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Not TEF, but plz critique

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February 10, 2010 - 2:32am — Zergarikiaka


This took several days to finish, so I'd love it if someone did a light critique.

I kind of got lazy in the end with the background, but I did mostly focus on the zombies. '

As a side note: I'm still working on the latest batch of alien-ified deer. I'm just having problems with it. XD
February 10, 2010 - 2:38am — Terabetha

The thing that stands out for

The thing that stands out for me critique wise is the composition. It's very one-sided, and that makes the picture feel unbalanced. A solution to this would be to add some zombies around the bottom of the picture, as if they're trying to move in and surround the two fleeing figures. Other than that, I like the figures themselves quite a bit, and the details you added to the zombies are cute..in a bloody, undead sort of way lol.
February 10, 2010 - 3:33am — Zergarikiaka
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Yeah, I was definatly

Yeah, I was definatly thinking it needed more zombies. After a few days though I felt like one was nomming my head while coloring. XD
I shall definatly add more though. thx. <3
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February 10, 2010 - 3:54am — Terabetha

Oh yeah, I know how it is

Oh yeah, I know how it is looking at a picture for too long. Take a break and then everything will seem fresher Smiling
You're very welcome, I'm always happy to give critiques, for what they're worth.