RP character development/interaction

Hello. This blog is just to help mature my character Aatos so that he can reach his - uh - full potential.
Anybody is free to join in at any time!

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Wandering around, the young fawn pretends to be a powerful stag. He puffs out his chestfur and strikes a pose. Aatos imagined himself in all the glory of his imagination; with twenny-five tines! An' I'm really tall! An' ... he falters. What else? Ohyes. An' a reallyreally loud roar! Wish I could. and with that he plops down on the grass and sulks. Why cannae I speak? It's annoying! Because when others go... he continues his internal monologue.


~ and this, dear reader, is where you character steps in!

Aatos was beginning to regard

Aatos was beginning to regard Ranore as a... A friend. Strange thing it is, but it was true. As he wriggled back, he couldn't help but place his forelegs on Rabore's feathery back and lip at his small ear tufts adoringly. It was a way of expressing his affection- at least, when he could reach their ears. Cheekily, he climbed up and over to the other side of him, just in a childish attempt to annoy his new 'friend'.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

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Echosong sat down near the

Echosong sat down near the pair of fawns, observing the antics of the smaller one with amusement. "It is. " Adressing the little fawn, she said "It is a very remarkable talent. How did you learn how to do that?"

Ceasing to wriggle, Aatos

Ceasing to wriggle, Aatos 'stood' to attention; ears pricked, eyes focused. How to explain this? The pictures flashed into her mind in quick succession; A spell, magic being cast, two glowing strings being twisted and him as a newborn. He didn't know any other way to describe how a spell had gone twisted and warped. His expression saddened, and he pressed closer to Ranore's light build.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

OOC: Quote:February 19, 2013

OOC:
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February 19, 2013 - 9:20am — NikaGika
She smiled and trotted behind the fawn to the saftey of the trees. It was nice and dry under their long branches, and she plopped right beside quite a large tree. "Do you have any family?" she asked the little fawn.
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@Nika I'm so sorry- I

@Nika
I'm so sorry- I probably didn't see that part. DX
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Family? His family was probably long gone from the fields of flowers - not like his missed them. They thought him as much too different. He flashed towards her a vague memory of a hazy, sunny day and the silhouettes of his family, before sending another picture, a shake of his head.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

OOC: Ha ha! xD! It's okay!

OOC: Ha ha! xD! It's okay! Laughing out loud

"Oh, you don't like your family? I suppose I don't like mine either, well my step-mother," she said adjusting in the grass. "She was cruel, or is if she is still there."
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Ranore watched the pair,

Ranore watched the pair, wondering what the fawn was saying to her. He didn't mind being used as a couch, it brought back memories of his young children. So different, but very much the same. He allowed himself to relax to his side, his wing twitching into a more comfortable position as he half watched the fawn and doe, though viewing the world with one cloudy eye and one good eye was anything but relaxing.

Aatos is such a little cutie pie.
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@Waning-Sun and Echo His

@Waning-Sun and Echo
His companion was back! Though, the little swallow was wary so it stayed a distance away. This creature was very much like the day-time owls that seemed to want to eat it. Aatos shifted when Ranore twitched his wing slightly - was he being too heavy? But it didn't seem so, with Ranore relaxing his muscles and all. Aatos sniffed at a stray feather curiously. How could an owl-deer like this learn to fly, without any others to help him? At least, none that he had seen, but this sparked a question to Ranore; a flying owl-deer, and another one, this time a light red, and another, all the colours he had ever seen, and a head tilt.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

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Ranore was silent for several

Ranore was silent for several moments, but he finally responded with the best interpretation he could think of, "Are you asking if there are other bird deer? There are in the world I came from. They vary as much as birds do."
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@Waning-sun and Echo So that

@Waning-sun and Echo
So that was where Ranore came from! The grey fawn searches for a strange scent in Ranore's feathers in an attempt to figure out exactly where this owl-deer originated from, but found none other than the forest smells. Confused, he shook his head abruptly - that could be pondered on at a later stage. For now, he was content to sit and watch.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

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"We were born here, Silly,"

"We were born here, Silly," he murmured with a laugh, "you won't smell our homeland on us anymore."
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Sorry about the late

Sorry about the late reply!
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Echosong pondered the thought-images for a minute. Guessing the meaning, she nodded. "I understand." She listened to what Ranore said to the fawn, also curious as to the owl-deer's origins. "I think I may have seen another owl-deer a while ago. From a distance."

@Waning-sun and echo It's

@Waning-sun and echo
It's alright, echo!
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Aatos gave Ranore a lofty look - of course he knew that! Or, at least he knew that but a few seconds ago. The grey fawn's attention was diverted by the doe speaking. Upon seeing that she understood, he inclined his head with an air of dignity. He was not going to regret who he was - but if only he could speak! If he could, he would have urged the doe to say more, but all he could manage was a frantic image of him waving a leg in a beckoning fashion, and with an eager expression.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

OOC: How about I join in

OOC: How about I join in with you three, if that's alright? Smiling

@NikaGike It's sure be fine

@NikaGike
It's sure be fine by me, though, we need consent (such fancy wording, niri..) from Waning-Sun and Echo. o 3o

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

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I'm alright with you joining

I'm alright with you joining in.


I'll get some form of a response tomorrow. I'm about to crash now.


Ranore's ear twitched as he glanced toward the doe, "Really?" he tilted his head. He knew there were a couple of them around(Huh. No really there buddy?) but he hadn't had the chance to meet one, "I've seen a couple too...but...I never got to properly meet them."
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He snuggled closer to Ranore,

He snuggled closer to Ranore, trying to comfort him. Aatos didn't know whether Ranore felt sad or indifferent, but he was sure if he were in the position of the owl-deer, he'd feel rather lonely without anybody else like him to fly with. A familiar sharp pricking of claws on his back - apparently the swallow deemed this owl-deer safe for now.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

OOC: Thanks Waning-Sun!

OOC: Thanks Waning-Sun! Laughing out loud I'll wait for Echosong's reply before I start!
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It's fine with me!

It's fine with me! Smiling
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Echosong, slightly confused, asked the fawn, "Do... do you mean I should go on? About what?"
She nodded to Ranore. "Perhaps you'll get a chance some day."

Pica is with Pai and

Pica is with Pai and Rossamund right now. Sticking out tongue

And to all, if you are finding the rp to be trailing off or becoming a bit dull, it's alright for you guys to say so. After all - Aatos is a minor character of mine, so I won't be doing much about him.
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Frowning in slight annoyance, he sent a picture of a coloured owl-deer, and huffed in the spring air. Eying this doe, he assured himself that she was no threat - it was just that lying down, he felt very small indeed. Bending his neck down, still keeping an eye on the doe, he lipped at a few fresh shoots of grass.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

OOC: Okay, I'm just going to

OOC: Okay, I'm just going to reintroduce her! Laughing out loud

She had been trailing through the Wretched Wood for a few days now. Her body was covered in cuts and scratches, and her fur dank with mud and sweat. Her hooves an body ached from walkingfor so long. She was lost, tired, and hungry. Nothing in this poisonous wood was edible. The water was thick and stagnant like tar, and the mushrooms seeps with poison. There was no grass, only dirt, dead leaves, and sharp brambles that reached out to cut the poor passerby.

Nika shivered madly; she was starving. She made the mistake before of drinking the tar water out of desperation, but luckily survived that ordeal. She began to weep, "I'll never get out of here." She wept as she walked, pushing through more brambles and sharp branches, until she caught a glimpse of something. It looked like two people standing with each other in the distance. Nika nearly jumped for joy. She began to run as fast as she could to them, running through every deadly blackberry vine, and tripping over the roots of the trees and rock to her destination. Just as she was nearing the two figures, she noticed that they weren't moving. Just as she was about to encounter them, her hind leg was jerked above her, and pulled up the tree. She was trapped.

She panicked and began struggling for her life. The old rope constricted her leg; she could feel the blood leaving her legs to her head. "Please, help me!" she begged the figures, but their response was only silence. She realized that they were two statues covered in moss and bramble vines. She hung there in sadness. This was her end, to die hanging from a tree while her only companions are two ancient statues.

"No!"

"That's what she wants! She wants me to give up and die! Well, I won't have it!" She reached for the earth and dung her hooves into it, pulling her body down, and slowly making her way to the statues. She gripped one hoof behind one, and then the other. As hard as she could she pulled herself, bending the branch, until...SNAP! The branch broke, and the force pushed her forward beside the statues.

It was suddenly warm. Bewildered, she opened her eyes that she had shut when the branch broke, and looked around. It was a lovely, golden birch forest. The bark of the trees were a paper white with the beautiful black designs that were drawn into the white. Blue hyacinths grew all over in little clusters, and the birds flew and danced in them. She was in awe. In the distance, she could hear the flow of water. Her throat was dry, and she slowly stood up. The branch and rope was still attached to her leg, but she didn't care. As she walked, she dragged the dead, black branch behind her. It was heavy, but all she wanted was water.

There were voices in the distance, and her ears pricked toward them as she walked. She could figure out how to get the rope and branch off in her own. Who knows how friendly the natives are?

When she saw the pond in the distance, she began to dash to it; the branch dragging grass and dirt with it, but she didn't care. Her hooves reach the edge of the grand pond, the soft soil seeping through her hooves. She brought her lips to the water, and began to drink, not knowing that there was a small group of three behind her.
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That's a shame that he's just

That's a shame that he's just a minor character. He's such a little sweetheart.


The young male gave a nod at the doe's words, but his attention was snagged elsewhere. He pulled himself to his hooves, moving slow as to not completely upset Aatos, whatever he might have been doing at that moment, his ears perked as much as they would as he watched a doe...dragging a tree branch? He grunted his surprise at the sight, his wings twitching as he glanced over at his new companions, "Should we help...?" he jerked his head toward the doe at the end of his question.



And too lazy to code.
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Whee! Join the lazy pica too!

Whee! Join the lazy pica too! It's just because I seem to gravitate towards Pica more that Aatos is not a very active character.

Alerted to a furious rustling and thumping, Aatos lifts his head quickly - was something wrong? But no - here was a doe crashing through the undergrowth wildly with something that looked like a branch trailing behind her. He didn't get a good enough look-see to clearly identify this doe before Ranore blocked his sight of view.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

After she drank until her

After she drank until her stomach ached, she plopped down onto the ground. She heard voices behind her, and twitched her ears to them, but he was too tired to acknowledge them. She rested her head in the cool, soft grass. She hoped that whoever was near was kind.

With her back hoof she began to break parts of the branch. The branch was slick, but she was able to break off most of it, until she became too tired to do more. She looked up from the branch and saw the three deer. It made her jump a little. One was part deer, part owl; she had never seen a deer like that before. And beside him was a young fawn. Oh, how she missed fawn. It had been years since she had seen one. And beside the fawn was a doe. She was dark with long peacock feathers on her head.
"Are they a family?" she thought as she looked at them.
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Echosong was about to reply

Echosong was about to reply to Aatos's question, when a loud noise of someone or something crashing through bushes made her startle. Ears pricked forward, she turned and saw a doe dashing down to the pond, dragging a tree branch behind her. She turned to Ranore. "I think so. She might be hurt."
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By the forest's standards

By the forest's standards they could be a family. Haha.

Ranore held the newcomer's gaze for a moment before acknowledging Echosong's words.
"I don't think she is, but she could be. I don't understand how she has a branch wrapped around her leg," he shifted to allow Aatos a chance to get a better look at her, realizing at that moment that he had put himself between them. Old habits died hard.
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OOC: Ha ha, yes! xD! She

OOC: Ha ha, yes! xD!

She looked away from them, she didn't want to disturb them, or scare the little fawn, considering that she saw her reflection and looked horrible. Her hair was a mess, slicked with the tar from the Wretched Wood. Her fur had dried blood from her cuts, with tar and leaves as well. Her face was dirty with a few cuts, and dried blood. "It's best not to approach" she thought.

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Echosong stepped forward

Echosong stepped forward cautiously. "Are you alright, miss?"
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Ranore looked between them,

Ranore looked between them, nodding instead of echoing the doe's question. Was she okay? He shuffled forward a few steps, glancing back to look at Aatos before turning his attention to the newcomer.
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OOC: Lol, sorry, just

OOC: Lol, sorry, just thought I'd bump it. xD!

She looked at the three. "Yes, I'm alright," she said,"Just a little banged up. Thank you, though." She bowed curteously at them although her muscles ached. "If I may ask, what is this place?"

..Ahm sorry for the late

..Ahm sorry for the late reply. D8
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All Aatos could do was sit there as he watched this stranger doe drink thirstily, kick at the smooth branch and seem to watch them. Blinked. And eventually got up to crane his neck sideways around Ranore - just as the dark owl-deer moved. Twitching an ear with slight irritation, he eyed this peacock feathered doe before side-skipping over to watch from a closer distance, though he wished he hadn't a few moments later - the stench of fear, tar and blood wafting from the doe was overpowering, and he soon stepped back hurriedly, shaking his head continuously and sending pictures for his companion to come to him.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

When the little fawn

When the little fawn approached her then bolted off it made her want to cry. She looked at herself, and back at them. She didn't mean to scare the little fawn off.

"Never mind," she said a few tears rolling down her face,"I'll just be taking my leave. Thank you for your concern though."

Backing away, Aatos catches

Backing away, Aatos catches sight of the stranger doe - and she seemed very sad indeed. As the swallow flew over to perch atop his head, to it's annoyance, it was told to use it's wings to perch onto the stranger doe's head. It obliged - though grumbling.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

When the little swallow flew

When the little swallow flew towards her she flinched back as shut her eyes. She had been attacked by a swarm of birds in the Wretched Wood. She felt the little swallow's feet on her hair.

She looked at the young fawn,"Isn't there a river running around here? I don't want to taint the pond."
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Echosong turned to look at

Echosong turned to look at the fawn, then back to the doe as the swallow flew over to perch on her head. "Most of us just call this place The Forest." She walked a few steps in the direction of the crying idol. "There's a river over this way where you can wash. We'll show you."

"The Forest?" she

"The Forest?" she thought.

"That's very kind of you," she said bowing her head. "I'm sorry I disturbed your family." She felt the little swallow shuffle in her hair; it made her smile.

"The Forest?" she

"The Forest?" she thought.

"That's very kind of you," she said bowing her head. "I'm sorry I disturbed your family." She felt the little swallow shuffle in her hair; it made her smile.
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Family...? Ranore glanced at

Family...? Ranore glanced at the fawn and the doe, but started off in the direction of the idol. Maybe for a couple of seconds he could believe that he had a family.
"Yeah...it's right over here," he added, ignoring her family comment.
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She followed quietly behind

She followed quietly behind them, minding not to stand so close because of her stench. "Thank you. It has been a long while since I have seen kind faces."

She followed quietly behind

She followed quietly behind them, minding not to stand so close because of her stench. "Thank you. It has been a long while since I have seen kind faces."

... late ... -- Aatos watched

... late ...
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Aatos watched for a few moments before deciding the follow them - just because he wanted to. Not because that Ranore was going with them. Of course not. Assuring himself that the swallow fledgeling was not in any danger, he tagged along from the tree line curiously studying the doe.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

She gently turned her head,

She gently turned her head, and looked at the little fawn. "I'm sorry for startling you," she said softly.
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"Most in the forest are kind,

"Most in the forest are kind, in my opinion. Some aren't...it just depends on who to avoid and who's okay to stick around with." he answered, glancing back at the doe and the fawn.
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Echosong stopped at the idol,

Echosong stopped at the idol, the misty spray from the water getting her fur damp. "Here it is. It may look a little odd at first.", she cautioned the doe, wondering if the strange appearence of the fountain would unsettle her.

She looked a the black,

She looked a the black, feathered one. "I see," she said. "Are there many in this forest?"

It was strange. A large human-like statue that wept. Though, it was rather beautiful.
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"Yeah...there are many here.

"Yeah...there are many here. Some come and go though, I don't know if they really count." he replied, pausing to stare at the idol for a few moments before shaking himself and trotting over to settle at the base of the rock.
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"Oh," she said quietly. She

"Oh," she said quietly. She walked slowly towards the Idol, thanking Echosong as she passed, and stuck her head under the Idol's tears. The water was wonderful, and the black tar and blood began to wash out of her hair and neck.

Finally, Aatos was curious

Finally, Aatos was curious enough to begin sending pictures. The Idol, clean water, the blood and tar, and a questioning head tilt. Though, he wasn't sure whether he got his message over entirely.

Thank you, Tuo and Kohva!

The pictures startled her,

The pictures startled her, she nearly slipped into the crevasse. She shook it off as being her weariness, and continued washing. Her silky black fur showing through the muck.