September 27, 2011 - 11:49pm — MissButterflyCaught
The animal swished its tail, nibbling on what was left of a swathe of green grass. Fall was coming, so the grasses were becoming tougher, wilting or freezing depending on the flux of hot and cold weather. Iphea raised his head, inhaling the crisp air before he began his trot in to the First Forest. His destination was the Great Oak, smiling as he went. A meal awaited him there, a meal of acorns.
Iphea's instincts took him to find more acorns than he could eat. The closer to winter, the more the stag had to bulk up. There would be no food soon, with all of the plants beginning to go dormant for the seasons of sleet, ice, and snow again.
The shade of those huge branches was dappled with even darker shades. Little, semi-round achenes littered the ground. They ticked and scuffled as the big stag walked through them, snuffling to find the ripe kernels. They crunched between his lower-teeth and the hard palette that replaced his upper ones, such as would be found in any other deer. The distinct taste of acorns filled his senses, and he grunted in appreciation. He would fatten himself up off of them for the next months.
sees the stag and call out
what he so calls it, smiles at him and says: hello there and may i have some food
please? my sparkling blue eyes turn dun a little, and my pelt is dirty
and sees the stag eating his acorns and lays down waiting for a reply
soon.
is so skinny has ticks and is
his acorns watches him with hunger and pain. eyes turns white moans weakly.
Wolfy, This plot seems to be
This plot seems to be the exact same one as my rp with Ickydog. In that plot my character was sick from ticks, and Ickydog's Roe healed him. Iphea is not a healer deer, so he really can't do anything here.
I am having a little bit of difficulty with your style as well. I can't quite understand when you aren't writing in full sentences and have no punctuation except at the end of each of your...umm... phrases.
Please "step it up"... RP seriously and originally, Otherwise I will abandon the thread. I am not trying to be harsh here, but this is kind-of ridiculous. If you are old enough to be on the internet, you are old enough to at least use full sentences and an original plot.
<3
THE TICKS ARE DEAD K AND IM
AND IM SICK FROM A FEVER
AND THE FAWN IM HAVING IS ALSO MAKING ME SICK
SORRY FOR CAPS
Yes, and Iphea is not a
dead fleas show on pelt and
and gets out pelt is dun and shiny a little smiles dead fleas are in the pond and hops around happly sees clear again jumps really high and kicks of leaves from the great tree falls on legs and runs around is very happy almost kicks the stag and kicks him softly and playfully sees the acorns
walks off dancing tail waging danceswhile smileing at you greeting you to dance with me
birds sing. bird feather antlers shine. sees sun light smiles.
Wolfy. You are still not
You are still not listening. I asked for full sentences and proper punctuation. I see you are hardly making an attempt to RP and, from the above caps, getting frustrated that I am not immediately satisfied.
This is very disappointing. I only ask for a few simple things, and you don't seem capable of meeting them. They are not even very picky things.
Sorry, Wolfy.
-thread closed-
RUDE! it doesnt matter how i
You can think of it as rude
You can think of it as rude if that is what you want, but I asked for you to actually put effort in to this RP and you decided to decline, so I decline RP-ing with you. It matters to me because I can hardly understand what you write, and how am I supposed to reply to you if I cannot understand it? So far everyone I have RP-ed with has been fine with using complete sentences, proper spelling, punctuation and capitalization. Grow up and realize that you may have to comply with the conditions of others to be able to do things that you want. It is a lesson in life that could get you a long way, no matter how young you are when you learn it.
Good luck with life,
Miss B.