Song of a Tiny Soul

Fahnette's picture
Um... hello, I'm new here in this big world.
Can you show me around a bit, please?
Can I follow you for a little while?
Just a little while, until I go to sleep.
And can I ask you things?
One or two questions, that is all.

I think I like the purple flowers best
But the red flowers sing in the wind.
Can you hear them? I can.
I guess because I'm new here.
Does everything sing in this place?
Maybe that's why I get sleepy.

The big statue at the end of the Pond
Always seems so lonely to me.
Can we go there, please?
I want to talk to him a bit.
I think he needs a friend or two
Just like I do.

Am I asking you too much?
I just want to understand it all!
Who made the birds and the frogs
And the squirrels and the trees
And us? Are we dreams here
or are we really real like the sky?
Can I dance with you?

Will you stay with me in the flower patch
Until I fall asleep?
I felt quite safe with you today
And I just want to find my way
I don't mean to ask too much
But I'm new here in this big world.

--for Blacksoul
ocean's picture

Aww, I really like it. ^^

Aww, I really like it. ^^
Fahnette's picture

Thank you! To fling my

Thank you! Smiling

To fling my arms wide in the face of the sun, Dance! Whirl! Whirl! Til the quick day is done...
To fling my arms wide in the face of the sun, Dance! Whirl! Whirl! Til the quick day is done...


Fenqua's picture

That's so sweet, I can

That's so sweet, I can imagine this being a song. With tender piano music. <3



To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
Fahnette's picture

A song would be so cool! And

A song would be so cool!
And then play the song over in-game footage of a fawn following a grown-up deer around the Forest.

To fling my arms wide in the face of the sun, Dance! Whirl! Whirl! Til the quick day is done...
To fling my arms wide in the face of the sun, Dance! Whirl! Whirl! Til the quick day is done...


XxBlackSoulxX's picture

omg i luuuuv this!!! u hav a

omg i luuuuv this!!! u hav a very good talent for poems O_O

© Rell
Fahnette's picture

So glad you like it,

So glad you like it, consider it a Happy Early Birthday present! (mine's the 26th, yay Virgos!)

To fling my arms wide in the face of the sun, Dance! Whirl! Whirl! Til the quick day is done...
To fling my arms wide in the face of the sun, Dance! Whirl! Whirl! Til the quick day is done...


XxBlackSoulxX's picture

yah totally this is like the

yah totally this is like the best b-day present ever lol Happy Birthday! xD

© Rell