Raising Boughs and Branches

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(At Vee's request, a speed writing)
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The plucking is how it starts.

Plucking, pulling at your hairs, you can feel them growing and changing. You can feel each of the three hundred spots melt in to a coat of brown. Always, always we start out as brown... the smothering coat begins to bring higher your temperature.

The fur does not fit anymore, too long and coarse... your bones, skin, and muscle have to fit it...

burning, chilling fever engulfs you in cold flame. Skin so taut... too taut... painfully stretching and pulling,

think change so you don't reverse. Embrace the fever as it embraces you.

Bones sound like breaking twigs as they grow in to thick, tough trees. Harden, crack, grow, change, tighten muscle, strengthen bone.

Hooves grow larger, sharper, duller in color...

fever blazing as the stupor sets in... you're changing, growing, warping from fawnhood, just like your soul warped from innocence to the knowledge you have gained being young.

Falling to your knees, weakened for a brief moment, you pray to the gods that it is over, and they assail your head with rods.

The nubs that housed seeds now sprout, fed by your knowledge, and grow in to long tines. Six branch from one, climbing to the sky as if trying to reach the sun. Trees sprouting, made of bone, from your skull. They feel heavier, but you can carry them.

As your headache fades, so does the fever.

You stretch, peering in to the nearest source of water, seeing your grown form. Your form now... the pictogram glowing brighter.

Magic is yours; you have worked for it. You have endured to get it. Now, you can hold it.

Grown.
Apeldille's picture

Wow, this was really nice and

Wow, this was really nice and intense...
Never read something describing the growing-up experience like that before.

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^^ Thank you, Apeldille

^^ Thank you, Apeldille


(thanks, starling! The avatar is amazing! And Thanks Pretzil for the siggie!
Hart's picture

What a curious interpretation

What a curious interpretation and imagery!
I like it. You've described it very well!

This is amazing! I think it

This is amazing! I think it describes perfectly the change from fawn to stag Smiling

Almost morbid... I like it.

Almost morbid...
I like it.
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VEE: Thank you. I am glad you

VEE: Thank you. I am glad you liked it. To be honest, I was trying to come up with a writing like this all day.... You just gave me a slap to do it ^^ Thank you.

BlueJay: Thank you. <3 <3 *hugs*


Pan: Thank you hehe


(thanks, starling! The avatar is amazing! And Thanks Pretzil for the siggie!