Prince of Darkness. You are not my son. You bring dark into the world, you do it without knowing!

I... I don't know what you're talking about. I'm a deer. I AM A DEER!

No. You are a stupid child. Do you know why that zombie doe saved you? Because she doesn't understand you.

She should of left you alone, bleeding, deep in the pond, with the white sword stabbed in your heart. You should of died right there. But no, your zombie doe hero had to go save you.


He then sees a man, A king, with a golden crown. The king walks closer. He struggles. He can't move. The king grabs him by the neck, pulls his fur.

I will throw you off the cliffs of the universe, and watch you fall forever though hell's fires!

You are weak. You would burn into ashes with just one small, weak flame.

You are a pathetic animal.

That Zombie doe is even more stupid than you. She shouldn't of saved you. Idiot.

DON'T YOU DARE CALL VOICE A ZOMBIE! OR AN IDIOT! SHE IS NEITHER ONE OF THOSE! She is a nice, caring doe. I don't know why anyone would kill her.

...Why are you so protective of the zombie all of the sudden?

I...I...I...

You will fall down someday, all your blood will be spilled, and the world will be peaceful once again.


And everything disappeared, once again.
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A Bedtime Story Every Night [ MATURE WARNING ]

Heavily inspired by Eyestrain's art thread, I have decided to do something similar with stories. I do not expect it to catch on, but it's more for my own inspiration, forcing myself to write.

There are a few rules:

Anyone can post.
Whatever you post has to be written the day you post it; nothing old, please.
Stories only - they do not have to be huge, and they can even be unfinished, but no poetry, please.
All content welcome. Try to keep flat-out porn behind a link, but otherwise, everything is free game.
TEF or NON-TEF is welcome.
If you want critique on your story, please add a note at the end saying so. If no comment is left, please do not critique another's post. This isn't so much about 'who is the better writer'. It's about developing skill and getting inspiration going.

Mostly, it's about having fun.
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