August 13, 2009 - 8:13pm — Vira
-The cold air gave a chill to the bone that could never be repeated. Screams of pain ripped from the fawns mouth as he was slammed against the trunk of a large tree. The sent of purple flowers wafted through the air as they were splattered with young blood. Tossing his head, the small black fawn struggled to be free of the white antlers that surrounded him, pinning him to his death bed. Blood drooled at the corner of the fawns mouth as the antlers pressed harder and harder against his underside. As the antlers dug deep into his skin, the fawn coughed, sending blood showering the white cage he had gotten himself into. A smirk and a laugh was all the large stag did as he pressed his captive to the breaking point.
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As the dawn called, winter birds chirped merrily to one another.
The blood covered snow and flowers showed of a slaughter, but nobody paid any mind. The only thing that truly caught anyones attention was the strange little black fawn with a blood red mark on his face. Its body shivered, trying to keep itself warm as many a doe, stag, and fawn passed by to the grazing area without a second glance. Trying to stand, the fawns body was hit with a wave of burning pain and confusion causing him to fall back down into his blood covered snow. Screaming in pain, he struggled to move, struggled to survive. 'I w-will not be taken down t-that easily next t-time. Once Im better h-he will pay for the suffering he has given to m-me'
Once he gave up on moving from his spot, he curled his body to try and keep warm. Wounds re-opening caused his young body to give a scream of agony that ended with a thick cough, splattering more blood onto the snow.-
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Just a little part of the story I was planning to write for Envy to explain why he is so afraid of the large white antlers. I may finish it but im not sure xD
edit~ added moar >D
8O Continue it, please!
-- Dannii <3
I added more for yous |D My
Yey! <333 I love it sdkghrj
-- Dannii <3
xD My Deer
The large white antlers? ...
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If you can't confuse people with your intelligence, amaze them with your bullshit.
Curse you evil squiggly
Usually I skip over stories
thanks Tera :3 I should add
I should add to it later on ^^
Oh right, you want some
I can't find anything to complain about. It's a fine piece of someone's lifestory. You clearly have written a lot of stories, you have talent. ^^
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If you can't confuse people with your intelligence, amaze them with your bullshit.
I actually dont write that
Although I may start to if people like my stories enough |D
Oh goodness. The mental
i smell impending revenge
Lady H: -growls- I hate
Oo -meep- Poor Envy! MOAR! I vote for more! 8D