Gift Poems ~ Mini poem requests

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Well, I'm not a great artist, but I can write... decently.
The more I do these, the more I like doing them... I shall call them mini-poems...
If you'd like a short poem like one of these, feel free to ask : )
Though i'll warn you, my muse is very fickle.
Btw, do whatever you want with these. If your deer's name is on it put it whever you like.

Sorry if those don't make very much sense, my mind is an odd place <3
enjoy ~

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Phobos
Calm steps
Cross the forest floor.
A sound, a movement,
The flick of an ear.
But all is well tonight.
Amber eyes gaze to the moon,
Praying it will be alright.

The fire kindles, keeps him going.
Fire of love, of hope,
Seen clearly in a fiery gaze
Oh dear friend,
Let it blaze,
Let it blaze.

~~~

HoneyFur
The powers within,
Are not to be underestimated.
They come forth to defend.

Never take for granted
The power that comes from love.
How it gives strength to the bones.
How it reacts with no regret.

She won’t forget,
It’s hers to remember.
The strength that comes
When defending those you love.

~~~

Crucio
Death.
A hard burden to bear.
But without it,
There would be no life.

Life that’s beautiful,
Even in the darkest reaches.
It comes, it goes.
It is reborn again.
A never ending cycle of loss and gain.

When one is in the business of death,
You must first be in the business of life.
To live, is to die.
To die, is to live.

~~~

Tandem
The raven spreads his wings,
Soars into the night sky.
Moonlight dances on his feathers.
He cackles to himself.
A joke unknown to all but him.

Fly and fly,
On a morbid call.
Keep your spirit alive,
Even in the valley of death.

~~~

Tazanna
Soft wings drift around,
Gentle kisses to the touch.
Their beauty is unmatched,
These butterflies.

Watch as innocence is put in motion.
Soundless grace as they fly
But one must take care,

For fluttering with the butterflies
Creates a dangerous desire.

~~~

Dareh
Boundless energy put in motion,
The sound of running, little feet
Breaks the calm of the wood.

Little one, little one
Where have you come from?
Only come here to have some fun?

Live and laugh little one.
Let innocence be your guide,
Teach us all to laugh again.

~~~

Mariposa
Look up to the sky,
See the sun,
You’ll know another day has come.

Wipe tears from your eyes.
Let pain slip from your grasp.

Hope rises with the sun,
Let is shine on you.
Let it make you new.

~~~

Voice
You can hear her on the wind.
Hear her pitiful plea.
See the ghostly figure.
A murder,
A lie.
A stolen life

Listen to the sound.
Calling out.
Could she ever be found?

~~~

Ozzie
A dance of laughter,
Warm regards.

A quiet step,
Encouragement to go on.

A relying strength,
For friends.
He will defend.

~~~

Flyleaf
Love over floods it’s banks,
Spilling out,
On friends and family alike.

A peaceful presence
A silly friend.
Laugh and dance
Don’t stop your prance.

~~~

Jin
A perfect contradiction,
Yet so seamlessly cohesive.

Put together like a puzzle,
Every piece, it plays a part.
It’s a dance of emotion,
Sprung forth from the heart.

Ever wandering down
The path that’s split.
What side today will be found?

~~~

Lykai
Quiet words can go unheard.
Loud to the heart,
Yet gentle to the ears.

Come, play us a dance
Come dance us a song.
Ring it loud
And Spread the sound.

Let the ringing be your voice;
So loud and clear.
So from the depths of your heart,
All may hear.

~~~

Ryff
Gentle flicks of a flame,
Warn the aggressor.
The blaze of a furnace,
Fights back all who contend

A fiery defiance,
Can be soothed with a cool touch.
Dwindling to a warm glow,
In the presence of those
Who are loved.





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To do/done:
1. Tazanna for Faunet
2. Dareh for BluedeerLegend18
3. Mariposa for Bayleen
4. Voice for BluedeerLegend18
5. Jin for Janet
6. Lykai for Kasmir
7. Ryff for Ryff

I like these, overall.

I like these, overall. ♥

I like all of them it would

I like all of them it would be wonderful if you could do one on my Tazanna if you want.
uwharrie's picture

thank you both

thank you both <3

and I can try : )
BluedeerLegend18's picture

Can you write Dareh's? And,

Can you write Dareh's? And, if you feel like it (I'm not really expecting it anyways), can you do Voice's too?
I have a Master's degree in Wumbology.
uwharrie's picture

I'll start out just doing

I'll start out just doing Dareh's and might possibly do Voice's later too (:
Bayleen's picture

It would be lovely if you

It would be lovely if you could do my Mariposa? <333 I'm loving these poems Smiling
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BluedeerLegend18's picture

You are a very great writer

You are a very great writer Uwharrie. These poems are awesome! I can't wait to see more of these.
I have a Master's degree in Wumbology.
Honeyfur's picture

I love all of these. They're

I love all of these. They're all beautifully written! 8'D
Thank you very much! <3
uwharrie's picture

Alright Bayleen Thank you :

Alright Bayleen

Thank you : )
and you're welcom : )
Sighthoundlady's picture

These are wonderful! ^^

These are wonderful! ^^
Flyleaf's picture

Really wonderful !! I love

Really wonderful !! I love them all . You are very good Smiling
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wingeddeer's picture

Oh wow...The poem you did for

Oh wow...The poem you did for Phobos made my heart swell.It describes him so perfectly.You're so sweet for doing these for us.And you are a great writer and don't ever stop <3 I love all the rest too! So beautifull!

Would you mind if I put this in his bio? I'll credit you of course ^^


uwharrie's picture

Thank you guys

Thank you guys <3

And you can do whatever you like with them (:

Thank you soo much I love

Thank you soo much I love it!!!
wingeddeer's picture

Sweet.Thank you so very much

Sweet.Thank you so very much again! <33


uwharrie's picture

you're welcome

you're welcome <3
Kirness's picture

Daaawh, Tandem's is adorable

Daaawh, Tandem's is adorable in some morbid way.<33
And Crucio's is sooo epic. Omg.~
Please call me Lyssa or Kir. n.n

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Xemi's picture

ASJDFKHSK YOU WRITE SO

ASJDFKHSK
YOU WRITE SO WELL
That is LOVELY ;A; I read them all, and I adore them all!
You have quite a gift, Uwharrie. These are wonderful, truly wonderful. <3
You've captured all of them so well, and in so few words.. that in itself is amazing.

Thank you! <3
uwharrie's picture

Thank you both!!

Thank you both!! <3
and your welcome (8
BluedeerLegend18's picture

Omg if I hadn't gone to the

Omg if I hadn't gone to the pool earlier I would of commented on these earlier! I love Dareh's! A part of it reminds me of this song. Just replace "Chirin" with "Dareh" and you'll see why.

But I still love it sooooo much! You are so awesome! THANKS!
I have a Master's degree in Wumbology.
uwharrie's picture

You're very welcome (: and

You're very welcome (:

and here, have a Voice one too ~
BluedeerLegend18's picture

GASPDEATH I. WAS. NOT.

GASPDEATH

I. WAS. NOT. EXPECTING. THIS.

That. Poem. Explains. Her.

No need for a bio. Just that poem.

And I love how it flows softly,

This is going right on her bio, missy.
I have a Master's degree in Wumbology.
uwharrie's picture

^^

^^ <3
Bayleen's picture

FFFFFFFFFF ASLDKJDFOIDF ;U;

FFFFFFFFFF ASLDKJDFOIDF ;U; AWWWW I love the poem for Mariposa!!! It's sooooo simple, yet so sweet!!! Thank you SOOOO much!! I LOOOVE it! <3333 ♥♥♥
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uwharrie's picture

Your welcome ^^

Your welcome ^^
Kirness's picture

Ohoh. Would you mind if I

Ohoh. Would you mind if I posted Tandem's on his bio? With credit and a link of course.<3
Please call me Lyssa or Kir. n.n

Art by Anjali. ♥
uwharrie's picture

oh, of course you can

oh, of course you can <3
Flyleaf's picture

OMG !! You did a poem for Fly

OMG !! You did a poem for Fly !!! Thank youuuu so much !!
Fly will never stop to laugh and dance !! Wonderful !!
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uwharrie's picture

you're welcome : ), I was

you're welcome : ), I was going to go over and tell you on his page but my internet crashed and just now decided to start working again lol
glad you like it ^^
Xemi's picture

These new poems are very cute

These new poems are very cute <3
uwharrie's picture

thankyouthankyou

thankyouthankyou<3

I would like one for my Jin

I would like one for my Jin if you dont mind :3 all of these are beautiful ^^
Kasmir's picture

Oh... These are beautiful!

Oh... These are beautiful! I'm so glad I stumbled across this post! (8

Would you do one for my Lykai?

But only if really want to (8
uwharrie's picture

Thanks Janet and just

Thanks Janet and just finished yours for Jin : )

And I would love to Kasmir : )

OMG ITS SO

OMG ITS SO ewasdfgthe4wrasdfgrte.......... ;3; I LOVE YOU ♥
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<3
Kasmir's picture

AhItssobeautiful!!!!!!

AhItssobeautiful!Exclaim!!!!! THANKYOUSOMUCH!Exclaim!!!!
uwharrie's picture

you're so much welcome

you're so much welcome <3

bumps <3 anyone else like one?

YES I WANT ONE. Can I get one

YES I WANT ONE. Can I get one for Ryff? Thankies in advance. ^^
uwharrie's picture

Yes yes ^^ you're

Yes yes ^^
you're welcome

edit: could you give me a little description of her? I saw the personality traits but i'd like to know a little more (:

Certainly! Ryff is generally

Certainly!

Ryff is generally friendly and polite, gladly offering company to strangers and playing with fawns 'n such things. She's got a pleasant disposition, but it's best not to let that fool you. She's incredibly sensitive and protective of her friends, taking it upon herself to defend others at all costs, unless someone else is more capable of doing it at the time. She really doesn't like conflict and will usually cower to others at first if they appear threatening.

But, if she does get violent, she basically loses her mind until she realizes that she's too severely injured to continue. Ryff has nearly died several times because of that kind of behaviour. If someone pushes her to that extreme, seeing them again could affect her in numerous ways -- from severe mental trauma and fear to attacking that deer on-site.

Ryff is heavily scarred from fights, both emotionally and physically, but she is by no means insane or crippled. She refuses to be that doe who goes in over her head and doesn't come back up. It's stubbornness that could kill her.

Onto a happier note, around friends she's extremely playful and content, her mood reflecting that of the present company. She loves cuddles and physical contact of any kind. There are a few deer that she will allow closer than others, accepting different behaviour from some and not from others. She doesn't usually associate with does for fear of being judged of her general 'stag-liness', so she hangs with the guys most of the time. That's not to say she can't get along with does; if one gets on her good side she will hang with them like a doe and protect them like a stag.


Wow, brief explanation my foot. XD
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pffft, i like a hefty

pffft, i like a hefty explaination xD
it's done... I apologize for the shortness -even short for a mini shortness- of it.
My muse failed me slightly >.>

aaskwfkwhjef that's so

aaskwfkwhjef that's so perfect. Thank you! <333