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NEW thing #2

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October 19, 2009 - 1:00am — Bayleen
I've started a new thing in which it kind-of has to do with threads. A thread is a post that someone starts like roleplaying with words. You don't have to use quotation marks if u want. I'm going to start it and it just flows like a story.

It's continuing off of the first NEW Thing http://endlessforest.org/community/new-thing But just a quick overview of the last NEW thing, Bayleen gave birth to FleuraLune, but she's dying. Safear spent time with Bayleen on her last day with Fleur and her, and then Bayleen died, leaving Fleur in the care of Safear.
We decided to speed it up to when Fleur is a young adult in this new one. So I'd really appreciate it if someone could respond to join me and Pickle96 so that way it's not just us like last time. ANYONE can join, please!!!

Just some visuals, I'll add some pics of new characters:
FleuraLune: http://endlessforest.org/community/fleuralunes-new-bio
Safear: http://i597.photobucket.com/albums/tt60/edmund_alans/Safearfreeartz.png
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Fleur was wandering around close to the pond.
December 12, 2009 - 5:43am — entumente
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The stag blushed as he caught

The stag blushed as he caught up with the deer and began to slide his rough hooves against the ice, being able to skate across, he felt as though he was gliding against thin air, he loved the feeling.
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December 12, 2009 - 5:46am — Bayleen
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Fleur began to twirl and

Fleur began to twirl and twirl and twirl in circles and she got so dizzy, that she began to slow down and collapse on the ground.
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December 12, 2009 - 5:47am — entumente
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The stag's ears perked up as

The stag's ears perked up as he saw her fall, he slid over to her and skidded to a stop as he approached to her. He used his forehead to push her up gently onto her hooves, once again.
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December 12, 2009 - 5:49am — Bayleen
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Fleur got to her paws with

Fleur got to her paws with the help of the stag, but she kept on slipping and tumbling everywhere that she was falling all over the blue stag!!
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December 12, 2009 - 5:53am — entumente
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The blue stag smirked as he

The blue stag smirked as he looked as if he was laughing, he nudged the deer over to the snowy ground, with his nose, so she could stand up on ground, not ice.
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December 12, 2009 - 5:58am — Bayleen
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As the wolf-ish doe walked on

As the wolf-ish doe walked on the snowy ground, she seemed to act a little tipsy Sticking out tongue She giggled as she was led on the cold white snow. "Do you have a name?" she asked as she looked at him.
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December 12, 2009 - 6:00am — pickle96
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(yeah, tommorow if not later

(yeah, tommorow if not later tonignt)
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December 12, 2009 - 6:03am — Bayleen
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(What do you mean?)

(What do you mean?)
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December 12, 2009 - 6:03am — entumente
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The blue stag blinked under

The blue stag blinked under his mask and looked about, he bit his lip, looking for something, then looked down, he used his hoof to draw something in the snow, he drew a name that was faint in the snow, but still readable, it came out as, "Mute".
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December 12, 2009 - 6:06am — Bayleen
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Fleur looked at the letters

Fleur looked at the letters that read "Mute." She understood then she he really couldn't speak. Her smiled faded into a slight frown, but then she perked up again. "Nice to meet you Mute ^^"
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December 12, 2009 - 6:09am — entumente
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The blue stag, now known as

The blue stag, now known as Mute, smiled widely nodding his head and hopped slightly, a small bottle of H20 in the bottle, tied around his neck with a string, bounced.
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December 12, 2009 - 6:15am — Bayleen
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Fleur grinned. She looked at

Fleur grinned. She looked at the her breathe swirling in the air and quickly fading.
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December 12, 2009 - 6:21am — entumente
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He blinked under his mask and

He blinked under his mask and then looked at the frozen lake then looked back at the deer, he had not known what to do next, so he motioned in a question phrase, what she was interested in doing.
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December 12, 2009 - 6:24am — Bayleen
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Fleur shrugged, not saying

Fleur shrugged, not saying anything. Then, she put on of her paws on the ice, and then another and another and another until she was fully on the ice, not slipping, though she could feel herself move a little with the watery floor of the ice. She began to walk forward, carefully and cautiously.
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December 12, 2009 - 6:28am — entumente
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Mute watched her and followed

Mute watched her and followed behind her, not knowing what had became of the ice she had just stepped on, the ice started to crack slightly as he stepped each hoof onto the ice and suddenly, without warning, the ice shattered under his hooves and he fell straight in.
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December 12, 2009 - 6:32am — Bayleen
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Fleur swirved around to get

Fleur swirved around to get him, but then she too fell in the ice cold water as the cracks began to extend across the pond. As heavy her wolf coat was, she began to shiver, but kept moving so she or Mute wouldn't become a complete ice cube. She searched for him underwater and finally caught sight of him. She swam toward him and grabbed him by the scruff and began to heave him toward the open crack in the ice.
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December 12, 2009 - 6:38am — entumente
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Mute, frightened, froze up

Mute, frightened, froze up not knowing what to do accepted the other deer, helping him out.
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December 12, 2009 - 6:43am — Bayleen
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As she pushed herself out of

As she pushed herself out of the water and lifted him up and out of the water with all of her strength, pushing him as far away from the crack as she could. Fleur then climbed out of the crack and dragged Mute away from the ice and the pond, beneath a willow tree. "Mute! Mute are you ok?!!!" she said fearfully, scared if he was alive or dead..
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December 12, 2009 - 6:47am — entumente
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Mute was silent, not

Mute was silent, not responding for some odd reason, he couldn't wake up from whatever had just happened.
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December 12, 2009 - 6:51am — Bayleen
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Fleur pocked him in the head,

Fleur pocked him in the head, on his side and then on his stomach with her claw, but gently.
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December 12, 2009 - 6:57am — entumente
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Mute suddenly coughed up

Mute suddenly coughed up almost a liter of water and choked slightly, clearing his throat, he looked upward into the cloudy sky, not aware of what just had happened, he then looked at his savior.
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December 12, 2009 - 6:59am — Bayleen
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"Are you ok?!" Fleur asked

"Are you ok?!" Fleur asked again as she lied down close to him so he can get warm.
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December 12, 2009 - 7:02am — entumente
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Mute rested his head against

Mute rested his head against the soft snow and relaxed, still frightened, he was so scared, but figured there was nothing wrong now, he nodded slowly as he felt fur bristle against each other.
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December 12, 2009 - 7:09am — Bayleen
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"Good," Fleur said relieved.

"Good," Fleur said relieved. "I thought you didn't make it." She rested her head gently on his shoulder area. She had a small flashback of her mother...when she her and wiped away her tears when Fleur found out she was going to die. Then, she came back to reality though the past still lingered in her head. She began to sing her lullaby very softly as if it was the breeze itself that sang. But fleur sang a few octaves lower than her mother sang it, but her voice was still beautiful..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y7JvL2ap3Cg
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December 12, 2009 - 7:17am — entumente
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Mute's ears gently perked up,

Mute's ears gently perked up, his wet pelt slightly freezing over, he heard the beautiful song and his eyes began to dwell and close slightly, he had never known what is was like to have a mother or a family, so it made him feel warm, yet sad at the same time, a slow tear leaked down from his eye to the bottom of his cheek as he drifted off to sleep by accident.
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December 12, 2009 - 7:25am — Bayleen
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A few moment after Fleur had

A few moment after Fleur had finished the song, she sighed a little bit. When she sang that song a little more of her heart broke off. She remembered when she was so small as a mere fawn, trying to understand why her mother would die so soon. A few tears trickled down her muzzle and sank into Mute's pelt. More and more came. She cried herself to sleep.
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December 12, 2009 - 7:30am — entumente
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Mute dreamed hastily of

Mute dreamed hastily of random things, such as the new people he had met today, he wanted to make the sadness that was him and Fleur as well, disappear like it hadn't even occurred, but he knew that could not have happened in his sleep state as of now.
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December 12, 2009 - 7:33am — Bayleen
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Ever since Fleur's mother

Ever since Fleur's mother died, she never had a dream again...No happy thoughts that entered her mind in her sleep....no memories to visit in the middle of the day.
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December 12, 2009 - 7:40am — entumente
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After Mute's sleep he had

After Mute's sleep he had awoken to a bright shiny snowy morning, he hadn't imagined it to be bright, but cloudy, but it was, just as he hadn't thought, bright as a summer afternoon.
He looked around himself and saw that Fleur had fallen asleep next to him, he stretched and felt a slight pain, some parts of his fur were matted with frozen fur strains clotted up in random areas of his, now dry, pelt.
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December 12, 2009 - 7:42am — Bayleen
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Fleur was sleeping soundly,

Fleur was sleeping soundly, but although she was in a deep sleep, she could sense an emptiness beside her and she began to wake.
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December 12, 2009 - 7:48am — entumente
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Mute had gotten up and tried

Mute had gotten up and tried to stretch his pelt, he felt great pain as he stretched his full body to it's content and fur had fallen off, bleeding from each fur spot that had been left behind on his pelt, it did not hurt as much as it hurt when the ice was still frozen on him. Bloody fur had been on the floor and Mute frowned slightly, seeing the side of his pelt, having blood spots on it dripping downward.
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December 12, 2009 - 8:02am — Bayleen
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Fleur's eyes fluttered open,

Fleur's eyes fluttered open, at first seeing the cloudy bright sky that glared into her eyes. She shivered slightly getting used to the cold after a few hours. Then she got up and stretched. Then she noticed the matts of bloody fur on the ground and then looked at Mute's pelt with some missing spots in which the tears had dried up. "Ohh no..." she sighed. She gave the wounds a few licks to wipe away the blood from Mute's pelt. Then she padded to an empty spot and began to dig at the snow until she got some fresh mud. She trotted back to Mute and placed the mud on the wounded areas with her muzzle. She knew that mud was always good for scabs like this.
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December 12, 2009 - 8:06am — entumente
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Mute clenched his teeth

Mute clenched his teeth together slightly, in pain, but accepted it, knowing it wouldn't get better in any other way, Mute nuzzled Fleur's neck as a thank you.
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December 12, 2009 - 8:07am — Bayleen
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( Sadly, I have to go to bed

( Sad Sadly, I have to go to bed Sad I'll see ya tomorrow!!! Good night!)
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December 12, 2009 - 8:09am — entumente
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(Sweet dreams, Au revior.

(Sweet dreams, Au revior. Smiling see you tomorrow. )
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December 12, 2009 - 6:51pm — Bayleen
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( Aaaaaaaaaaand I'm back

(Smiling Aaaaaaaaaaand I'm back ^^)

Fleur smiled by his thanks and then said, "I'm sorry about that. I never knew what the tears would do to your pelt."
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December 12, 2009 - 9:09pm — entumente
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Mute shakes his head, trying

Mute shakes his head, trying to say it wasn't the tears and jerked his antlers toward the frozen lake, letting her know it was the frozen water they had fallen into.
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December 13, 2009 - 1:32am — Bayleen
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Fleur just nodded and then

Fleur just nodded and then looked around, thinking of what to do. Then she motioned for him to follow her as she padded toward the playground. Soon, the big boulders came into their view.
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December 13, 2009 - 1:45am — entumente
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He trotted right behind her,

He trotted right behind her, seeing the large boulders from a distance.
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December 13, 2009 - 1:47am — Bayleen
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Fleur broke into a run and

Fleur broke into a run and leapt upon the biggest rock and landed with a small thud.
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December 13, 2009 - 1:48am — entumente
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Mute followed and jumped, a

Mute followed and jumped, a lot higher than a usual stag and landed on a high rock.
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December 13, 2009 - 1:52am — Bayleen
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Fleur went to the very edge

Fleur went to the very edge of the rock and looked over the endless sea of white. She sighed a very looong and sad sigh.
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December 13, 2009 - 1:56am — entumente
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Mute frowned and leaped down

Mute frowned and leaped down to the rock she was on and nudged her neck, wondering what was wrong.
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December 13, 2009 - 1:58am — Bayleen
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She looked at him. Her eyes

She looked at him. Her eyes looked almost painful. "Have you ever been in love?" she asked him, her voice almost a whisper.
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December 13, 2009 - 2:05am — entumente
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Mute blushes and looks down

Mute blushes and looks down onto the rock, he draws a picture of a beautiful blue doe with yellow lines and stars on both sides of pelt, Capricorn horns, and a beautiful venetian mask. Mute then nods and peers over at the little doe.
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December 13, 2009 - 2:11am — Bayleen
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Fleur looked at the picture

Fleur looked at the picture and smiled, saying, "So, you have that special comeone, huh? That's very nice." Then her smile faded, but her eyes were still locked on the picture. "I've never been in love. My mother has, but she never had a mate because the person she loved didn't love her in the same way...I guess that's how powerful love is...I wish I could feel that way about someone. I'm tired of being alone."
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December 13, 2009 - 2:13am — entumente
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Mute frowned, but smiled once

Mute frowned, but smiled once more and drew a heart with a fascinatingly portrait of Fleur with a + and a frame of a stag with a question in it, Mute nodded, letting her know she would find someone someday.
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December 13, 2009 - 2:17am — Bayleen
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Fleur chuckled at the picture

Fleur chuckled at the picture and smiled. "That's what everyone says. I just hope it comes true :)"
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December 13, 2009 - 2:20am — entumente
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Mute nodded and nuzzled her

Mute nodded and nuzzled her forehead for a second.
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December 13, 2009 - 2:22am — Bayleen
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Fleur looked up to the sky

Fleur looked up to the sky and watched the very small snowflakes drift down to the ground.
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