The Revelation -A story of Bo-

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"Come watch," they've said to me.













































Being an outcast among this community, I never really knew what they meant.









































It is about their deity. They are two, yet act like one. I have heard that they make amazing things happen.





































And then I've witnessed them myself...

































































































I was already indentured to the Anatolian Earth goddess, Cybele, who had created me last out of a multitude of more than three million angels and five-hundred different archangels.




















































She would use the second person singular conjugation of my name when addressing me. "No matter what sort of god is on that planet, Bis, you will not worship it. You will only worship me."





































































So I continued performing work, collecting the units of life energy that Cybele requested.









































It was then, when I had collected almost all of it, that I truly realized what those creatures meant.

















































































I could sense that these gods have more power. Yet, they use it for good. To entertain their creatures. And they love them.

















































But Cybele. She mass produces us for her own benefit. To work for her. Collect this, find that. It would always be task after task, fetching more and more energy to feed her. It meant power...















































































I have only ever known of a selfish god who was disinterested in caring for the angels she had created.





































She never loved me. But they did. I could feel like they wanted to prove it to me.

































I stopped collecting units of life energy. I disconnected my communication with Cybele. They wanted to cleanse me of her aura, so I let them. At first it tickled a bit, and then it stung.
I was clean.
































































I felt...free. Loved, accepted by a god that I thought would care less about my existence on their planet.



















































I still carry with me my old habits of persisting the 'Old Oak', and running after life energy radicals. But I have lost the will to catch them, and to guard the huge tree against anti-earth angels; which really happened to be collecting life energy like I used to...




































Rodents and rabbits know me, but not like they used to. And I will always fly with the doves whenever I like.




























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testing comment...

testing comment...
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire

toot toot *jumps on*

toot toot *jumps on* ♥
i am so sorry i am just excited what will this be
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xD Jennie! actually...I'm

xD Jennie! actually...I'm still brainstorming ideas for this page. I was really inspired last night, but...it just seemed to melt away at school.
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire

Still I'm excited 'bout your

Still I'm excited 'bout your stuff.. And I'm excited when will you play Nine xD
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xD thankies! you'd like

xD thankies!
you'd like Calder to play-fight with her? ^^
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire

Anyway would you like any

Anyway would you like any help with ideas?
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....hmm. I'm not sure. I may

....hmm. I'm not sure. I may start over. Ideas are welcome, thank you. Smiling But I may surprise you with the idea I had in mind earlier. I'm not sure yet.
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire
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You definitely have a talent

You definitely have a talent of creating exciting atmospheres for your character stories! I enjoyed reading this, and hope to meet Bo some time soon?

How do you describe both the beginning and the end? We should have known better, but we didn't. What does it matter what we think we know? In the end, there's no denying the truth. - Left Behind --[Art by Aquilo]
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Thank you, Elzire! I'm glad

Thank you, Elzire! Laughing out loud I'm glad you enjoyed it Smiling Bo is in the forest randomly now, but if you meet her or she meets you, your deer will get added to her list of acquaintances.
"Common sense is not so common." -Voltaire