A Story

Elzire's picture
It's just an experiment of mine. I wrote this myself, in my own version, but I went by the book of Genesis as a reference. Poetry does not always need to rhyme, so I gave that a thought.








Pride. Evil. Conceit.
A place too purely perfect for dark presences
An epic argument between two entities
Good and Evil
The winner was to expel the looser
Everyone knew that Good would win; it always does
It was then that the angel fell,
Taking admirers with him.
Evil he was, and so became his followers.


The Earth and all its brightness, glory, excellence
Would forever spoil.
Two humans
One demon-possessed reptile
And a test of trust
Cunning, trickery, deceit
"Just one bite", said it, "and you will know what He knows."
A lie, Eve accepted
She bit the accursed fruit
The fate of the planet then befell him,
Adam.
His choice would change the world
And so it did.


Fear, shame, dismay
Into darkness the planet plunged
Altering, polluting, dying
All its inhabitants would suffer the consequences
Sorrow filled the Maker's eyes
He never meant for this to happen
He had hoped they would make the right decision


Someday, He knew, all this would be repaired.
So a plan he began to formulate,
As mankind started filling the blank pages of history.


To be continued...



Music player code is from Unplugged's CSS Quick Reference page, music is by a band called Ratatat, hexadecimal color code found here -> http://www.december.com/html/spec/color1.html
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DeerUniverse's picture

o-o whoa. that's really good.

o-o whoa. that's really good. Did you write that yourself? you should get that published or something...it sounds epic. Sticking out tongue
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Elzire's picture

yes, I did. Thank you guys

yes, I did. Thank you guys ^.^
How do you describe both the beginning and the end? We should have known better, but we didn't. What does it matter what we think we know? In the end, there's no denying the truth. - Left Behind --[Art by Aquilo]