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A Story

It's just an experiment of mine. I wrote this myself, in my own version, but I went by the book of Genesis as a reference. Poetry does not always need to rhyme, so I gave that a thought.








Pride. Evil. Conceit.
A place too purely perfect for dark presences
An epic argument between two entities
Good and Evil
The winner was to expel the looser
Everyone knew that Good would win; it always does
It was then that the angel fell,
Taking admirers with him.
Evil he was, and so became his followers.


The Earth and all its brightness, glory, excellence
Would forever spoil.
Two humans
One demon-possessed reptile
And a test of trust
Cunning, trickery, deceit
"Just one bite", said it, "and you will know what He knows."
A lie, Eve accepted
She bit the accursed fruit
The fate of the planet then befell him,
Adam.
His choice would change the world
And so it did.


Fear, shame, dismay
Into darkness the planet plunged
Altering, polluting, dying
All its inhabitants would suffer the consequences
Sorrow filled the Maker's eyes
He never meant for this to happen
He had hoped they would make the right decision


Someday, He knew, all this would be repaired.
So a plan he began to formulate,
As mankind started filling the blank pages of history.


To be continued...
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Seed's Poetry Corner: A Love Letter

The poem is the explanation for the poem, I think; Only stopping to note that this has been on my mind.
A note from a later date: I suppose I should at least give some context, for a reader besides myself. As Sage, my love, is so often away, I've tried my hoof at writing letters to her, and she seems most fond of the notion. And so...


A Love Letter

I read the breeze that rushes
along the feathers of birds aflight
as an omen that, rising, hushes
me to silence. I think I might

take pen to sheet of bark pulled tight
and thinly beaten to take ink.
Oh, to use that voice you praise and write
to form between our distant hearts a link.

When the moment's come, I balk, I shrink;
my mind draws naught but clumsy, idle words,
scratched out out and pressed too far, I think:
I've no letter to send, even on the flight of birds.

Except to say simply "You are in my thoughts,
sending my breath into sighs, my words into knots."



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A single Blog.

My world, much like your world, is a fabrication. Much unlike your world, though, my world doesn't exist. I seem to be lost forever in my dreams, drifting along through an endless black sea reflecting stars overhead. I just float, cannot move. The only feeling I have is the pain deep in my chest, in my heart. It sets my blood vessels aglow and burns in my center as if the heart that once was there was replaced by embers. No matter how hard I try my heart doesn't even spark, just slowly burns. Sometimes, though, it will flicker into a light flame. The weight of the tinder inside it will be removed, my spirit lifted for a moment... a light among many other lights. I am not conscious for this, but I like to think I am burning brighter than those other lights.

But when I grow dim I grow dormant. I just float on in that black sea beneath the night sky filled with stars.



-

Gently I am lifted from the inky sea. The darkness clings on in a coat of thick blue. My skin sparkles with s thousand stars, clustered together like galaxies from the inky sea. Gently, the sea is wiped from my form. I float gently through this bath of white dew, a cloud made to cleanse the darkness from body and soul. The little spark in my heart jumps, fearful of the wetness yet happy to be rid of the sea that it worked so hard to light past. The cumulus soothes me. I could float here forever, but that is not the plan for me.

Springy moss cradles me now. My heart-spark calmly flickers. A small flame burns within now, a candle inside. Hope.

-

I sit here, my body heavier than before. It seems that things around me had begun shrinking over the course of these days and nights. It is an enchanting thing, to grow outwardly. Two tree limbs have grown forth from my head, though they seem to be made much more strong than the wooden boughs. Are they stone, maybe? Or is it that they are Being, like me? If they grew from me, they must be Being.
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Seed's Poetry Corner: An Autumn Passing


An Autumn Passing

Willow leaves, faded brown
and damp from lifted fog,
rustle under belly --
the great grey expanse
of dimming autumn sky,
days like running breaths,
short gasps of light --
I read the course of my absence
from their figures, and hidden
in the silence of a companion's wounds.

This, like autumn, will pass me by.



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Ebony3's picture

Vent

The sore knuckles of my left hand
The bones in my forearm ache
It hurts

13 hours of sleep
Still tired
Work to do
Time to spend, tomorrows to recompense

Am I strong?
No.
Am I weak?
No.
Somewhere in between?
Yes.

Feels like I'll be here when forever ends
But we all still die
Tomorrow is another day after all

But I want to go home
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Balahin

Balahin (Ball-a-hen) is just a young little thing.
Pelts of blue, pelts of whites;
it's never the same.
She stays around the Graveyard,
why could that be?
Was it her late husband
or her child to be?
She's a sad little thing,
such a waste,
on a pretty little face.
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all i could put in this morning.

It's a feeling of being blessed.

The world spread before him forever blooms in lush greenery and brilliant flowers. Each leaf appears to be created from emeralds, an expert craftsman carved centurion birch and oak from nothing at all as pedestals for the small treasures. Below these beautiful leaves flows a carpet of the softest grass and mosses one could ever imagine.

It is the sight of heaven itself.

He felt unworthy to even view such a place. The great marble statue behind him seemed to silently urge the deer on like gentle parents.

Page carved his way down the hill toward the crystal pool below. The Gods watched on with white stone eyes as their newest child reached the muddy edge. Cold water lapped at the shore, drawing the stagling nearer to the deep expanse. The world seemed to slow as the being neared the precipice and peered over into the pond. The new hue to his fur mimicked the gemstone world he now called home. The buck didn't believe his reflection was really his new form. The little light of his forest name glowed gently above his head. It was him.
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A Couple of Sonnets I Wrote for my Poetry Class.

The first sonnet is a Shakespearean sonnet, the second is a Italian. Hope ya like it.

The bitter wicked end is nigh, they say.
The Horsemen ride to waste humanity.
Winter's dire breath blew spring away,
Enshrouding all in cold depravity.
Their eyes are glazed; they weep and grope.
Their final strongholds crumbled in the storm,
The vengeful wolves have slain their fragile hope,
And their dreams now glut the maw of sightless worm.
My woes are many, but I'm fearful not.
I've seen a beauty that assuages pain.
The warmth of humanity is not forgot
So long as this, a spark, remain:
The world is dark; compassion is the light.
Hold dear the ones you love; drive back the night.



I swim a fearful tidal wave and struggle as it builds a swell
Of orange, fuchsia, on a ripe-red sunrise sea.
I think I hear the music of a young and ancient mystery,
While the water tugs my caked mud shell.
In the warméd arms, the richly tainted water
The accumulated filth begins to peel away,
And my exposéd skin so trembles in the sight of day,
But I'm held fast and gentle by the sky and ocean's daughter.
An ice cold fear grasps hard my heart,
And doubt plants weeds within my brain.
I fear of this majestic sea, that I may be swallowed, and die.
But my greater fear is not knowing my secret part,
That a greater reward is worth this pain.
And so I spread my arms out wide, and free within this ocean's deeps, I fly.
Ebony3's picture

Beyond

Over in eternity
Silence will come to me
Where the sky meets the sea

Nobody will remember me
Nobody will wait for me
Eternity is what I'll be

Continuing endlessly
Going on endlessly

The only thing that's permanent
Before the world meets its end
Part of the past
Stuck in the past

Forgotten eternally
Nothing gained, nothing lost
Hard to remember, easy to forget

One day to the next
What will be will be
Look onto eternity

help

im stuck in the stachu and i cand get out somone plz tell me whats up :'(
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