It's all over [Blood/Violence warning]

ocean's picture
He gasps in the darkness, struggling for air, struggling to fight back the darker tendrils that edge his vision. Crimson lines the ground around the fawn, glinting in the moonlight. This was just where it has been prophesied. This was where it had all started. Now he was here, bleeding out his life, trying to drink in the chilled air. Above, the moon looked on, countenance cold. There was no sympathy for him this night.

He lays there for ages, breathing raspy, turning colder and colder. He manages to gasp out,
Mommy...?
He rests his head on the logs, confused, alone, dying. He realizes that the voice has stopped haunting him for the moment. Good.

They had come so quickly. The graves, the blood water, so much more. He couldn't help running from it all, from the howls, from any other deer...from the voice. It was loud today, clear, perfect.

Run, run, run, you'll never escape me....Today you will die. Follow me...

He runs away, darting through the trees. He tries to fight where he sees the apparition, but to no avail. The deer stays with him, haunting, chanting, yelling, whispering. He can't get rid of it.

He gives in.

It takes him to a pile of crossed wood, tells him to wait. He does, finally allowed to relax. He closes his eyes, listening to the sounds of the deer within his head. His thoughts turn to Aegle, the doe he's adopted as his mother. He had decided to dress up as her for day of the deer, his favorite holiday. He's wearing her mask now. All he needs is her antlers and it'll be finished....

Then another approaches, interrupting his thoughts. He is pelted in white with lovely black markings, a skull for a face, and huge branching antlers. The little fawn pauses, watching his approach. The stag bellows, multiple times. He cowers, but comes a little forward, curious. The stag approaches and rears, but he cowers. The stag stops quickly, becoming friendly. The little fawn stares blankly, then suddenly breaks and falls into the side of the stag, trying to ignore the voice.

...He won't go away...” He mutters into the stag's fur.
Nope!” The voice laughs maniacally, gratingly inside his head, causing him to scream out in pain. He lurches to his feet, tries to ward it away. Then he runs for his life, leaving behind a confused stag.

Instead, he finds them.

The doe comes first, running past him as fast as she can.

Die!” The voice screams in his head. He collapses, yelping in pain. The stag runs past, stopping at the sight of him. A sly smile comes over the stag's face as he moves closer to the collapsed fawn, but something stops him. He leaves the fawn with a little taunt before running after the doe.

The fawn slowly gets to his feet.

Follow them,” the voice booms. He can't summon the will to disobey, so he lurks around the edges. He watches them, noting that they nuzzle a lot. Eew, he thinks. Stags an' does are so weird...

Now kill them,” the voice commands. “Or else.

No!” He shrieks aloud, horrified. He turns to bat the deer away, but it moves quicker than he ever could. He turns back, staring at the couple with wide eyes. They look back...and he darts to a tree just a bit further away. The stag taunts him, rearing. He comes out, hurt.

Wha-what'd I do?” He asks. The pair dart over. He backs away, eyes wide, as the stag threatens him. The doe leaps in circles around him, caging him in. He backs up to the tree, bumping into its hard surface. The stag advances, forward, forward, forward, and his antlers nettle into the little fawn. The fawn screams.

Now.

No!

As soon as the antlers let up, he darts away, fleeing from the angry stag. Nothing...he'd done nothing...He looks down. Below him are logs in an X shape, the very ones he had been led to early. He yelps and looks up at the rushing stag, antlers lowered. The little shape flies through the air, slamming into a tree with a resounding whack. He stands dizzily, just in time for another round of antlers slamming into his side. He cowers and cowers, but the stag keeps closing in. He just has tie to notice a fluffy tail before he is sent sprawling on the ground. He looks up at the stag fearfully, seeing nothing but a cold cunning in the other's eyes. Revenge, it speaks.

But for what?

The fawn closes his eyes, waiting for hooves to slam down upon his head and end him.

Well, well, well, not doing too good, are we? Here, let me show you how it's done.” The apparition flows up his nostrils, into his mind. The fawn doesn't resist. He lets the wave of blackness flow over him.

The fawn's body rolls out of the way of the crashing hooves. He stands, grinning madly. Sharp fans have grown from his skull, his mask turned into a long red and white piece of wood.

Heheh...Trying to kill a helpless little fawn, aren't we?” The body smirks. “Heheheh...This ought to make you look real good. Now...time for my revenge!” The body leaps at the stag, biting, kicking, spearing with the sharp antlers.

Weak little doe!” It taunts at the stag, spearing and stabbing. The black-and-white doe with peacock feathers leaps around them, watching with what seems like ecstasy. Watch my downfall... thinks the helpless fawn, watching as the apparition ruins his body.

Finally, finally, the apparition retreats, forcing the fawn back into full consciousness. He screams out in pain, stumbling backwards. The stag continues to follow, the doe jumping in for a blow or two, then going back to her ecstatic dance. He bends over, coughing, blood trickling from his mouth. His body is covered in open wounds, bloody and sore. He falls in the middle of the x, staring helplessly at the doe as she bludgeons his body a few more times. He closes his eyes and blearily stumbles to his feet, trying to stop the onslaught. He only falls down again.

He forces his eyes open, though blood is dripping into them too. The stag is motioning the doe away; they practically skip, after winning this victory over a fawn. He closes his eyes, breathing rasping.

Your name is Lantern. Congrats...you'll see why soon!” The voice cackles.

He tries to force it away, but it keeps coming in waves.

“You cold yet? You'll be soon!”
“Heheheh....”
“Come on...just give in...”
“What are you waiting for...?”
"I don't have all night..."


He summons his last bit of energy.

Mommy!” He screams, and his head drops onto the logs. The apparitions sends a wave of black washing over him, and he cannot resist.
He gives in.

Epilogue

"Snow...It's so...beautiful..." He lays down in the gathering snow, letting it fall on top of him. The doe lays down beside him. Maybe she's crying; he can't tell. But he's not sad anymore. He knows what will happen; she's just told him he can meet the gods. That sounds exciting...He lays his head on where he guesses she is.
"A-Aegle...? I can...feel you...but I can't...see you anymore. Goodbye mommy...I love you always...."
He lowered his head for the last time, eyes misting over.
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They found his body the next morning, covered in frost and opened wounds. He still wore the wood mask, the spiked antlers. They all looked in dismay, pulling him to the graveyard. There they buried him...and from there he arose again.

But he was never quite the same...

[Mentioned: The deer described up there [Hagi? Skuller?], Tally, Steele, Aegle.]
Tally's picture

<3 Oh goodness. :3 I love

<3 Oh goodness. :3
I love it.

(you should put a 'featuring:' thing so people might not be so confused.)
ocean's picture

Gosh DARN it. I meant to do

Gosh DARN it. I meant to do that. *edits*

Glad you love it. Laughing out loud


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
Tally's picture

Neither Hagi or Skuller was

Neither Hagi or Skuller was online, I'm not sure who your wondering about? Was it Ralph? He was there for a moment.

& Question, so does this mean (adult)Lantern is dead?
ocean's picture

He was before Tally & Steele

He was before Tally & Steele came along; a secretary bird pelted deer with a skull mask and giant antlers. He seemed rather angry at Lantern-fawn (so I assumed he was a friend of Tally). I dunno who he was! xD

Nope. This is just the beginning of adult Lantern's story. ;3
[e]: Then again, adult Lantern was always dead. xDD


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
Vira's picture

I can highly bet that it

I can highly bet that it wasnt Hagi, he wouldn't attack a fawn c: (plus Hagi wears candlers, not the big white antlers)

ocean's picture

Then it must've been someone

Then it must've been someone else. x3 Ah well.


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
Aegle's picture

;.; I'll kick her in alll of

;.; I'll kick her in alll of tommorrow
ocean's picture

Aww. D: Hopefully I'll be

Aww. D: Hopefully I'll be around.


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
Aegle's picture

IM GETTING ON NOW. c:

IM GETTING ON NOW. c:
ocean's picture

Alright. |D I just got

Alright. |D I just got disconnected, so I'll be a-workin' on that. >.<


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
Aegle's picture

-is trying to get pictos to

-is trying to get pictos to spread- |D
ocean's picture

Well, the snow was just

Well, the snow was just perfect. x3


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
Aegle's picture

I cried. ;.;

I cried. ;.;

Amary saw part of this.

Amary saw part of this. ._.
She was in fawn form (was taking advantage of sets staying on fawns for the day), but still IC.

Anyway, this is really good.
(btw, if Lantern died as a fawn, how come his ghost is an adult?)

~Paz
main deer: Amary, Melinoe, Oisín
//Updates\\
ocean's picture

@Aegle-human: *patpat* @Paz:

@Aegle-human: *patpat*
@Paz: Oh dear, poor thing. D:
Yes, that was awesome. |D

Thanks!
(I'm going to go with him somehow aging. Or it could just be that that voice finally takes him over and turns him into one. ^^)


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
harbinger's picture

Wow, awesome imagry! I love

Wow, awesome imagry! I love how you have described the interaction between the deer. It's a really sad peice, for some reason it makes me want to draw it Sticking out tongue

I was wondering if youcould send me the spelldata you mentioned a while ago to me, my internet is really stuffing me around.
(btw, I didn't just comment to ask, I read this earlier, before I saw it was yours, and I really like it!)
ocean's picture

Thank you. <3 And that's

Thank you. <3 And that's awesome! xD

Yep. Laughing out loud Let me see if you have your e-mail on the site. Otherwise, I'll need it so that I can send it. :3


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
harbinger's picture

I don't think I do...If I

I don't think I do...If I dont', it's Im-so-witty@hotmail.com
Thanks heaps, you are absolutely awesome!
ocean's picture

Nope and sent. :3 I'm glad

Nope and sent. :3
I'm glad to help; after all, falling in the pond is sad. D:
Just tell me if something's not working. ^^


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
harbinger's picture

I feel I could grow to

I feel I could grow to resent that pond lol
I don't think it's working, should it just kick in when I get onto TEF or do I have to do some fiddly stuff first? I've never done this before, in case it isn't painfully obvious ^^;
ocean's picture

xDD Okay, you need to go to

xDD
Okay, you need to go to the start menu > C drive> Program files> Tale of Tales > Endless Forest 3> Userdata. Take the spelldata.cgr file[you may have to right click it when it downloads, say 'open containing folder', find the spelldata.cgr file + copy it] , paste it there. You can save it by right clicking and creating a folder. Go into the game and your deer should have that set.
If you have a vista, you'll have to run it as administrator. :3


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
Kaoori's picture

oh man. I can't help but

oh man. I can't help but feel sorry for him. I"M WEIRD.

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I'm a little wolf inside a girl.

Lightbringer-apprentice to Yorres
ocean's picture

Don't worry, his fawn-form

Don't worry, his fawn-form was quite sweet (and will be for awhile). His story's pretty tragic, but he's pretty insane to match it. |3


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
harbinger's picture

I did all that but it's

I did all that but it's still coming up with my peacock feathers Sticking out tongue
I think I have a vista, but I don't know what you mean by 'run it as administrator', and the saving in a folder thing.
ocean's picture

Ah. Then you definitely need

Ah. Then you definitely need to right click the icon (if you have it on your desktop) and select 'run as administrator'. :3 After you've selected that, just paste the spelldata.cgr file into the same place I said last night and you're good to go. :3
Saving it in a folder:
Just right click while you're in the userdata folder, select 'new>folder', then name the folder. Paste the spelldata.cgr file into it and tada, it's saved! If you want to use the spelldata you pasted in the folder again, just copy it from the folder and paste it into the userdata folder. ^^


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
harbinger's picture

When I right click, 'run as

When I right click, 'run as administrator' doesn't come up, yeah my computers stuffed! lol
I put it in another folder, but it hasn't changed anything by itself.
Thanks for all the help! Sorry my computers so annoying!
ocean's picture

...O.o Er. I dunno what to

...O.o Er. I dunno what to say for the administrator thing. xD Did you right click on the icon itself?
Yes. ^^ To change the set, you need to paste the spelldata.cgr file into the userdata folder. :3
But if you have vista, you have to run as admin, so this is quite a conundrum.


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
harbinger's picture

Yes, I've gone into

Yes, I've gone into properties and everything and I can't find how to change it.
I'll try getting it off the email again, maybe it got stuffed in the saving process
ocean's picture

Oh dear. D: Hmm. That's

Oh dear. D: Hmm. That's really odd.
Alright, I hope it works...
I can also send it again if it doesn't. :3


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
harbinger's picture

Nah, it's not working. Don'

Nah, it's not working.
Don' worry about sending it again, I'm fairly sure it's my computer.
I might write a blog thingy about it and see if anyone else has had the same problem, and hopefully a solution.
Thanks heaps for the file and the help though!
ocean's picture

Pah, darnit. Alright.

Pah, darnit.
Alright. ^^
Good luck, I hope you find out what's wrong. ^^
Any time. :3


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha
harbinger's picture

Yes! I got it working, with

Yes! I got it working, with the aid of a very tech-smart friend of mine.
Thank you so much, I absolutely love this skull =D

the following is just yeah

the following is just yeah XD
1:steele's face is dog/deer and has all dog teeth, he wears the skull mask to "intimidate" foes, he takes it off to attack
2:i was lost did steele get attacked at one point from adult latern? i was totally lost at that part, lol i'm so stupid >.>;;(plus i need to know this info)
Edit:3:i want to write something too XD if that's ok? ^^;;
(p.s. i'm slightly punished so if i don't reply to anything right away it's because i can't and will try to a.s.a.p XD)
ocean's picture

Congrats Harbinger! Ah. Did

Congrats Harbinger! Laughing out loud

Ah. Did I describe him at one point? o.O /doesn't remember
Anyhow, I'll note that. Laughing out loud

Not from adult Lantern but...there's a certain other...something (I haven't decided, in other words) that took over Lantern and attacked Steele.

Of course!
(That's fine. |3)


If we could see the miracle of a single flower clearly, our whole life would change.
~Buddha