Hey guys, I'm writing a new story that will be featured on the
The Shady Grove forums. Come check it out!
I STILL HAVE SLOTS AVAILABLE! The story has started but new 'victims' can be added (I also love ideas for experiments if you have them)
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Here are links to the chapters:
Prologue
Chapter 1: Nameless Fawn
Chapter 2: Tuna
Chapter 3: Opi
Chapter 4: Leeon
Chapter 5: Silent
Test subjects still to come:
Zephyr
Liëka
Draak
Ravenflight
Fenkovan
Mystress
Lady Bones
And finally, below is part of the prologue...
"Did anyone ever tell you how beautiful you were?", Mazey asked softly. The young doe didn't reply, her head tucked into her mother's side as she slept. Mazey let out a sigh, "Oh...my little Zephyr."
She was beautiful, more than she'd like to admit. The young doe could have had just about any stag that set eyes on her. The problem was that Zephyr didn't want to fall in love. A few handsome stags had asked her before if she wanted a mate, and her response was always, "Go find someone prettier."
Why did she hurt so much? Was it the loss of her father? Or was it...
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Something woke her. She heard a sound nearby, and sitting up, she saw her mother and brother asleep together. Zephyr stood and crept away, looking back at them for a moment before running off.
Several other deer had awoken in the moonlight. They gathered near the birch trees, peering past them where the edge of the Forest was. "What was it?", Draak asked. "Don't know.", Liëka replied, "It sounded like an eruption." "I would believe that, actually.", Ravenflight said, "I just felt the ground move." "I think there are enough of us to go find out...", Leeon began to say, when he saw someone approach, "Hello, Zephyr."
The doe didn't reply, looking at all of them for a moment before asking, "What was that sound just a while ago?" They shook their heads - none of them knew. They heard another sound, a flash of light followed by a soft hissing sound. "What is...", Opi began to question, when they noticed a strange fog coming toward them. "I bet it's the Twin Gods messing with us again.", Silent said, relaxing and taking a few steps into the fog. He looked around for a moment, his legs began to wobble, and he collapsed.
This startled the other deer. "Silent!", Draak cried out, who took a step toward the fallen deer, but Ravenflight stepped in the way, "No, we need to get out of here!" Liëka was the first to turn and run, and the others followed, avoiding the fog the best they could.
Zephyr saw Opi fall, who caught a whiff of the mist and couldn't stay on her feet. Before her, Leeon was free of the fog, but soon collapsed as well. Zephyr ran past him, noticing a dart stuck in his side. Ravenflight and Draak collapsed as well. Zephyr stopped to help them, but they cried, "Go! Get away!"
So she left them. Her legs carried her as fast as she could go, and strange smells made her eyes water and her nose stuff up. She stopped, rubbing her eyes and sneezing, before looking back from where she came. Something was approaching quickly, and before she could run again, it shot something at her.
Zephyr tried to run, but was suddenly hit with a large hunting net that made her legs trip. She struggled to break free, but the net only tangled her up. She saw the figures appear from the fog - they were humans wearing gas masks that approached. Zephyr remembered a little of the English her father taught her, and she spoke to them, "What are you...", but before she could get the words out, one of them held a chemical sprayer toward her and released the fog into her face. She felt her body become numb, and she slowly passed out. 
Awesome ^^ :: D e e r . U p
:: D e e r . U p d a t e s ::
Loved it. Read it all at
If you need any more deer, you're welcome to use one of mine ^^
To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
I'd love to! Just fill this
Name:
Personality:
Any particular 'experimentations' you may want done on them (optional):
And I'll add them to the list
HMMM. 8D Name:
Name: Fenkovan
Personality: Biography
Experiments: Surprise me X'D
To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
Alriiiight!
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Adopted from Valenth
I read it last night, and it
Poor Leeon. Stupid humans
I wonder when they catch Fenkovan XD Or is he already caught?
To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
I'm waiting to see if anyone
You can use all of my deer
Name:Mystress
Personality: Motherly, caring, wise, loving (uses a lot of 'young one's in her dialogue. which can be cryptic and hard to understand sometimes.)
Experiments: I've always wanted Mystress save someone if they were to die, in exchange for her own life. But you can choose if you wish to do this/is OK for your story.
Name:Lady Bones
Personality: Spicy, flaunting, flirty, and headstrong but sometimes cool and gentle. LOVES anything victorian/creepy. She used to paint the skulls of her crewmen after they died, and sold them on shore when they arrived.
Experiments: Have fun with her!!
Name:Dalzell
Personality: Creepy, slimy, wanna-be evil deer. He's all talk most of the time, and would chicken out if actually threatened. But he loves to harrass does. He's a weasil. But I'm sure they'd kick his slimy butt. You could say he's a "Grima Wormtongue".
Name: Odin
Personality: Cool and gentle, but is terrified of everything!! He uses norse runes to solve his probelms by asking questions and such.
Pick and choose a few, one, or all!!
I added Mystress and Lady
Nice writing! I felt sorry
To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul