July 3, 2011 - 10:45pm — BluedeerLegend18
So, my deer, Pierce, is severely injured and is in a coma. Voice is guarding him, watching over him, but everyday he becomes weaker.
What she doesn't know Pierce is learning a truth, a truth that would change the way other deer look at him, change the way he looks at himself.
And the truth is killing him, spilling his blood each and everyday.
In this rp, your deer must try to either help Pierce or end his misery.
You can start the RP, but here's a start if you can't think of one:
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Voice's eyes zoomed everywhere. She was worried so much it hurt. Her ears kept flicking up at every sound she heard. She looked down at Pierce's almost-dead body. He's dying... he's dying! And what can I do? Nothing!
Suddenly she heard a deer, coming. She whipped her head at the sound and focused. She saw a deer come out of the brush. Instantly she jumped up, threatening the deer. What do you want?
{My deer is able to heal
"I wish to help"replied a doe that had black fur with blue butterfly markings.Her deep blue eyes showed she was sincere.But she refrained from coming closer until she was invited.
Is there anyway I can have
I wish to help said the doe.
And how do I know you're not lying? You might be planning an attack, and before we all know it this kind, friendly buck will be gone. I've been fooled by a liar before, I don't want to risk another life. But what if this doe was right? What if she would help Pierce? She sighed.
Fine, but I'm watching you. I'll rip you to sheds if you do anything to him!
NINJA UWHARRIE IS NINJA
Sure =) do you want to start or should I start?
My butterflies will need to
She cocked her head to the side her face serious and concerned for the stag for each moment was time that was lost
Voice backed away to Pierce's
Go ahead, she decided. but remember you'll regret it if you hurt him.
She nodded and stepped
The butterflies that were on him flew off.
Yay I'll start ^^ Nane had
Nane had noticed how long Pierce had been dead to the world. Seeing Voice there, standing guard, gave her painful memories of her similair experiance.
Nanetta trotted up to the two, curiousity finally getting the better of her.
Voice stood in shock. You...
Pierce still had a huge wound on his belly and still was unconscious.
(is it okay that he still had a huge wound and was still in a coma? Because... his injuries weren't the whole reason he's in a coma right now)
{All physcal wounds should be
(ok, how about a scar
You're an awesome ninja, uwharrie
Voice jumped up, lowering her antlers and kicking dust in her face to try to shoo her away. Go! Scat! Don't you dare hurt him! From past experience she knew that this small antelope was one of Pierce's enemies. She could not trust her.
That's fine:) Tazanna
Tazanna sighed in relief seeing that his injuries were gone,but she was still worried he was unconscious.
She nuzzled his companion to wake her up hoping she didn't receive any injuries when she feinted
Lol, I try Nanetta was back
Nanetta was back to her healthy, quick self. She jumped gracefully out of the way of the bit of dust Voice had kicked up, unafraid at her show. She had a bit of sympathy for the doe and didn't blame her even slightly... Nane herself had been the same way with Flammel.
Her eyes and voice were calm and guarded as she spoke to the taller doe, "I wouldn't hurt him... Not unless there was a perfectly good reason, which there doesn't seem to be one at the moment."
It was the truth. Nane wouldn't dare harm anyone or anything unless it was in defense of her or a loved one. She wasn't the kind for revenge.
Voice slowly got up and shook
I healed all of his physicall
You are now officially the
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I wouldn't hurt him... Not unless there was a perfectly good reason, which there doesn't seem to be one at the moment.
Really? Because there always seems to be a reason to hurt him. You don't understand him. He's just... different. He deserves to live! Voice stood as tall as she could, her shadow swallowing up Nane's body, trying to scare her away.
I am failing from Ninjaness.
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Voice shrugged. At least he isn't hurt on the outside... but he could be hurt in the inside. She was worried if something was happening. A sickness? Disease?
What was happening to her friend?
I can keep a pure aura around
What's that? She asked when
It purifies any thing eveil
Voice thought for a moment.
No, I think it'll help if we leave him alone unless it's obvious he has an illness.
Voice just wasn't sure if he could trust Tazanna
LOL... I feel slow, I type
Nanetta made a quiet hum in the back of her throat at the doe's defensiveness. Trying to keep herself calm to prevent any sarcasm or harsh words from coming out.
Nane looked up at Voice, almost lazily, still clearly unafriad. She knew how she felt; Nane figured this doe, was only scared.
"Easy there... I know how you feel... I've been in this same sintuation." Nane said gently, trying to ease Voice's nerves if she could.
That fine she said shrugging
That fine she said shrugging although when I healed him I didn't feel that he had a disease I just think he needs to rest for awhile she said admiring the stag.
Voice calmed and slowly got
You... you guarded a friend too? She asked. It felt great that she was not alone.
I think I lost forever in the
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Voice nodded. That's good. At least we have some hope he'll be okay. He's in a coma so hopefully that'll give him plenty of rest. Let's just hope he wakes up soon.
"I agree"she said
"From what I see he deserves to live"she said honestly
"Do you mind if I stay and wait"she asked still looking at Pierce her eyes soft
Nane nodded slowly. "Guarded
"Guarded not only my friend, but my lover." She said in a quiet voice as she winced, the memory still slightly painful.
"My mate, Flammel, was in a coma for a while, not too long ago... I know, it's hard to see someone you love like that."
Nane turned her gaze to Pierce, wondering what had rendered him in that state.
Voice was still not sure if
I'm... i'm not sure. I mean... well... She sighed and said, Of course. She went back and laid down with Pierce again. She knew she was risking Pierce's life, but, at least he was better, so he wouldn't be instantly killed.
Tazanna backed off a bit
"He has to get better since he has soo many people rooting for him"she said trying to cheer the doe up
I'll go jump off a cliff if
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Guarded not only my friend, but my lover. My mate, Flammel, was in a coma for a while, not too long ago... I know, it's hard to see someone you love like that.
Ah, you're mate. Yes, Pierce had told me about him. It must of hurt so bad to see your mate right at death's hands... She looked at Pierce. He was still in a coma.
Nane... why are you here if you don't want to hurt him?
*shoots chest* --- I
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I guess... hopefully the Twin Gods will see that and bring him back. She looked at Pierce's face, mask less. She yearned to see his green eyes. But they were shut, and there was nothing but blue fur.
lol it's not that
Tazanna nodded "You love him don't you"she asked
Voice's heart started to pump
But Voice's mind was swimming. Do I love him? Do I love Pierce? she wondered as she looked down at his fluffy neck. She face planted in his fluff, trying to get rid of the thoughts.
Never... trust... someone... never... love... someone!
Tazanna smilled gently at the
Nane's eyes shot back up to
"Ever heard the phrase "Curiousity killed the cat"?" she asked nonchalantly."Well... That's becoming my life story."
It was true. Her curiousity had nearly gotten her eaten several times and... indecently exploited...
But she still couldn't seem to keep herself from poking her nose in places it didn't belong.
She turned her gaze, once more, to Pierce, "Do you know what happened?"
faunet- Voice held her head
Voice held her head up and looked at Tazanna, and nodded. Don't worry. You'll find someone that loves you one day. Everyone falls in love in their life, it is just a matter if you keep loving them or not. Or, sometimes, they won't love you. Love can sometimes be complicated.
uwharrie-
Still cautious, Voice replied, I'm not exactly sure, really. One day I was standing in the pond's shallow waters when I saw blood in the water. I dived down and saw Pierce underwater, with a white sword jammed in his chest. I saved him from drowning and pulled the sword out, and once I saw all that blood gushing out I knew he had a 99% chance of dying. The fact he survived this long is... well... a miracle... he was not lucky, the Twin Gods had to of gave him a second chance at life.
(Mind if I roleplay with
(Not at all! I love roleplay
"Hm, how puzzling." Nane
If someone stabbed him, he must have done something really bad, she thought. It made her no more trusting of the stag she was already weary of.
(Excellent) There he
There he sat.
Big, ugly, greed and hunger flashing in his dust-brown eyes as he sat up in a tree and watched the small doe defending a much larger peacock stag. He was curled up slightly, chest featheres ruffled and head pulled into them. Taking a half-nap, but still watching.
After some time of simply staring, the condor purred and dropped to the ground, swooping out of the tree and landing in front of the tiny doe. He stood at more than four feet tall and weighed at least thirty pounds.
"If you don't mind..." He said to her, his voice low and slow and in a constant purr. "...I'll just take my dinner and leave, lovely."
Voice also had wondered what
Voice suddenly remembered what that doe, Tazanna, had said. She thought for a while, and no words came out of her mouth, then said to Nane, Nanetta... have you ever had... well... romantic interest in someone, but you try to just be friends? Have you ever had that, where you don't want to love them?
Voice, unaware of the vulture
Nanetta was vaugely surprised
Sure, there had been crushes, she had been a flirtatious doe. Until she meet Flammel...
He was the only one she fell in love with, the only one that made her heart soar.
"I can't say I've been in that exact sintuation... But I feel in love with my mate, and we started out as only friends of course... Our relationship grew and one day, he asked me to be his forever." she said rather blissfully.
Nane gave a fleeting glance to both Voice and Pierce before looking off into the forest, just staring off into space. She made the connection that Voice was in love with Pierce... Even if she didn't know it herself yet. Nane loved a romantic story.
"I always wanted to love Flammi... Since the first day I meet him..." she said, then paused...
"Why would anyone not want to love someone they've already fallen in love with?" Nane asked the prodding question.
He screeched and flapped up
"Krakakakakakakah! What, you plan to try and beat me up?" He hopped up and landed on Pierce's unmoving body with a resounding thud. He held his head low and his wings out in a predatory posture. "Hm, maybe I should eat you first, pretty. As an appetizer, krakakakakakah..."
uwharrie- Well... I'm in
Well... I'm in love... with someone... Voice's pupils slid over to Pierce for a split second and then they moved back to Nane. And, long story short, I've learned that you cannot trust someone, you cannot love someone. I want to love him, but... I know I shouldn't. I just don't know what to do. I'm not even sure if he loves me back.
Ryff-
A growl came up Voice's throat and she opened her mouth to let the snarl come out. She knocked the vulture of his body and pinned him, crushing his body with her hooves. No easy lunch today!
The condor laughed
"Oh, enough! I'll kill you and just leave you for the rest of the Flock, then!"
Voice growled again, and,
You can't kill me, I'm already dead! And you're about to become dead, too!
OH LOOK A DOUBLE POST
That little blurb seemed to
About five minutes later, though, he swooped down and landed squarely on Voice's back, an impact hard enough to bring them to the ground. He pecked her flesh voraciously, his claws dug into her back so that he couldn't be dropped.
Nane cocked her head and
[=pink]"Of course you can love and trust someone." she slightly scoofed at the doe... She then took a breath and made her voice gentler.
"How would you know that he doesn't love you back if you never ask?"
Voice screamed when she felt
Uwharrie-
Well... I guess... I was afraid to ask, that's all. I mean, going up to him and proposing my love for him... I mean, he'll either say, "I love you too" or "I don't love you". And... it would break my heart to pieces if it turned out I couldn't trust him... it has happened before. And... I was hurt... for a very long time... still hurt to this day.