November 2, 2011 - 5:42am — sunwindow
Once there was a deer named Sara Cloud she loved to hop and hop and hop! She was a yung fawn she loved the flowers and the fresh are that blew around her. One day she went for a walk with her mom to the lake they wanted to go swiming but the mom just was planning to watch so all her masks and fur color would not go away.So they walked and walked then finaly they got to the lake Sara saw some fawns jumping in the lake trying to make huge splashes! As the day past Sara had to go home so they said good bye to there new friends and her and her mom Dawn started home. .................... '' I think were going in circles mom.'' Said Sara feeling a bit scared. It was night the wind was blowing hard making it harder to move! The leaves were flying in the sky! Lightning and Thunder came making Sara scared! ''We half to get home your father will be worried!''Dawn said just then the wind stopped the lightning and thunder stopped and the leaves went to the ground. ''What could this mean?'' Asked Sara ''Im not sure but we cant go any were with this fog. ''Im tired can we rest till the fog goes away?'' Sara wondered ''Ok but we half to get back home before the sun comes up!'' But...........Before they could rest......They herd somthing..............BIG........coming closer and closer......................out of the mist came........................................................................................................................a bunny! but this bunny was limping his foot was hurt! Sara and Dawn new there was danger in the forest! They could hear dear running right bye them mooing Danger Danger! Birds were flying every were! They all Screamed Avalanche Avalanche Snow RUN!!! They ran as fast as they could wondering were all the snow came from the avalanche was right behind them! Dawn leaped in the are as she ran but she tripped over a log and the avalanche got her! Sara saw a cave and she dashed forward but the avalanche was faster just before the avalanche could reach her she got to safety in the cave. "MOM!'' Sara shouted she rushed over the fallen snow and started to dig deep in the snow. As morning came Sara was still digging finally she found her in the snow cold hardly alive! Sara draged her out of the snow and put her in the sun so she could be warm. 2 Hours later....Dawn opened her eyes. ''Mom are you ok? Asked Sara ''Im fine'' Dawn tryed to get up but she fell to the grownd. ''MOM!'' Dawn tryed again finally she stood up. ................Chapter 2 is Coming soon!
MADE ON: Tuesday, November