Yara's Beginning

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Chapter 1
The abandonment

The breeze ruffled the young fawn's fur as she stumbled onto her wobbly legs. Her large eyes met her mother's as she fell down onto the grass again. Her mother turned to her father and said,"I've never seen a deer this strange color before...black and white..." The fawn started jumping around while they spoke. "What's wrong with her? Everyone is different, in many ways or one..." The fawn looked to her father with more wisdom than you should see in the eyes of a fawn. A yellow light burst out of her forhead and struck her mother, turning her blue with yellow stripes. Her mother jumped back in fright. "This is your fault Janga!!" she screamed frightninly at the stag."You take this fawn, this, this creature! and take care of her yourself!" The fawn ran behind her father, worried for her safety. The doe walked away, not looking back.

Chapter 2
The Flood

"Yara...that will be your name...yes it fits..." Jango nuzzled his fawn. But why did she leave her to me? he thought. "Da....Dada?" Yara's first word escaped her lips. She romper and played with her father. "Dada dada dada!!!" A drumroll of thunder sounded, and Jango shooed her inside a cave. She cowered helplessly as a monsoon started. Jango moved Yara to a high slope whN water began to pool around their hooves. A huge wave washed over the hill, carrying Yara and Jango with it. Then everything went black.

Chapter 3
The Endless Forest

"bleeeeeeeeeehhhhhhh!" Yara coughed up some water and looked around. She was sitting on the shore of a strange, unfamiliar pond. "Hello?" the little black and white fawn said through the bright light. Looking up, she saw a light above her head, and looking forward, she saw another doe. The doe said, "Well hello little one, who might you be?" I am Tara, a deer here in The Endless Forest!" Tara gestured to the beautiful landscape around her. Yara was stunned, but not by the view. "W-What's wrong with your face? Why is it flat like that?" Tara smiled. "Well that's how all of us look here Kahara. In our language that means 'sproutling.'

Chapter 4
The Amnesia

"Ugh I must have hit my head...Kahara? Is that my name? She asked the doe. "Well golly you must have amnesia! Lemme see....Sweetheart, do you know you have antlers? They're little blue nibs up here." She said, gesturing at two other lumps on her head. "And there is a lump here too...." Tara poked the lump. "OUCH!!!" Kahara jumped away. "I remember...my father...a big....red stag with big red antlers and a face like mine. Have you seen him?" Tara shook her head. "Well, I best be going then..." Kahara trotted off into the horizon, searching.

Chapter 5
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pooo no comments. im working

pooo no comments. im working hard on this!
-Tabby
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Eeee! First comment

Eeee! First comment AngelWings! Don't lose hope! Anyhows I really like this idea! I like how the flood washes Yara in the Endless Forest. Honestly I wouldn't know how you would get to the Endless Forest anyhow. Eye
Tamatamatamatama....
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Yay thanks! Heh I got the

Yay thanks! Heh I got the idea when Yara slipped and didn't turn onto a frog in the pond. so I clicked play as a fawn and loaded her set.
-Tabby
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Well, it certainly was a good

Well, it certainly was a good idea! Eye Oh and btw most likely the reason no one is commenting on your stuff is because they're all just too lazy to read anything. When you go to the writing section like half of the writings only have about 3 comments. It's really sad. Sad Everyone is more interested in pictures. Puzzled
Tamatamatamatama....
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heh oh

heh oh Puzzled
-Tabby

"most likely the reason no

"most likely the reason no one is commenting on your stuff is because they're all just too lazy to read anything."

What a rude thing to say, I hope you treat people with a bit more respect in RL.

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AngelWings, may I give you a critique?
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Go right ahead xylv!

Go right ahead xylv! Smiling
-Tabby