Confession

Kaoori's picture
Totally started this when it snowed in the forest.. never finished until now.
Also my writing and art is fail, please bear with me.
Under the cut.



"Ochiba."


The young stag turned in her direction, his breath forming in the cool air. The snow fell steadily around them, and every now and then the doe and stag would shake their fur free of flakes. Ochiba lay down, a blanket of cool snow underneath her.

"There's something I've been thinking a lot about, something I've been meaning to tell you."

Takeshi cleared his throat, looking down at her.

"I know that we haven't known each other for as long as some others, but we've been through some things that have brought us close together. I realized, during the rut, that no other does made me feel this way. This strange way. Why I always want to spend time with you, why I'm always trying to impress you." He paused. "Why I call you Fish-Face."

He pawed at the ground awkwardly with a front hoof, pacing a bit.

"I suppose what I'm trying to say is.. I think-- I think I love you."

Baw, all of this is lovely!

Baw, all of this is lovely! c:

Aww. This is so sweet

Aww. This is so sweet (:

Lovely art too ~ It really captures the moment. ♥
Snowsauria's picture

Aw, this is adorable. :') And

Aw, this is adorable. :')
And I have to say I just love Ochiba's design. <3

This is so sweet ;-; Picture

This is so sweet ;-;

Picture is very good. snowyyy ♥

Hraeth's picture

Woo~! Yeah! Go Takeshi, you

Woo~! Yeah! Go Takeshi, you stud-muffin! 8'D

This is so freakin' adorable. ;3;
trigger_mortis's picture

This is gorgeous! The art,

This is gorgeous! The art, the writing, simply beautiful. Smiling
Kaoori's picture

Thank you so much, everyone.

Thank you so much, everyone. ;_;
shaku's picture

So sweeeet. I love the story

So sweeeet. I love the story and the art together.

And for the art, I adore the way the doe is sitting. She's so incredibly graceful~

gone's picture

They're so sweet (: I love

They're so sweet (:

I love your drawing, Ochiba and Takeshi look beautiful <3
Kaoori's picture

Thank you so much for the

Thank you so much for the comments, everyone. Smiling
Zergarikiaka's picture

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<3

Awww.

Awww. <3
Cute. And the picture is really nice. Very pretty.
Kaoori's picture

Thank you

Thank you Smiling
Scythe's picture

There was a pause as the

There was a pause as the young doe's face fell some shade of scarlet. That was one of the downsides of being a piebald, especially a proud piebald. She could never hide even the faintest trace of a blush.

"Words were never your strong point, eh, Astroboy," she snorted at the white of winter, rolling onto her other side to regain her composure. "But that's okay, because..."

The blue of her eyes softened like some pond that had finally found peace. There were no more stones to be cast. He would see to that.

"Because I think that I love you, too."

Kaoori's picture

dfhaslhlhjljl;djkasdfgksdj!!!

dfhaslhlhjljl;djkasdfgksdj!!!! ;_;
Scythe's picture

Note to self: Leave Kimi's

Note to self: Leave Kimi's shading style to Kimi and Kimi alone. XD
Kaoori's picture

sssh nothing can compare to

sssh nothing can compare to the epicness you have bestowed upon me. >:|
Pegasicorn's picture

*sneaks in* 8DD *sneaks out*

*sneaks in* 8DD *sneaks out*
Scythe's picture

Nonsense. You SOP this

Nonsense. You SOP this nonsense right now, you hear me? *has a way of derailing just about every serious post*

Pega: Taking lessons from a certain ninja, hmm? XD
Kaoori's picture

I'm n ot sopping anything.

I'm n ot sopping anything. >:|

.. skdjfhd
Pegasicorn's picture

The ninja fails, so no, I'm

The ninja fails, so no, I'm not. XP
ocean's picture

... AWWW. &hearts; Ama:

...
AWWW. ♥

Ama: Takeshi has a cruuuu-uuush~
Nix42's picture

Adorable!

Adorable! <3
''A spark neglected makes a mighty fire."
Hraeth's picture

EEHEHE! lkawdalwh 'Keshi and

EEHEHE!
lkawdalwh

'Keshi and Ochiba sittin' in a tree!
K-I-S-S-I-
-brick'd-
Kaoori's picture

KJdklsh ;_;

KJdklsh ;_;
Zergarikiaka's picture

Archelius: *mutters a

Archelius: *mutters a firework spell, having a ghost follow threw with a little display for the cute moment*