It was a sunny and friendly moring.
The little fawn Mela played near the pond with a butterfly.
Her mother grazed nearby.
Mela went to the pond to drink. But…the was something in the pond!!
FISHIES!!Mela loved every animal.
She took some steps towals them. The water reached her knees.
She stretched her neck to touch them and took one last step…but…the was nothing!
She screamed and the water flowed in her mouth and her lung.She struggled with her little legs, but she dropped along.
Her lung started to hurt …then she realized: she drown in the pond…she will never see her mother again…no butterflies, no forest…no live anymore.
Her eyes went slowly dark when suddenly someone drawned her up! Crocodiles?
To feed on crocodiles or drown in the pond…death or death…so she didn’t move.
Her lung and her head hurt terrible. She thought about all these happy moments in her past, when there was something different…she wasn’t anymore in the water.
There was something what she nearly have been forgotten...AIR!!!
she draw a deep breath.“…mela…“she turned around her head and..saw her mother…drown in the pond, she had been rescued her…her head pant for air.
”I love you…”she wanted to help her, but her legs disobey her. Her mom disappeared.”NOOOOOOOOOAAAHH”a terrible scream…her father stood at the pond!!
he turned around and ran, never seen again. She screamed a soundless cry and felt asleep…
“Mom..MOM !!”I cry”WATER !EVERYWHERE!!the pond…NNOOOO!! "
i wake up…the crying ideal...water NEXT TO ME!!!
”RUN!RUN AWAY!...just run…”…I stop running when I just hear the noise of water in my head…lost alone....
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this is the story of one of my deer Mela. Inspired by Cata i think<3 x) I'm sorry for my bad english, i hope you can understand everything!
~Sun
Lovely story! The poor girl
--Stays a lonely Seele
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This is sooooo amazing! You have such a nice writing style! It's an exciting and sad story... Mela sounds so cute! <3 I'd love to give her a biiiig biiiiig tackleglomp!
*tackeglomps Mela*
AND.
Is this serious? O______O MYY. I never inspired someone so often with my stories, gee, I'm so honoured, WAAH.
I really need to write something for you.
And continue writing! I really like it! <333 =D
Cata & Paya & Pi'yu
Cata & Paya & Pi'yu
really...? ._____.o.o
THaaaaaanks you aaaall!!! *nuzzles a hundred time* <333
after this issue Mela loves to play in the "blue bowl" in the birchforest^^(do you call it like this?)
and cata^^ yes, you inspire me to write it and i think to post it here...<333
mmmh you havn't met my Ahorn too...?? x)
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~Sunfyra<33
+*Sunfyra's Biography*+
This is so beautiful...
Keep writing, it's so cool! =D
Lightcreator
It's really good, seriously!
*nuzzles back* I think I know what you mean with blue bowl... ;D
I still feel honoured... ^^ But I even met Ahorn! Don't you remember? I were Paya then and they had a small look-a-like with Vala and him! Here you can see. ^__^
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Cata & Paya & Pi'yu
Cata & Paya & Pi'yu