Writing

theano's picture

Read. Realize. Act.

By the computer I sit down.
Watch the world form.

Information comes streaming round.
Read, Realize. Act.

Separating, my mind's eye sees.
Lies I tell to self.

Hidden desires confront.
Choices to be made.

Questions create anxiety.
New path to be walked?

Blended realities for me.
Who am I today?

An entanglement possibly.
Desperately wanting.

Contemplating taking a chance.
Satisfying me.

Make the mess enjoy the chaos.
Living or dying?

Walking toward it or run away?
INtense pondering.

Arguing endlessly with self.
It is what it is.

It will be or it will not be.
Think I will just live.



(Thinking compliments of a friend from India)
quadraptor's picture

Shaman Hunt (Story for a friend)

Warning – this story is graphic. Please read at your own risk.

This story is for my friend Nala_91 from Impressive Title. She asked me to write a story about one of her characters hunting Quad. I’ve been a little late getting it written but had the muse this morning to write it for her.

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quadraptor's picture

Character strengths vs weaknesses chart...

Something I wanted to work on was making descriptions on how some of my newer characters would have certain strengths and weaknesses to each member of the Deadly Trio. This is a tentative list and I may need help explaining how certain characters could be effective against others.

The characters in question are:
Pema (Fawn Marionette, Wisdom)
Thich (Snake Plush, Strength)
Rumi (Undecided, probably going to be a Fox Plush, Agility)

vs.

Iugulare (Stoat Infection, Wisdom)
Anirapio (Dragon Alien, Agility)
Nekumbra (Spider Doe Mutant, Strength)


So here's what I have...

Pema is strong against Anirapio because Pema can tangle Anirapio with her strings. Keeping Anirapio subdued for a certain length of time will cause her to become malnourished and weakened due to her high metabolism. (Wisdom > Agility)
Pema and Iugulare are evenly matched because Pema knows Iugulare's weaknesses, but Iugulare is intimidating to Pema and can easily scare her to retreat. (Wisdom = Wisdom)
Pema is weak against Nekumbra because Nekumbra can cut her strings and puppet her with spider webbing. Also Nekumbra would relentlessly pursue Pema since she is a fawnkiller. (Wisdom < Strength)

Thich is strong against Iugulare because his body can absorb infection. (Strength > Wisdom)
Thich and Nekumbra are evenly matched because Thich could constrict Nekumbra just as easily as Nekumbra could trap Thich with spider webbing.
FaunGrae's picture

Greenspace (The Origin of Jupiter Stories)

Jupiter's Tale 1: The Origin
theano's picture

Love in a Cup of Tea

I hold the cup in hand
while gazing across the way
at your face.

I watch your breath enter
and marvel at your presence;
feel your life.

The warmth of the tea cup
mirrors my warm heart for you
and for us.

My eyes cast down and see
the handle and a shadow
form a heart.

Realizing I love you
I look into your dark eyes
to confirm.

I see you smile knowing
and your eyes begin to glow
and there's love.

The poem thread.

It's true- poems get less attention then art. Some amazing ones are just left there because no one bothers to read them. So, I thought I would make a thread where eveyone could show it.

How does it work?


Once someone has posted a poem, read it well, then write someone about it!

Example:

I saw a butterfly, it fluttered away.

Next comment:

Wow, I like what words you used! And the plot is amazing.

Here's mine,

blahblahblah.

Then the next one posts, and on and on. Don't worry, you don't have to post a poem, you can just write about the one above you if you want! I hope you understand. |D Now, go post your poems!

- Alice...
Baal's picture

Neverending!

FaunGrae's picture

He moved.

meh....


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Meadows's picture

Seeing the L i g h t


Moosehoof's picture

.Moon.

.Moon.

The ground melted around his cloven hooves. The wind howled over his ears, he scowled at the gods. They cursed him! They betrayed him.



The glitter of the pond ahead, a ligfht in the darkness of the forest, a midpoint for travelers or lost fawns. This night of nights, the hallowed tree's sung no sweet tune to his ears, nor did his pictogram glow brightly for all to see. His mission was dark as the showdow that loomed below his body.


The firefly's that lived around the pond's graceful willow tree's, they were gone. The koi fish that danced so gracefully through the clear water's of the pond, gone. Sleeping calmly. Only the Gods knew truely what thoughts this stag had. His plot for this night.



Passing the tall birch tree's, snoring of many deer could be heard, they slept peacefully, their dreams filled with magic, not shadowed by nightmares. Leeon's head was only full on a thought, a simple thought.



Only a few months ago did he betray himself, the God's betrayed him, he stood up against the Demon Gazelle. He was punished. Blood was shed on that great stone bridge, a place where no evil could swallow. His blood now matted in with the moss that grew there. His mind was eveloped with a thought



His hooves reached the muddy edge, the pond glitter with a perfect picture of the moon. Leeon's eyes welled at the sight. He was born under this moon, the moon was his friend, his family. Everything. To see what he was doing, he could not stand it.



Stepping back, he waited until clouds covered the moon, the eyes of the Gods were no long upon his pelt. Walking back to the edge, he eyes for a certain somthing. There, a broken tree, it's splinttered trunk still firmly planted in the water.



Arriving where he began, by the shallow waters, did he fall.

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