"Holly on the Old Oak" development thread

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Heya, I had an idea but I wanted to see if anyone had any suggestions for it.

I'd kind of like to write a series of Christmas stories for you all. And if at all possible, I'd love to get a little community involvement on what kind of a theme for each, who should be in them, ect. I haven't decided about opening up character slots for all of them or if a few will be generic stories. I'd like these to be a gift to everyone anyway

So here's what I'd like if you guys don't mind answering a few questions. And if you want to 'agree' with anyone's responses, please do so - it'll help me decide what ideas are popular and such.

1 - What kind of a Christmas story should it be? What should it be about?
2 - Who should be in the story? Should it be generic animals? Should it involve specific TEF characters?
3 - Should there be a theme or moral to the story?
4 - Should the story be based on a popular Christmas song? And if so, which song?
5 - Lastly, what suggestions or ideas do you have?

I'm going to write twelve stories altogether, so any ideas are greatly appreciated.

I'm planning on writing a few now and posting them starting December 1st. Keep checking this for when I have character slots available for stories, too! They will be in bold below


I officially have 12 stories now. Thank you to everyone who came up with suggestions. I could use one or two more deer for the Night Before Christmas and Rudolph stories but otherwise I should be good on characters too.

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Ideas so far (striked out = I've gotten it written, but it won't be posted until December 1st or later, and ** = I started it but haven't finished yet) :

Quad - A deer walks in a dreary winter night, finding a town where Christmas lights seem to warm his spirit. A child in the town has a Christmas wish, and he hears it... *would be a generic deer story, non TEF*

Quad - What if a deer randomly found a Christmas ornament on a tree in the Endless Forest? What would they think? How would they react? Featuring Toukan, Cloud, and Aeis

Quad - A story where one of the most rejected/hated/lonely deer in the Endless Forest is shown some love by a total stranger.

Quad - What if the Endless Forest baddies had their own end-of-the-year party?

Terabetha - A story in the style of A Christmas Carol, with guest appearances from TEF ghost deer to play the roles of the different spirits, and a story where the main character learns an important seasonal lesson...
Characters taken - Scrooge (Verdy's Walter), Cratchit (ShimmyShimmy's Silence) Marley's Ghost (Zerg's Laghodessa), The Ghosts of Christmas Past (my Trunks), Present (CelticMystress' Mystress) and Future (Danny2610's The Creature), and Tiny Tim (Two's Caden)


Trigger - A 'Twas the Night Before Christmas' story where a Santa deer visits the Endless Forest, or perhaps...an Endless Forest deer doing Santa's job for him?

Eyestrain - A Rudolph-style TEF story.
Deer to be included so far - Chickenwhite's Raleigh, Zerg's Zergarikiaka, Pega's Scape, Ourania's Ourania, SnowSauria's Snow, CelesteLune's Celeste, Nix42's Deer (need info please), Vandettta's Tusse, and Halafax will be our 'Rudolph'


Eyestrain - A story inspired by the Carol of the Bells and featuring Brd.

PLK217 - A story inspired by Good King Wenceslas (Featuring Silun and Laruna)

Zerg - A Nativity Story (The three wise deer will probably be Mar Sart, Yorres, and Mystress, and Kaoori and Wesker will be our Mary and Joseph, with RedKora, Serendipity and Zephyr as 'shepherds')

Chickenwhite - A ghost story where a deer meets a strange fawn and shows them the Christmas spirit. Featuring Redd

Vandettta - A poem where the Endless Forest deer decorate a Christmas Tree
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If the bean soup doesn't get

If the bean soup doesn't get her to fly I don't know what will! Eye
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I've got a great idea for the

I've got a great idea for the story, so she will definitely be the Rudolph character!

Alright so yesterday I said I was going to get two stories done, but only did one. However, today I plan to either get the other one done (Eyestrain's Carol of the Bells story) or get Zerg's Nativity story done. I'm on a roll, got a lot of ideas so maybe even before December I can get all of them written and just bombard you guys with them all XD.

Also, I need to post this again - Two, which fawn of yours do you want to be Tiny Tim for the Christmas Carol story? If I don't get a response by the time I'm ready to write it, I'll just pick one that I think would fit, but it'll be Two's deer anyway.

One more thing, before I write the Christmas Carol story, I want to watch one of the movies to get a refresher on the story. I looked for the version where Patrick Stewart played Scrooge, but I couldn't find it at the store. I may try a different store and see if I can run into it, that was my favorite version of it.

Or I could just buy the animated one. I never saw it.

**On a side note, after looking up Patrick Stewart on IMDB, I didn't know he was the Great Prince in Bambi II as well as Emperor Uriel Septim VII in The Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion. I never knew!!**

I love that version of A

I love that version of A Christmas Carol!! It's the only one I care about, but I'd like to see the animated one this year, I'm sure Patrick Stewart's version will still rock. I watch it every year around Christmastime. Have you checked Amazon? It's soooo worth buying. And wow!! I didn't know that!! What an awesome voice actor, I couldn't even tell!!
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I ordered it off of eBay

I ordered it off of eBay today, so I should be getting it by Friday or later. Eye
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You can use Ourania for

You can use Ourania for anything....I don't have any ideas at the moment but I'll post again if I think of something Laughing out loud
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If you need any guest

If you need any guest appearances, let me know! I'm currently not creative enough to come up with a story myself. Christmas isn't my thing... ^^;
''A spark neglected makes a mighty fire."
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Hmm, you can drop my deer off

Hmm, you can drop my deer off in any story you want, I'm not picky. Oh and, I love your writing, keep up the gook work (:
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Awww, you featured Redd!

Awww, you featured Redd! *happ-dance of cheer-uppiness!*

I'm glad you liked the idea and could use it! And I'm sooo looking forward to reading what you made of it, it's like one of the best presents for Christmas in my eyes! >w<

Much love to you, Quad, you're possibly amazing! >w<
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Feel free to include

Feel free to include Serendipity in any of them, should he fit any roles ♥
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If you need any 'extras' or

If you need any 'extras' or more characters, feel free to use Sionnach if he seems fitting Smiling He could be the sweet fawn for the one story... or the lonely/rejected one if you'd wanna switch the deer for a fawn.

you're free to use any of my

you're free to use any of my deer~! 8D

and as for a story...
maybe something short and small and sweet, with the deer of TEF decorating a christmas tree.
They could add an ornament that represents them c:
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And the TEF twelve days of

And the TEF twelve days of christmas, for fun ='D
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Hey thanks for all of the

Hey thanks for all of the deer, guys! I got them listed and will get roles up soon (mostly need the deer for the Rudolph story but I could use some extras for the Nativity story too).

Vandettta - thanks for the idea! I might try to write it as a poem, but anyway I love the idea! And I got your TEF Twelve Days of Christmas listed on the Official Topic, it's a great addition XD

Bigcrow - I'm going to write that story now and feature your fawn. I decided to write it in a first-person view (where you, the reader, are the hated/rejected deer), but Sionnach is perfect for the role of the sweet fawn.

Gah I feel so bad, I keep wanting to write these but when I get to the time to write them, I'm so tired or unmotivated that I haven't. I know I have more than enough time to get these done but I would have liked to have gotten some more written already.

Maybe tonight...
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I just remembered about

I just remembered about something that can be used as an inspiration but I'm not sure.
How much do you want to make 'happy' Christmas stories?
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I think at the moment all of

I think at the moment all of the stories I'm writing are 'happy'. The first one, A Christmas Wish, is semi-happy, a little bittersweet I suppose. And the one I'm working on now, Christmas for a Monster, is kind of like A Christmas Carol where it starts off cold and depressing, and in the end it becomes a happy story.

I think I need one more idea for a story before I have 12, but even if I don't write what you had in mind, you could always write it and I'll be more than happy to include it on the list.
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Well, that was a reason I

Well, that was a reason I asked first - all seems to be happy at last.

This idea comes from a ballad by Karel Jaromír Erben - Stedry den (Chrismas day). And his work is based on the traditional folk stories (from the 19th century)
It is not as much about Christmas. It is more about superstitions around that time with basics in the old pagan customs and the consequences in the christian society. (sound quite serious...)

To the story: It starts more or less happily, two young girls having nothing good to do inside a small snow-covered cottage at the Christmas, so they go into a wood to a frozen pond, for one saying says, that at the midnight after Christmas Eve, they can see their future beloved man in the water.
The first one sees truly her future husband (Wenceslas, by the way Eye ) but the other one will see her own funeral.
The ending is in the cottage again, one year after, ant these two girls are missing. One is away with her husband, awaiting children. And the other one lays buried for three months already.
The point of this ballad is, that it is better to live in dark blissful not knowing than to learn your true future. As you see, there is nothing really happy in it and it is up to you, if you find this moral lesson welcomed. (Reading what I had just written makes me think, this probably won't be what you're looking for. Ehm.)

Here I found a film adaption even with English subtitles, the director changed the story a little bit though. At least to show you the atmosphere, if you are still interested.
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It's a nice idea for a story,

It's a nice idea for a story, but I'm not sure what I would do with it. I don't think I would have a whole lot of room to make it more TEF related. Sorry, I hope you don't mind if I don't write one based on that, but if you wrote something for it, I'd definitely read it.

Thank you for the suggestion though.

Little update - I wrote about half of Eyestrain's Carol of the Bells story. I'm a little stuck so I don't know what I want to do next. I know how to end it though XD

I actually just wrote Vandettta's poem (the last one suggested). I didn't mention her deer in it but it's supposed to be a general story for every Endless Forest deer.

...Well here, I'll give you one tiny excerpt from it, the first stanza. It's just a taste though, there are six stanzas in total Eye :

Let us gather around together
Beneath the Oaken tree
We shall sing about the weather
And how things came to be


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Started the Nativity story

Started the Nativity story today. I hope Kaoori doesn't mind that I made her kind of...well...in labor. So she snaps at Wesker a few times, the poor guy Eye

Also I had another idea for a story...what about a Christmas story for the 'evil' TEF characters? I might make it a surprise story for certain characters, it would most likely feature the following evilees:

My Deadly Trio (Iugulare, Anirapio, and Nekumbra)
Anyajog
The Collector
Darkweaver
Glow
Jorogumo
Lucyfer
Vilnius
Sinker
Anyone else you guys feel definitely needs to be at an evil-deer convention Eye

...yeah, I think I'm going to write this, at least for some humor.
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ROFL omg. I think it'll be

ROFL omg. I think it'll be funny. I know Kali will crack up at the story too. xD

The evil deer story will be interesting to see. Wesker's an 'evil' deer, but since he currently has a pregnant mate.. well, does that make her more evil? xDD

I like your stories and I can't wait to see these. Smiling
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Well while I have it up,

Well while I have it up, here's the first little bit of the Nativity story Eye :


"The baby is coming, Wesker!", Kaoori cried. Her body shivered in the cold rain, her mate looking at her in a worried manner. "I can't deliver out here! We need to find shelter!", she said tensely.

"Okay, okay! Uhh...", Wesker looked around. The rain was unrelenting, he shook his fur to get the water out of his eyes. "What about under the old bridge?", he asked.

"Wesker!! There's water under there, remember?", Kaoori snapped. The stag grimaced, thinking again, "What about the Old Oak...?", he asked.

"Yes, come on! Let's go there now!", his doe said hurriedly, running off toward the great tree. Wesker sighed, following behind the pregnant doe. The rain wasn't helping the situation, and both he and Kaoori were growing more and more frustrated this night.


As far as the 'evil deer' convention, maybe Wesker gets an invitation, but Kaoori talks him out of it. I'll probably stick them in there briefly Eye
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aww, I like it already.. xD

aww, I like it already.. xD

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XD I'm gonna have fun writing

XD I'm gonna have fun writing the evil deer one. It's going to be like a Halloween Christmas *without ripping off too much Tim Burton*

I'm wondering what kind of snack food evil durr would eat. Anirapio would probably like rats, frogs, squirrels, ect. I'm sure a few of them wouldn't mind snacking on a dead fawn *that's a joke*.

I dunno yet, but it'll be pretty hilarious. I already know Nekumbra and Jorogumo would hang out, both members of the super secret spiderdurr society (SSSS) XD

Arrgghhhh I want to finish the Nativity and Carol of the Bells stories but I feel like I'm not in the mood. I hate it when this happens!!
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Gonna try to finish "Chime"

Gonna try to finish "Chime" and "Yuletide Fawning" today. Wish me luck, cause I've been badly procrastinating.

Also after that, which story should I write next? I want to save the Christmas Carol one for last because I ordered the movie to watch so I can get a refresher on the story.
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Question, guys: Here is a

Question, guys: Here is a list of 'evil baddie' characters that will be included in my baddie christmas party story. Who am I missing? Who else needs to be in the story?

Anyajog
The Collector
Darkweaver
Glow
Jorogumo
Lucyfer
Vilnius
"Smiling" Jack
Sinker
Wesker (will be invited but Kaoori will not let him go)

Baal's Azazel?
Lich King?
Raz's Ren?
Silent's Az?


*edit* I think I'm going to stick with this, unless anyone else thinks of anyone who has to be in this story Eye

well Creature is pretty evil

well Creature is pretty evil xD or maybe she's just insane? , well evil that must be yes ^^



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Cool, cool! Hey awesome

Cool, cool!

Hey awesome timing, my copy of A Christmas Carol with Patrick Stewart came today, so I'll watch it tonight! I might still keep the Christmas Carol story for last, though.

nice

nice Sticking out tongue


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I had a crazy idea. Would

I had a crazy idea. Would you guys mind if I had either the Night Before Christmas or the Christmas Carol story be told by a certain storyteller deer we all know and love? I think you know who I'm talking about.
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That sounds like a great idea

That sounds like a great idea Quad! ^^
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@ Nix42 - can you please give

@ Nix42 - can you please give me a little info about your deer? Are they a stag or a doe? What is their personality like?

Also I have one more slot open for a 'reindeer' for the Rudolph story. Anyone interested?
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Could toss in Scape since

Could toss in Scape since Zerg is there? *kick'd* |D
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You got it!

You got it!

sounds like a great idea ^^

sounds like a great idea ^^


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The Rudolph story is finally

The Rudolph story is finally done! Chickenwhite, I hope you don't mind that I abused Raleigh a little in the story. XD I made him a slacker as well as a jerk Eye

I like the sound of the

I like the sound of the Christmas Carol Smiling