Mom...

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A year after dad dissapeared I was walking around in the dark forest (again) but I suddenly heard a long paninful roar. Mom... No...
I ran towards the roar and saw mom... She was shot... I couldn't believe it!
"Mom! Are you ok!?"


"Kiowa... Is it y-you?"

"Yes mom... I'm here... I'm here"

"K-Kiowa... My d-dearest son... M-my time is in..."

"No! It Isn't! Hold on mom! I... Cant lose you too" My tear landed on mom.

"This is a part of your l-life, try not to c-care"

"How I'm I supposed to not care!?" It seamed like mom didn't care...

"Take care f-for K-Keewa"

"But, where is she!?"

"Good luck son... B-bye..."

"Mom!? No!"
I nuzzled mom time after time but I didn't get any reaction.
She was gone... Forever...


wow, so powerful emotions in

wow, so powerful emotions in those few lines <3

great job you done here... again ^^
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Thank you (: I almost cried

Thank you (:
I almost cried when I was writing...
And what do you mean with 'again?' have read the other one too?

yep, i did ^^

yep, i did ^^
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It was yoo!... xP Anyways I'm

It was yoo!... xP
Anyways I'm just asking; should I write stories too?

of course! you don't even

of course!

you don't even need to ask ^^ just do and have fun with it!

write them _for you_ not for others. When you like what you do, others will as well
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I must admit it - I

I must admit it - I cried.
...Smiles...Family...Hearts...Tears...
Thank you for that, Kawy!



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Thank you ^.^

Thank you ^.^