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ReBirth :: A Short Story (pilot)

Authors Note: I've decided to hop on the bandwagon and create my own story too! Dunno how far this will go, but eh, I'll have fun with it. This is a pilot short story, to see how well I get on with this. XD Its not the beginning or anything, just a short excerpt. Actually the scenes in this story are sortof derived from around chapter 7-8 of SarieBearies "Magpie Songs" story. 8D Well, here goes nothin'


::Revive::
-A Short Story-


The steady drone that reverberated from the inside of the Old Oak was a incessant pressure on GoldenWinged's head and it was beginning to give her a headache. She hated this tree, she would never be inside it on any normal day. However, she had business to attend to....

As her eyes began to close, she noticed two deer figures coming her way, leaning on each other as if they were one big eight-legged deer. When the figures hit the shade of the Oak, they could be identified as Vipin leaning on his younger sister, Aspen. Her eyes snapped open, getting up half in relief of seeing them and being out of that irritating noisy tree.

Her head flicked to the both of them, judging their looks. Aspen, a shorter, more muscular doe, was trying to stand her straightest, to keep Vipin on four hooves. Her jaw clenched and her lips thinned as she nudged him to go a few feet farther. Her eyes were alight with determination, wanting everyone around her to know she was strong enough to support herself and her brother. As she neared GoldenWinged her expression softened a bit, but a stoic look seemed to linger in her eyes.
The stag that she was supporting was none other than her older brother, Vipin. His gentle masculine face was contorted in pain as he winced with every step, finally coming to rest inside the Oak, with GoldenWinged and Aspen to help him down.

Candle Antlers

Are they something special? Or can you get them in a spell?
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Grand Theft Auto IV/Endless Forest Crossover in Full Swing

Last time, on the GTA/Endless Forest Crossover...

Bockgrawnd Music



I AM TRIPPING BALLSSSS!!!!

And now, continuing his story...








So here I am...





This place must be why artists paint.

This whole place is creepy and yet beautiful. When deer children stopped chasing me for two hours, I had a true chance to look and see this forest.





The slight snow in this forest makes me think of the times when I was little.


Maybe, if I get over the creepy deer children, I can actually enjoy this place... While I'm here of course. I must find a way to get out of here. Away from all these deer children. ...I definitely don't want to see the grown ups either. The kids were messed up enough. But no matter...



I must think of the present.

For the moment, I have a dry place to enjoy the snow and strange circumstance I am in.





I just hope that I can stay away from those deers.
cyra33's picture

how do I....

turn left and right while sitting. I can move backwards and forwards, but i cant turn, how do i do it?
Cheshire's picture

Mooff!

seriously. That is what you sounded like. I don't have a scanner(yet) so i cannot upload the picture that I drew, but it was basically me sleeping during abiogenisis, and some deer(awesome antlers) runnin and and shouting"MOOFF!"
Lacey's picture

I need some support :P

For some reason, while I was in the forest I sort of felt invisable. Sticking out tongue I felt like no one even saw me. Maybe it's just my mind playing with me since my parents seperated... But still I'm hurting. I think I should try harder to make friends... Any advice?

I feel like writing a story... a love story <3 Sticking out tongue And you know what I am. x3

Dealy for those with Requsts.

As much as I don't want to admit it, I do have a human life, which make me sad. I wish I could be on this 24/7 but I can't. Tomarrow my Godmother is returning from a two week sorrow 'vacation', her brother was killed in a car accident (he was 37), and I need to be there for her when she gets back. So I'm sorry to say I won't be able to go on tomarrow hardly at all. And today I have to practice my Hebrew for my lesson tomarrow. (Weds. Is PACKED with junk, like Writers circle and Hebrew!)... I want to surprise my Godmother with my Hebrew (which she told me to practice before she left), and I never did.... SOOO. I'm a hair busy, please be patient! Thanks!!
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New Bios...again.

Name: Aeros
Age: Older adult
Gender: Stag
Picto: Here!
How to Rember it: It looks like a...tree or something.
Set: Orca pelt, Long mask, poppied antlers
Personality: Aeros is calm, quiet, and extremely wise. He's gentler and kind, blatantly refusing to fight and doing his best to prevent others from doing so. More intelligent then most deer, he prefers to wander around the Forest and observe its beauty. He does like hanging out with other deer, but usually only a few at a time. XD He'll play with fawns, but being old, he gets tired VERY easily. He LOVES to tell stories. He kind of feels like he's too old for a doe, so he's sweet to everyone. u.u When he thinks about having a mate, he gets kind of sad, actually.
Mate: None...he thinks his time has passed.
Friends: Plenty!
Other:
-If he gets excited while talking to you, he's telling a story. 8D He specializes in legend and lore.
-Being older, he tires quickly. After a period of excessive running or whatever, he'll lay down for a bit to regain energy.
- He'll NEVER get mad at you. Ever. XD He's way too patient.
-Aeros has kind of adopted the other deer of mine. XD Even Pan, though she's an outcast.
Songs: Never Ending Story - Within Temptation
Pics: Storyteller
Text color: This color red

Name: Loop
Age: Young Adult
Gender: Doe
Picto: Here!
How to Rember it: I dunno...reminds me of a jewel.
Set: Kirin pelt, Peacock feathers, Real Deer mask
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VISTA users HELP me!

I need an alter ego. but I canot continue to torture my friends each time I need my other pelt design. I need specific instructions on how to save my spell data. pretend I am 5 as you tell me this... you will get a drawing if it helps!!!!


HELP!!!!
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Life Updates.

Feel free to steal. :3

Call me: Fayne
I feel: Tired and muddled.
I am currently: At the desktop, preparing to draw and scan and write.
I am residing in: Kill Devil Hills, NC
What's on my plate? Nothing. :C
Anything special planned today? So much scanning. D: And drawing and catching up.
Notes: Leaving later today to go to my best friend's house. :DDD
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