[ sociopath ]



when I stand outside your door, I hope that you don't mind
'cause if you ever knew me, you'd know that I'm unkind
I'm a madman and a sociopath, I don't know how to feel
and yet I think my love for you is beautiful and real

well where do you go at night, where do you go?
I can't seem to see you through your window
crawl into the bathroom and there do I see
you, in the arms of a mule, and not me

can't you see it's going to rain? I'll knock on your windowpane
everything still seems the same, and yet I think I'm insane
I'll be drownin' in the drain, I'm a man that can't be tamed
all my love's in vain, every inch of you I'll claim

love is a bed for the blues, dear
white sheets to use and abuse, here
gone are the days of Victorian fear
you'd learn to love if you'd just let me near

when I'm running after him, I hope that you don't see
as the dagger cuts through skin, you'll only think of me
I could show you everything, on the earth and in the trees
we'd be a camoflauge of sin, and we'd only live to please

I see you at night, I see you at night you know
I'm not sure why I'm still here for you
sink into mud and trenchwater, now
broken the Lord's most sacred vow

won't you whisper to the light? I can blot it out with night
you'll go down without a fight, I can break you down to cry
I would sentence you to death, hear your last, your dying breath
there's a lesson to be learned - my suicide was earned.
Pegasicorn's picture

Whoa. Just whoa. And I could

Whoa. Just whoa.

And I could definitely hear this to music.
ocean's picture

Whoo. *u* I love your sense

Whoo. *u* I love your sense of rhythm and rhyme, it's so good.
Also, is that supposed to be in the shape of a woman? 'Cause that's what I see. v:

I'm in love with the last

I'm in love with the last verse. ♥

-seconds Pega- Your writing

-seconds Pega- Your writing is so epic.

@ocean: You talkin' about the text? Because I see a head with a top hat xD... [/random]
Kumiko's picture

Chilling. It made me think

Chilling.

It made me think of a term that is used to describe people like that - obsessed with a lover to the point of killing them so they can never love anyone else - but I can't remember what its called. That's going to bother me all day now...

Pega; sdfj

Pega; sdfj <3 gooood |: It's far more of a song than a poem.

Ocean; MAN that made me so happy ;; I actually didn't intend or notice that at all, but it fits so well regardless sdfkj thankyou!

theswan; I'm in love with you |: /MAULED no but thankyou :'D

AA; JUST YOU RUIN THE APPROPRIATE IMAGERY sfkdfhj iloveyou

Kumiko; ...I know what term you're thinking of but I CAN'T REMEMBER IT EITHER goddaaaaamn but thankyou~
ickydog's picture

This . . . .is so amazing.

This . . . .is so amazing. Really. I love it. And yes, it seems fitting for a song. And I would buy it. Yes I would.
*gives cookies to MoonlitStar*
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Sighthoundlady's picture

Oh my goodness, that is

Oh my goodness, that is creepy/scary. Well written!
z.m123's picture

&hearts; &hearts;

♥ ♥

Hnnn you guys

Hnnn you guys <3 Thankyeeew.