First Day Diary Entry of Dalzell (Including Confrontation with Mystress)

My eyes opened, and I greedily accepted the fresh rain-air. A group of mouthy fawns are gathered to my left, and I thought about playing with them, yet when a stag rushed in I thought it better to play it cool. I had a new slate... and everything was up for my taking.
It was later in the day, when the air began to cool when I found a massive stag, in a group of about three. I watched from the trees, apparently not so quietly as he had spied me and instantly invited me to join them
I suppose if he knew my intentions for the fawn dancing at their heels they would've rather bashed my skull against a tree-- but to my advantage they didn't know at all. I acted normal, and stayed with them until another group with a rather slender doe in their midst caught my eye.
I swooped over, keeping my shadows with the trees and watched.
She was quite pretty, and more than once I saw her look over at me.
Finally I waited until the group had split, some leaving the forest, and others more interested in something else away from the pack.
A few fawns lingered around this friendly female, and she danced and laughed with them. I slowly approached her, and she turned to face me. I circled her once, her eyes were radiating with innocence and wonder. I brushed against her, and she nuzzled me...
Interesting.
The fawns then accepted me, seeing as their doe leader had welcomed me, this dark stranger. Did they have any common sesnse? Were they robbed of it? It was all to my advantage. Twisting the mind is my game...
I began to dance, a method that had truly amazing effects on the group. They saw me as normal, friendly.
... I took them all to the pond and we all drank from it... the doe began to drink first and when I walked in slowly next to her, she didn't make a move. I smiled to myself. Soon enough she had to leave. Her delicate limbs folded under her, I sat also. Feeling her warm fur against mine. The fawns scattered. She folded her neck around, against my chest.
The wind whispered dark things above me.

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I hate playing a pedofile. I hate it I hate it I hate it. I wanted to try and "broaden" my characters a bit, by playing the opposite of Mystress. I thought it would be good for me, even writing-wise. My heart is too delicate for this crap! The doe is Kaoori in this story, and I could see how sweet she was and..and -eyes well up with tears- goshadangit. I couldn't twist stuff around, I couldn't bear hurting her! I know this character is an excuse to be mean to people, but still! I can't stand it when people are hurtful to me and I can't do it to anyone else.
I'm hiring Walter to kill him as soon as he can tomorrow, because I think it's cheesy to just -poof- he's gone...
I can't do this....

And then when Lemon came in the forest this morning, that was when I relized I REALLY couldn't be mean. Sooo, I'm going to make him a totally different character. Sometime. I need to recover.
So here's how I'm going to take my anger out on this character. Mystress will give him an earful, but remmeber she can't see him because he has no good in him at all... sooo, he's at a very good advantage.
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Well, well... look who we have here. The "Light Priestess" herself. I must be blessed to be in your presence.
Dalzell circled Myst who was praying at the God's statue. She couldn't hear him... he kicked her with a hoof, and she stood firm, and alert.
Demon, I can hear you now.
Dalzell smiled crookedly.
With your old old body it's a wonder you can hear anything... what is it you find pleasue in the fawns?
Demon, according to legend, the young know everything, and spend the rest of their lives forgetting. There is much they can teach us if you will listen. They are fragile, and beautiful. I dance with them for reasons that baffle you, for they are beyond you comprehension.
Really...? I thought it was so you could get more followers. You'll become more powerful with however many young hearts you have around you... they're clueless, that's what I love about them. Once you start dancing, you hook them in.
Demon, there are more followers of light than you know! Be gone, and fall within the pit of endless darkness before you. For I have brought light, and it shall never be my time to leave the forest! The followers of light, are not mine. They are never mine. They are free, and they are good. They will impail their antlers one-by-one into your rotting flesh and tear you apart in their rage for what you do to others.
Kaoori, and Lemon have already been unfortunate to have their eyes darkened by seeing you before them. You are not worthy to stand in the way of the just. Nor are you ever worthy to ever touch them, nor kiss the ground they walk on...

Dalzell was blinded by a light that gleamed between Mystress' antlers. It began to sting him, and he ran.
Your time has come.
Seele's picture

A massive stag huh <3

A massive stag huh <3 Gehirn's complimented. *Shot*
But yeah he's pretty twisted XD Didn't know about the pedofile part, though that's kinda intresting, still shocking. I like original characters a lot. Maybe changing him a bit so he's less.. Interactive with others, and just for you when you want to take your anger out? My Gehirn didn't stay "evil" for long either, he just stayed arrogant and egoistic.
But I wouldn't worry about being "mean" in-forest, because some do find those "evil" deer intresting, and try their best to befriend them anyway.

--Stays a lonely Seele
SilentOrosco's picture

Aw darnit. I'm sad I never

Aw darnit. I'm sad I never got to meet Dalzell in the forest. ( I love twisted evil characters XD;)
-scribbles off of Minion's master list-

And my god you're a brilliant writer! Very good at capturing a deer's personality.

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Verdalas's picture

Walter wants to rip Dalzell

Walter wants to rip Dalzell apart, examine the colour of his blood, then pull out good number of organs. And whilst he watches himself die, Walter is going to carve his eyes out one at a time, slice off his filthy tongue and rip off his ears. Then he informs me he's doing to finish by driving an antler spike slowly into his heart so that he can feel every moment of pain before the end.

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Isn't Walter happy today? Laughing out loud
Fledermaus's picture

Aww, that's a shame. I

Aww, that's a shame. I always like a bit of an antagonist to shake things up sometimes. xD
I think he has a lot in common with Masque, actually (as he also has a tendency for the younger does, and he's just a bitter soul in general.) =D

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Misako-- Yeah that would be

Misako-- Yeah that would be good... I guess... He made himself a ped. I hate it though... Maybe I should just make him less-interactive.... Good idea.

Silent-- Lol, you may still have a chance, he'll try to be in sometime today again, I guess lol. If I don't shoot myself. LOL!

Walter: Jesus. Would Walter like to meet him?? He'll be in the forest today... and then tomorrow. Does Walter want a rival that may be in the forest a bit longer than tomorrow? I can hold out for you if you want me to. (I don't think he's going to be winning any hearts Walty. -pets-) He can kill him when he wants to, we just have to arrange it if he wants a bit of a match longer than tomorrow.

edit: Fled: Oh, that's cool! Maybe I just need more time to adjust... Sticking out tongue

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Laruna's picture

Oh, I should like to see

Oh, I should like to see Dalzell try that again in my deer's presence... He may be old, but he's not afraid to defend someone he cares very much for. I knew that was why he was hanging around us yesterday. I really did have to leave, but I knew he would move in once my deer disappeared. He feels very sorry now that he had to leave Kaoori alone...

Anyway, I'm sorry to hear that you're feeling guilty about your character. I think what I like about Dalzell is that you are not outwardly mean, or at least, I've never seen it. It's ridiculous to go around lowering antlers and stomping at every deer. There are more sophisticated ways to be malicious, and I think Dalzell and Masque are two great examples. But it would be wrong, I think, to continue playing him this way if it hurts your heart. Is there a way you can keep him "evil," but change what upsets you about his character?

I think I'm getting used to

I think I'm getting used to it, but once I get my fill of playing as him He'll be gone for quite some time... it's really hard for me to adjust to this kind of character...
Yeah, I agree lowering antlers and such "just because"-- isn't right. It's just ridicululous and I usually end up laughing at the guy who did it...
Usually, he sits and watches, and if someone comes over he gets mad,but there's a warning of foot stamping. And then he usually runs, and if they follow him, then he gets mad...
He's a bit more "reserved" in a way, than other evil deer, which I think is the only reason makes me able to play as him... My heat just bleeds when I'm mean to someone for no reason! :C

But yeah... that's him.

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