Time-wasting

adderskin's picture
Stirring deep within the mind,
An evil creature you shall find,
This thing it goes by the name of Love,
And takes the form of a snow-white dove,

Many emotions this creature will spark,
Bull-dozing through, yet leaving no mark,
Instead, it builds spiked walls around the heart,
For Love and Jealousy will not part.

Love will never leave us be,
It clouds our judgement and what we see,
Love is a creature, fearless and bold,
It will not leave us even when we grow old.

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Any one want to critique?
Serenai's picture

I think true love is beyond a

I think true love is beyond a negative~ But that is me.

I like your use of rhyme. It's constant, but not constraining. c:
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Snowsauria's picture

I like it. n_n

I like it. n_n