I would be more than happy to read them and give you some feedback, especially if there are autobiographical themes at play (it takes balls to write and post something like that, I respect it a lot).
I'll post once I've mulled them each over, so expect some comments later on today.

The lonely song makes me want to cry.
I love all the others but that one is my favorite.

Sorry I completely missed them. Reading them now.

I just finished them and I have to say, I am not usually one for song-poetry. I find it hard to read the words unless there is an obvious rhythm, but with yours I didn't have that problem. The words flow perfectly and read very smoothly.

As for meanings, I think the Wind Commitment was by far my favorite. The others were still good, but I could relate and enjoy that one the most. The only critical piece of feedback I have is that you use 'babe' and 'baby' a-lot and at times I found it distracting, especially if the song/poem wasn't narrating to a particular person. I'm certain this is more a personal bias than anything, but I figured I'd throw it out there.

Here are some of my favorite lines;
"Oh when I wandered, with the gypsy lords
And we broke bread and drank the wine"

and

"where the weight against her chest is the artist, her muse, and there are fingers entwined with hers"
^
That final section of Quotient was particularly neat to me. It was also nice because Quotient was such a change of pace from the other posts, I really found myself slowing down to process it which went well with the theme of contemplation and lack of sleep.

All in all, a nice collection with a good range of styles and topics.
It was also nice you didn't explain them, I get a little disillusioned when someone feels they need to explain the meaning of every line. Letting the words speak for themselves is always the better choice.

I think your writing is fantastic, beautiful.
I wish I had your talent, really. ♥

Tera;

Thankyou very much, for both your time and your lovely critique ♥

The babe/baby thing I noticed myself; I was going to put it up there. I've been listening to a lot of Led Zeppelin lately - songs such as 'little lamb' were heavily inspired by their acoustic works, and as Plant's voice was the one in my head whilst writing, terms like that came out with it. I figured it would probably be distracting even to the point of annoying to some people, but once things are written I am reluctant to change them.

Mm, Quotient~ It was nice even for me to write something that I didn't have to think about quite so much, particularly since I was suffering from the described headache.

The lack of explanations is a fairly recent thing for me, but I find it much more effective to read something and pick out your own meaning, rather than having any illusion shattered by a set-in-stone explanation. ♥

Thanks again, Tera.

Ocean; Thankyou! You're wonderful ♥ If I had the resources I'd be making records every day :'D

Sleepything; ♥ I think you're fantastic. Thankyou so much.

Ravynn; Everyone's allowed to be selfish. I've become incredibly distant from TEFc as well, which is why lately I've just been posting unrelated things, just to get them out somewhere. But I'm trying.

Thanks again, guys. You're all beautiful.

♥