Noirin, Heilong, Waefreleah, Clarion, Heather, and Peri's home

So I took an hour to do a thing and I'm actually proud of it??

I used Heilong for a monologue in english class, had to make him a human for it though. Should I post it here?
Update: Posted, what's my grade

*It's based on the theme of growing up from Catcher in the Rye

Im TOTALLY serious, guys. Totally.