Thunderence;; stress-relieving poem written whilst it thundered

Anzel's picture
The diamonds crash
As the blood crashes
As the thunder rolls
And the lightning ashes
I blame your ways
On chemists plunders
With double knives
And sharper blunders


I fang your eyes
I fang your soul
I plead to die
I lose control
I spit your blood
Unto the floor
I sniff the rot
I fave the gore


The thunder purrs
The morn is young
The night is old
And time has one
So cometh forth
And make your play
You know the score
You take the day


I sit and watch
I sit and wait
I see black bones
Lie at your gate
Bones wet of tears
Gone soft of cries
When something lives
The lesser dies


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Wow.

That poem did the trick.

Thank you, my deer ^^;
Emiva's picture

The purple verse was my

The purple verse was my favorite. d;kfjasd you are so talented. *dies kindof*



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Hubalaboo's picture

It's just so... so...

It's just so... so... omgosh... Just wow. Okay? Laughing out loud And you better be saving these poems somewhere cause you could make a book out of them and sell it. The rhyming and rhythm is amazing... *bows*
The last verse is my favorite.
But the line 'the thunder purrs' gives me a crazy image of a giant white electric cat that lives in the clouds. Ahah I'm sorry ^^;

I've sent you a PM on the forums, btw.
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Anzel's picture

Not saving them, but I might

Not saving them, but I might be transferring a few to my dA account soon...