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Snowsauria's picture

My aching hour

Under cut. (:
A follow up on this.

Hello?Hellooooooooooooo........?

Ever since my first posting i feel that TEF has been shunning me.......have i said something?done something wrong?deer also seem to laugh at my costume a lot i don,t know the name of my pelt or my antlers or my mask but i always liked them.someone tell me what i,ve done wrong!
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"Use it wisely..." (Quad Shortstory)

Hey guys, I hate to ask this but I need someone for Quad to use a new Grand Talux ability on. I've decided that he'll have a way to bring others back to life, so I wanted to ask if anyone would mind if I wrote one of their deer in getting killed. Please let me know what way you would prefer, too - I would assume for the more aggressive deer it could be a fatal wound in a fight with another stag; for a doe or a fawn maybe getting attacked and killed by one of the remaining rock hounds? Or if there is a specific way you'd like.

Anyway, Quad will have a new way to share his resurrection ability, but at a cost for each use. You'll see in the story. I'll start it once I have a volunteer, and thank you for the help.
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Life Begins Here - open RP

(If no one joins me, I will just keep adding to this and make it a story of sorts, but it is open, anyone can meet and join. And that means anyone, at any number of players, at any time. Smiling )

Her first thought upon waking isn't actually a thought at all, really. It's a vision (or maybe a memory, she can't much tell the difference anymore) of a deep roan pelt, the scent of poppies. She knows immediately that this is what her mother must have smelled like; knows that the flash of color in the back of her eyes is the color of her mother's fur, of the painted mask the doe wore. Will I look like her, someday? she catches herself wondering, but quickly shakes the thought, and the vision, off. Dis-remembers it. Un-remembers it. Erases it without truly forgetting. That's the way it always is.

The afternoon is harsh on her eyes, the sun hot and bright. Era pushes up on her front legs first, stretches from the front to the back, cat-like. She cannot complain too much about the heat, it's better than being forced to brave a heavy snowfall alone. And at least there is the pond to wash away the sunlight.

"Thank you for another blessed morning." she says with reverence, turning to face the Statues before bending, one leg forward and one knee bent, worshiping the way she's taught herself to do every day since the day she dis-remembered her mother.

She prays to see tomorrow. She sings the praises of the almighty God. When she is finished, she turns to face the pond where she sees several deer basking in the warmth of the afternoon, naked and happy. She remembers hearing about some sort of social cleansing taking place today and realizes she has slept through the festivities.

It matters not, she thinks, resolute, and begins her journey toward The Great Oak, where she hopes the gray stag she met the day before will be. The walk is lonely but peaceful. She listens to the leaves crunching beneath her little hooves, takes a moment to stop and smell the hyacinths.
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Dead can dance ( Mature warning )

EDIT 11/09; So sorry for bumping this old blog now, I just noticed a bunch of writing errors that was annoying me and I had to do something about them, please just ignore this. xD

Under cut. (:

Warning! Violence and gore. Read at your own risk!

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The Ninja's Curse (Quad Human)

Story I meant to write earlier and just never got around to, related to The Man in the White Kimono

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"Someone please help! I was just robbed!", a frantic woman ran down the village streets. She was in strange attire, it wasn't of the same culture as the others. Strange symbols dangled on her earrings, she wore an interesting golden crown upon her head and various bracelets and rings all resembling snakes and beetles. Her clothing was a tan color that robed her from the neck down. Her skin is more tan than normal.

The Man in the White Kimono was passing by when she approached him. "Please, sir! He took a family heirloom! It's irreplaceable!", she said to him.

"Calm down. Take a deep breath. Now, what can you tell me about them or what you lost?", the man asked, calmly.

"Well...it was a golden necklace with a scarab pendant made of turquoise. My family is Egyptian but we've been traveling for quite some time. My father was told the best fish were here, so that is why we came.", she spoke. "The man was small and bald-headed, he had a scar on one side of his neck. And he had an odd accent that was speaking to him."

The samurai nods. "That's all I need to know. Where can I find you if your necklace turns up?", he asks.

"There is a plaza down this road. I need to wait for my family as they have gone shopping for supplies, so I will be there. Thank you...", she speaks, and turns in the direction of the plaza.

The samurai continues on, his ears alert. He picks up fragments of conversations as he walks, of muggings, robberies, and theft recently in the area. Generally rare goods are stolen, things uncommon in this land.

While walking, he hears someone speaking to him.
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Trying my hand at poems.

omg, I'm really not good at these, but I wanted to post what I did up. If only for me, because maybe I'll stick them on bios or something. If you'd like a poem, Quad is/was offering some here. He's got amazing talent! I'm just doing some to brainstorm and possibly little gifts for friends.
I feel like my brain explodes doing poems.. haha

Feedback's encouraged.

Hoshiko #1
Little star, little star
Do you know how loved you are?
Dancing above in the sky
Like an angel upon high
Coming down to Earth to see
Only staying briefly
Whispy as a breath of air
Often no one sees you there
Little star, little star
Do you know how loved you are?



Hoshiko#2
A fawn
Marked like the stars
Light as the mist
Dances with the moon
On a starlit night
She touches the Earth
Only a silhouette formed
But loved more than life itself
A union of dark and light
She was a gift of love
Who faded too soon.
As soon as she comes she is gone
As quick as the shooting stars
She races across the evening sky
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The Art of Characterization

The Art of Characterization



Greetings, friendly forest friends! As some of you may have noticed or participated in, there has been a trend going about regarding users looking for opinions and critique of their characters. It was brought up to me that maybe an advice blog on characterization might be helpful. I will say that I am not the greatest writer in the world, but I shall try my best to provide a few tips and techniques when it come to creating, defining, and developing your character. New information may be added in the future if people request for additional help or if anyone wishes to add onto my existing list.

Let's begin. My lovely example tonight will be the newest addition to my little family, Cypher, since Shiori's art work deserves to be shown and he has been the character I have dedicated the most time to for development.

"Wait...This was never in my contract."

Get over it! Moving on!
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limbo

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!Language Warning!





BouncyDeer1's picture

Hugh?

Well sometimes when I have the Endless Forest in a window and I'm doing something else on the computer it makes my fawn stand up or listen or something that I didn't do.How do I stop this?Thanks for reading and please help me with this problem.
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