[ wind commitment ]

And if I wander with the wind, f'r a while
Will you say you understand?
If I vanish in the summer rainfall, babe
Will you take me back again?

I don't want to be your burden
Or rain on your parade
But there's a light in the sky oh darlin'
Don't let me change

Don't let me change

When your mind flipped and you cried aloud
Did you think of me at all?
When you timeskipped and the marriage tore
Did you rip apart the dress you wore?

Oh when I wandered, with the gypsy lords
And we broke bread and drank the wine
I lost all trace and thought of you my love
My beginning, your demise

I don't want to fix the damage
Or feel bitter remorse
But there's that light again for us
Could you let it pass?

Could you just let it pass?

See the skies break, and the truth you fear
Did you hate my soul at all?
In the rivers from your backstab spear
Did you dance for me, my scorned-heart dear?

Let the light pass
And the wounds of time will scar you
Let the meadows sing again with me
And leave you in the wind

Let the light fall down
And the summer rainfall soothes you
Let your marriage memory of me
Remain with you unsinned

Bump. Sorry.

Bump. Sorry.
Munkel's picture

I really really like this. I

I really really like this. I can never really describe what I really like about writings/poems/whatever they are... only that love them or not, and I love this one ♥

Ooh, thankyou ♥ I have

Ooh, thankyou ♥ I have that problem too most of the time, so I understand. c: -snugs-
quadraptor's picture

This is amazing, your words

This is amazing, your words flow very vividly. You've got a great talent and really deserve more credit for work like this.

♥ You're sweet.

♥ You're sweet. Thankyou very much.
ocean's picture

I'm putting this in the box

I'm putting this in the box with some of your other work. This is a lovely little gem, and I like the feeling behind it.

Cheers ♥ I'm quite

Cheers ♥ I'm quite proud of this one. Very proud, in fact.