May 15, 2011 - 12:54am — Silvasemper
The first dim rays of sunlight shone through the thick boughs of the trees, a jumble of oak, redwood, pine, popular, and the occasional stray birch. A small circular cluster of reddish white toadstools formed a tightly knit fairy ring around my body. As the flickering warmth of the new dawn tempted me from my rest, soft sounds echoed richly from within the curving barriers of leaf and stone that surrounded me. The sound of softly gurgling water and the high trilling laughter of fawns sang dizzily to the melody of the song birds. A whisper of rabbit ear moss and moor heather curled into the depths of my conscience, lifting the tired rims of my lightly hued eyelids, tickling my long black eyelashes into the thin crack that had formed along my dimly lit iris. Stifling a yawn, I looked around the sun touched sides of my cavern. River moss softened the mellow, rich dirt that clumped in the corners of the cave, well lichen and ivy tendrils danced softly to the cooing caress of the forest breezes, lighting the shallow pool of rain and river water collected in the corner of my secret sanctuary, pure and cold, but sweet like the meadow grass that grew at the Twin Gods shrine. The vibrant hues of poppy and wild marigold blended o the harmonies pigment of the lovely and mesmerizing scents of wild Thyme and garlic, with strong whiffs of basil and other earthen herbs. Morning had come at last.
This is my first Diary entry. I hope you like it!
Very beautiful writing,
But, um, may I ask about your character's name? You see, I have a character named Stormbringer (who is very different from yours, it seems) but since it is quite a specific name, there might be some confusion between the two.
So I'm asking, could you maybe, perhaps, change it? I understand if you don't want to and that is fine, I just thought I would ask.
Tentivly, I stood and
Je suis un chrétien fier
Anima Wolf
Spirtus tempestatis
I really adore this writing.
(thanks, starling! The avatar is amazing! And Thanks Pretzil for the siggie!
Stormbringer is the name of
Je suis un chrétien fier
Anima Wolf
Spirtus tempestatis
(Thank you Moon!)
Je suis un chrétien fier
Anima Wolf
Spirtus tempestatis
Oh, okay. Ah well, thank you
And thank you. I'm sorry that
Je suis un chrétien fier
Anima Wolf
Spirtus tempestatis
As I bowed vigorously, I
(What?? There are cannibal deer! I think . . .) But it did something much worse. It stood there, with its rows of white teeth, all sharpened to a point and drenched in a red mixture of blood and sweat and terror. My eyes rolled back into my head, and I stumbled away, off into the forest as fast as my legs could carry me. Away, away, from something only words can partial describe. When I had run as far I could, I collapsed, my energy spent, but my fear still new as a spring bird. I had only a second to think before I fell into a deep sleep: I am completely, and utterly lost.
Je suis un chrétien fier
Anima Wolf
Spirtus tempestatis
Not as old as yours -- his
Cool, I like his picture.
Je suis un chrétien fier
Anima Wolf
Spirtus tempestatis