Rubies in the Pond [Discontinued]

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NOTICE:: Although I am taking my leave from the TEFc, I will be leaving this here.



All illustrations in my fanfiction are done by the fabulous Ephra.

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Prologue: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter One - Discovery: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Two - Crying Idols: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Three - Following Sorrow: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Four - All in a Night's Work: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Five - A Second Night's Work: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Six - The Heart of Me: Click!- Illustrated

Chapter Seven - The Morning After: Click! - Illustrated

Chapter Eight - Her Choice: Click!

Chapter Nine - Found: Click!

Chapter Ten - Chasing Dreams: Click!

Chapter Eleven - Rubies in the Pond: Click!


Chapter Twelve - Empathy Resonance:Click!


Chapter Thirteen - Link (Being Revised!)

- Zergarikiaka

Chapter Fourteen - Reunion (Planning Characters)

- Queze
- Yorres
- ???

Chapter Fifteen - Resolve(Planning Characters)

- Laruna
- Sorrel
- Spyrre
- R
- Tails
- ???

Ending Conclusion

*Needs characters.

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::NOTE::

I will be spreading out the rest of the characters in the various chapters, except for those whom are allocated special placements.

As you can see, I've been adding more chapter titles of what's to come. My writer's block finally gave way and I've figured a nice little plot to carry the story on with. The story will probably end at about fiften chapters max, and then I'll post this story onto a different website where people can read it. I have also added a conclusion too, since the story wouldn't end right if I left it at the last chapter

Slots are open for all. One character per player so far until I feel it's necessary to add alts. Characters maked like this are ones that have been accepted and given a place in the story.

1. Kaoori
2. Sorrel
3. Tails
4. Spyrre
5. Zergarikiaka
6. Queze
7. R
8. brd
9. Faunet
10. Umay
11. Yorres
12. Leeon
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jadine's picture

I would like to be in the

I would like to be in the story! if its ok
~TozowaComingSoon~
Ghost's picture

Hmmm, a very intriguing

Hmmm, a very intriguing story.

Is there room for a Ghost? *hint-hint* *gives a Joker-esque grin*
Emiva's picture

Emiva is volunteering to be

Emiva is volunteering to be in a chapter! She has a fresh spirit and personality, but is altogether loving and thoughtful. But her feelings get hurt easily, although she doesn't like to show them. She absolutely hates tattle-talers, and enjoys napping on the stone in the ruins.

Enough info already? sorry I'll shutup now >_<
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VERDY YOU ARE BLOODY AMAZING

VERDY YOU ARE BLOODY AMAZING HOMG
JFKSLGF I READ IT AND THEN WENT BACK AND READ IT AGAIN JGFLSPPHNEBKS587D8N

8U

I'm going to be a buttface and say if you wanted to you could squeak Trois in. :B He doesn't really fit in with the whole story though, now that I think about it lol 8U
Verdalas's picture

Can Trois be the superhero

Can Trois be the superhero who strips at the end and saves the day?
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Pepper Mint's picture

YES THAT SOUNDS PERFECT <3

YES THAT SOUNDS PERFECT

<3
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The next chapter will be

The next chapter will be released soon. I just gotta finish it before I go to college. xx;
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Her's picture

JFDKL YOU ADDED HER. [slides

JFDKL YOU ADDED HER.
[slides around in own chair and bites nails]

WHHHYYYY. D8
Alright well if you start losing viewers the minute you mention Her, it's my fault. :C <3
Verdalas's picture

Stop looking down on

Stop looking down on yourself, you silly goose. xD

I think that you'll make a wonderful contribution to my story! ^_^ Have a little faith in yourself.
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Her's picture

[feels all

[feels all glitteryshineshine] <3
Emiva's picture

This is great!!! Emiva

This is great!!! Emiva cannot wait!! She's doesnt have to be a main character, just a friend that tags along is fine with me, or someone they meet along the way Eye
Naryae's picture

I'm embarrassed that it took

I'm embarrassed that it took me this long to read your story, it totally amazing. After I read the prologue I was all "omg, wtf happened? Must read more!" <3 Your writing style is very good, it draws you in and it keeps you interested the entire time. I most certainly will be looking for new chapters now.

If you're still looking for extra deer to add, feel free to use Sqish, he's good for making fun of XD

-waits for next chapter-

*still stalking this post

*still stalking this post every day to see if there are new chapters* <3 8D

Also, feel free to throw my deer around anywhere whenever if you suddenly find yourself lacking XD ( But like a story this awesome will be lacking iunno o: )


*resumes poststalking*
Verdalas's picture

*PonderPonder* I never

*PonderPonder* I never thought about it, but I could use both Dim and Nem for chapter eleven! =O I'm glad you commented!
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Anzel's picture

Ooh, Anzel's gonna be in a

Ooh, Anzel's gonna be in a chapter, yay! *dances*

If you wonder why I haven't commented on any, it's because I'm very lazy and it takes me a while to make myself read something. I procrastinate...also, err...if I'm not in the mood to read something, it won't work.

I'll try and force myself to read after I die in my Pokemon game or get bored today :3

*squeaks with glee* XD

*squeaks with glee*


XD

BLOODY HELL VERDS, YOUR

BLOODY HELL VERDS, YOUR STORY IS AMAAZING
I come back from a trip to find FOUR CHAPTERS have been completed in my abscence, omgfdsd Shocked

buts srsly you're story is fabuloso in every way, I have no idea how you can write so many chapters and still keep it interesting and gripping! I laugh at how great it is compared to mine, my useless bit of writing only lasted two chapters until i couldn't think of anything interesting to put! Laughing out loud
-continues to stalk-
Her's picture

RENOJACK HAS GOT TO BE IN

RENOJACK HAS GOT TO BE IN THERE, MATE.
Verdalas's picture

Lol. This is srs story

Lol. This is srs story though! Renojack will make it sooo silly.
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Thanks for putting Magnet in

Thanks for putting Magnet in there too! =]

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The Dragonfly Deer's Biography
Bio of the Ruins Duo

AHHH I CANT WAIT FOR ZE NEXT

AHHH I CANT WAIT FOR ZE NEXT CHAPTUUUURRRR Laughing out loud

-- Dannii <3
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Verdy! You're keeping me up

Verdy! You're keeping me up late reading this! <3 <3 <3

Laughing out loud Keep writing! You've been commanded! {with love and admiration} ok?

| Deer | Art | More TwoEars |

*chokes over toast* I CANT

*chokes over toast* I CANT WAIT FOR IT. I CANNOT WAIT. ^____^ *goes hyper* SCHMOOOOOOOOO!

(random, o yes.)

Verd, I adore your writing <33333
I notice you plan to put Rutilus in chapterrrr..*checks* 10 Laughing out loud Thankyouness!
<3

-- Dannii <3
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Well, I'm in need of stags

Well, I'm in need of stags for chapter 10, and so any I have in the list will be going into it for now. xD
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XD I seeeeee. ;o Get your

XD I seeeeee.

;o Get your butt in the Forest. There's barely anyone on x33 Don't worry, I won't play as Rutilus if you come on (Unless you ask me to) X3

-- Dannii <3
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I'm afraid that, with

I'm afraid that, with Bittorrent running, I get the worst lag in the forest. I'm afraid I won't be able to play today or possibly tomorrow either.
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SilentOrosco's picture

Throw judgement in there if

Throw judgement in there if you want. He's not know very well but hey!

http://www.endlessforest.org/community/judgements-bio
Thsai's picture

Heyas! I just wanted to let

Heyas!
I just wanted to let you know that I would be honored if Thsai (even though he is a fawn, can you protray him as a buck?) would be in your story. I would also like to let you know that you have been bookmarked. Walter will be a part of a future chapter.
<3 Thsai
<3 Thsai
Utterly Derranged
Anzel's picture

If you ever need a

If you ever need a hyperactive little vampire deer, or a philosophical deer who ponders her meaning in the forest, you can use Vein or Painted Lady (taint for short) :3 You can pretend they're not like Anzel XD;
Verdalas's picture

No problem to you

No problem to you three.

Actually Anzel, question. Is Anzel male or female or genderless or what? xD
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Anzel's a doe :3 (her name

Anzel's a doe :3 (her name is anne-ZELL, just in case you say it as ANNE-zull, which sounds more masculine)
Verdalas's picture

I always pronounce it as

I always pronounce it as Anne-Zell anyway. xP Thanks.
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Anzel's picture

I found out that my bf and

I found out that my bf and his friend pronounced it the other way XD;
Tabithaaa's picture

x3, If you have space, could

x3, If you have space, could Tabii be in it again? I just LOVED the last one. It really did make my day. <3
Moosehoof's picture

Can I be in thhe story?

Can I be in thhe story? (Leeon = ME) This sounds fun!
Verdalas's picture

I do intend to bring back

I do intend to bring back Tabi anyway, along with Jen and possibly a few others. Eye
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The link to my bios is in my

The link to my bios is in my sig, haha. Didn't have that last time. XD
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Tabithaaa's picture

YAY. <33

YAY.
<33
Lyeekha's picture

D: Don't forget to come back

D: Don't forget to come back to it!
I have two TEF projects running at once, I need to drop one or I'll never do the comic. XD
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Verdalas's picture

I'm sure once my Oblivion

I'm sure once my Oblivion craze has subsided, I'll come running back to this project. x3
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Lacey's picture

I'd love to be in~ <33

I'd love to be in~ <33
Tuhka's picture

If there's any space, i

If there's any space, i would love to have Quammy included in your story Laughing out loud
phantomhelsing's picture

if you need anybody else,

if you need anybody else, even just to have them run by for 2 seconds, Atiq is up for it



I haven't gone insane......I've gone awesome.

*cant wait for the next

*cant wait for the next chapter* OwO

-- Dannii <3

Ammy or Shin? Maybe even my

Ammy or Shin? Maybe even my new Fawn 'Talla' only if you want at all xD
Lacey's picture

I wonder if Lacey gets

I wonder if Lacey gets killed off... *ponder, ponder* I wonder, I wonder. XD

SUSPENSE

You can put Zazvat in your

You can put Zazvat in your story ^^;

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Oh, my Twin God. -dies- Your

Oh, my Twin God. -dies- Your story is just... just... stunning. O.O You're such an awesome writer. *dies again*
And Ephra's gorgeous art is making everything just more INCREDIBLE. And yes, if there's already a full slot, my deer Flyra would love to be included. I'd feel so honoured. I love the parts I've already read of your story, and maybe she could join? <3
For a bio, click the mini-deer below, please. =) Thanks really much in advance, and I'm so excited to read more of your brillant story!


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Verdalas's picture

Sure thing. ^^ I need lots

Sure thing. ^^ I need lots of deer for the ending, although most will probably only have a brief mention. At the moment I'm looking for one or two more stags though, so bawwwgh!
Flyra's picture

Oh, kay. ^^ Maybe you can

Oh, kay. ^^ Maybe you can take one of my stags then? What personality should the stag have? Eye (Yeah, I have many ^.^)


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