Quick Comic

SaritaWolf's picture
Yes, Nari, I did it. |D WHY. I TOLD YOU you're deer are so addicting to DRAAAWWW. :'C

I hope you'll forgive me if I did complete injustice to Mr. Red's character. :c

Anyway, here you go, it "reads" left to right.

(Oi, it's big. D8 Gotta' fix that later)
Chenaniah does not approve.

In case no one gets this, here's how it goes:
Panel 1: fail background of the Birch Forest
Panel 2: Chenaniah is asleep. Some birds are makin' noise.
Panel 3: His ear twitches
Panel 4: He gets up (IT AMAZINGLY EPIC SO FAR, RITE?!)
Panel 5: He sees a deer jumpin' up at the birds
Panel 6: The deer's teeth catch the bird's tail.
(When birds are about to be eaten, they go scree. I'm serious.)
Panel 7: Chen's eye goes WHUT.
Panel 8: lol, I don't know, it's like one of those epic realizations or something.
Panel 9. Angry eye is angry


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OkayANDLOOK. Here's another one.


Mr. Red approves.

Here's more "translation" of my bad layout skillz.
Panel 1: Chenan runs towards deer
Panel 2: Chenan's antlers hit deer (He tried not to actually impale Red, it was just supposed to be a warning to make him let go of the bird. However, it scraped his knee a bit)
Panel 3: Red falls; bird flies away. FRY FREE RITTLE BIRDIE.
Panel 4: Mr. Red goes 0_o
Panel 6: Mr. Red goes >:D
Panel 7: Mr. Red wants fight.


The end, lol. I don't really know where to go with this.

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See, Chenaniah would fight to the death rather than let another bird under his care die. And he has lots of sharp, pointy... points on his antlers.

However, Mr. Red's much bigger than him, has more experiencing fighting, and lol more teeth. |D

So I'm probably not going to continue it unless Narina gives me some ideas or something. I'm always afraid of using other people's characters. :c

OH and this never actually happened. I'm just speculating lol.

OKAY BYE. *darts away*

Never should come in and

Never should come in and scare everyone epically HURRHURR.



ANYWAYS epic comic ...scares me how much Mr Mr. Red is like VipAsp dad o: !!
Kaoori's picture

FJ:LKJE THAT PICTURE

FJ:LKJE THAT PICTURE ::screams:: x______x

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I'm a little wolf inside a girl.

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Kaoori's picture

AND ALSO I ENJOY THIS COMIC.

AND ALSO I ENJOY THIS COMIC. you should write more?

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I'm a little wolf inside a girl.

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Zergarikiaka's picture

Epic art is Epic! Man I wish

Epic art is Epic!

Man I wish I had the patience and time to draw comics like this...

Draak's picture

8o that's awesomes 8D you've

8o that's awesomes 8D you've done epic angles and poses Laughing out loud :D

Though...I think Chenan would come out better then what Corvus did when he took on Mr Red XD. Corvus's little Beluga antlers didnt really stand a chance XD.

I love Mr Red's "o_O" XDDD
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SaritaWolf's picture

@ Sarie- OKAY. Man, and I

@ Sarie- OKAY.

Man, and I was worried about ruining people's characters before...

BUTSERIOUSLY that pic looks like it was done in iScribble. D8 WHODUNNIT.

@ Raz - Yeah, I kept thinking of Corvus. >.< At least he had a more noble cause. :c
Zergarikiaka's picture

X'DDDD

X'DDDD

8"DD MR. RED AND NEVER

8"DD MR. RED AND NEVER SHOULD GET MARRIIIIIED <3
holy crap Sarita that's amazing jkflsdf XDD you didn't need to do that AH IT'S INCREDIBLE.

new desktop. rite thar.
Zergarikiaka's picture

|D wow, my "Mystery

|D wow, my "Mystery Fawn/Stag 1" would have a riot with Never...
In a ... "Let's give everyone in the forest nightmares for the rest of their lives" sort of way, no doubt. |D

HOMGGGGG YEEEEES. well Never

HOMGGGGG YEEEEES. well Never is this physcho dad of Vipin and Aspen who forced this pretty doe to become his mate and birth as many sons as she could and when she had twins one was a girl so he was like OMNONMONMIEATCHU and killed her and then went on a rampage and blahblah he stalks the forest today :'U he has this crazylong six-foot tongue and stitches in his mouth and antlers that bore into his eyes 8D IT'S A BEAUTIFUL THING. Mysteryfawn + Never + Mrrr. Red = ...dskjf
SaritaWolf's picture

What's funny is that I was

What's funny is that I was sitting in my bed and it's well past midnight and I read your comment, drew the comic, ran downstairs, scanned it, emailed it to myself, got some water, ran back upstairs, opened the email, edited the comic, and posted it ALL WITHOUT MY PARENTS AWAKING. lolmaybeIshouldprobablygotobed.

YES. REDNEVER BABIES. Which um I don't exactly know how that would happen so let's just stop now. .____.

EW. GET THAT OFF YOUR DESKTOP. *tackles you*

EDIT: WOAH YOU GUYS SERIOUSLY. How in the world did three comments ninja past me. D8 *slow*

EDIT AGAIN: MAKE THAT FOUR *not good at math*
Kaoori's picture

ROFLMAO THAT COMIC... mr

ROFLMAO THAT COMIC... mr red's face.. sdfhoasdkgn;kl

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Zergarikiaka's picture

X3 Whoo redbabies! Hehe,

X3 Whoo redbabies!
Hehe, well I actually have two mystery fawns, but #1 is going to be an absolute psycho who is cursed or something for claiming the twin gods are fake, later claiming that they are demons who need to be shunned, him then being cursed by them as punishment with 1.) Multiple personality disorder 2.) Bipolar Disorder 3.) Physical deformities (especially on the face and neck) 4.) Schitzophrenia
X3 So many problems = fun. Further, he has six eyes showing threw cracks in his skull(mask), which looks like it's been crushed several dozens of times already.



Draak's picture

zomg lol XDDD awwww, but

zomg lol XDDD

awwww, but someone has to defend the little birdies too c:

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Narina's picture

OH SO YOU STRIKE WHEN I'M

OH SO YOU STRIKE WHEN I'M SLEEPING, HUH? 8DDDD

The comic is AWESOM-O. First when I started reading I thought it was Red trying to chirp and get birdies close. Stupid me. But I love the panel where Red's taken down! <8D The whole comic is full of awesomeness, I couldn't ever do that. O_____O

I think Red would fight to the end, and if he lost, he'd die laughing. I think the best way for him to die is in a fight. 8D But I don't want these two continue their fight, because Grim would kill Red for hurting Chenaniah, and Red wouldn't fight her.
But you seriously CAN do whatever with my Red, he's so random he could do much everything. <8D

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I DIDN'T DIE FOR THE ILU COMIC. SERIOUSLY.

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Flyra's picture

YOU WIN, SARITAAA. <333 I

YOU WIN, SARITAAA. <333
I enjoyed this comic pages so much! Keep them up! =D

An idea for the comic: maybe Grimmer can see them fighting and jumps between them? Since both like her (don't they?), they could stop because of her. Justanidea for a wonderful comic. 8D

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SaritaWolf's picture

Narina ~ lol, chirping Red.

Narina ~ lol, chirping Red. XD
See, I don't know, I was thinking maybe Red sees another bird, and looks at Chen all taunting-like, and then runs after it, and Chen runs after him and tackles him and and and lol I don't know.
Or maybe something like this. |D

DUDE. I should totally make them BOTH DIE since this technically never happened. >:D

Flyra ~ lol, I dunno. Narina, does Grim have any relation to Red?
Narina's picture

That video looks hilarious.

That video looks hilarious. Slapping stags, uh-huh.

I think Grim only knows Red, like just knows. They aren't friends, tho. 8>

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Zergarikiaka's picture

*dies laughing* omg slap

*dies laughing* omg slap fighting stags! X'D Too funny. You should totally drawn Red and Chen slap fighting. XD

Mar would probably be staring at them in the distance like '...o.O;;;; Uh... ok...' XD

Flyra's picture

Narina wrote:... and Red

Narina wrote:
... and Red wouldn't fight her.


(her = Grimmer)
My idea came with that. But I knoooow that my ideas suck. *hides* 8>

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Narina's picture

Flyra, YOUR IDEAS NEVER

Flyra, YOUR IDEAS NEVER SUCK. )8<

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It would be GREAT if Grimmer would pick her nose to this stuff, because she won't let anyone hurt others.

Now be nice and know we all love you. )8<


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Flyra's picture

OMG THANKS NARIIII. 8'DD *is

OMG THANKS NARIIII. 8'DD *is all satisfied* LOL
Haha, know that I love you too. ;D <3

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Sunflyra's picture

*havn't seen it early* >:|

*havn't seen it early* >:| *hurt herself* ouch! XDD (<-ignored these)
that's...absolutely...a wonderful comicideadrawing WOW Shocked
weeeee i love the second page! Mr. Red's head! WoW! absolutely beautiful comic :3
-wantmorewantmorewantmorewantmore- <3

and flyra...
NARINA IS RIGHT: YOUR IDEAS NEVER SUCK!!
-pull out of the corner- >:|
<3 xD

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Zergarikiaka's picture

I drew Chen and Red

I drew Chen and Red Slap-Fighting. XD
Just need a chance to scan it. X'D

SaritaWolf's picture

lol WHAAAAAATT D8

lol WHAAAAAATT D8
Narina's picture

<8D _________________________

<8D

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Zergarikiaka's picture

Actually, I did two versions

Actually, I did two versions - one was puffball'd. X'D The fancy "real" style though has Mar in the background going o.O;.
XD

SaritaWolf's picture

I imagined it puffball'd.

I imagined it puffball'd. XD

I WANNA SEE I WANNA SEEEEE.
Zergarikiaka's picture

=3



=3

SaritaWolf's picture

WOW lol that's awesome! XD

WOW lol that's awesome! XD Red looks so happy and Chen's all into it. XD And HOLY CRAP those antlers. D8

I wanna' see the puffball verson. :3
Zergarikiaka's picture

It was too small to be worth

It was too small to be worth scanning, so I did it again on Iscribble. =3




Narina's picture

AIEE THE PUFFBALLFIGHT.

AIEE THE PUFFBALLFIGHT. O___O

God, I love those.

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Draak's picture

omg puffball fight SLAPSIES

omg puffball fight SLAPSIES 8D XDDDDD
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