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Hadou c: critique ?

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December 2, 2012 - 8:57pm — Hadou
EDITED; I moved the right eye up, and added the marking on his shoulder cx
I'm new around here, just thought I post my sketch of Hadou, my TEF character, and see what critique you guys could give ?

he's looking forward, and down, but his head is slightly tilted to the left, does it look right? I've never drawn straight on before cx
plus I'm new to deer anatomy

stuff about him;
the red things are his markings, he has a massive fancy one on his shoulder, but I'm laaaazy. added cx
he has shoulder fluff, and neck fluff, looks like a lil' mohawk cx
December 2, 2012 - 9:36pm — WolfSpirit42

I think the eye closet to the

I think the eye closet to the right needs to be slightly higher up. Sometimes you need someone else to see errors in art c:
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December 2, 2012 - 9:40pm — Hadou
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thank you c: I'm new with

thank you c:

I'm new with deer and the pose .3.
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December 2, 2012 - 9:42pm — Apoidea
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I know it's not a critique

I know it's not a critique but I have to come in and comment: I really adore the style of his ears.
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December 2, 2012 - 9:44pm — Hadou
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thank you! c: I thought they

thank you! c: I thought they looked pretty cool cx took me like 20 minutes to get them right haha.
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December 2, 2012 - 9:46pm — OrinocoFlow
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to be honest the only mistake

to be honest the only mistake I see is the eye that someone mentioned up top, other than that it looks pretty darn good :3
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December 2, 2012 - 9:48pm — Hadou
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;u; yay, thanks ! I feel

;u; yay, thanks !
I feel better now, haha, I thought it was blah.
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December 2, 2012 - 10:00pm — OrinocoFlow
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we artists will always be our

we artists will always be our own worst critic ^^
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You do not have a soul. You ARE a soul. You have a body.
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December 2, 2012 - 10:12pm — Hadou
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haha, true! I edited it, does

haha, true!
I edited it, does it look better now? c:
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December 2, 2012 - 10:13pm — emslee007

I love this

I love this
December 2, 2012 - 10:51pm — WolfSpirit42

Ok now it's perfect ^^

Ok now it's perfect ^^
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December 2, 2012 - 10:52pm — OrinocoFlow
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YES bravo :3 nice fix!

YES bravo :3 nice fix!
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You do not have a soul. You ARE a soul. You have a body.
~ C.S. Lewis
December 2, 2012 - 11:20pm — Hadou
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woo, thanks so much guys!

woo, thanks so much guys! I'll color/edit it later Sticking out tongue
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