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A story for you~ (part 2)

*part 1 can be found here"*
Continuing to post this on-going story if anyone's interested in it...
I'm a lover of friendly critique, so feel free to do so <3

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[=Andalus]Chapter 3
I woke up to a brindle wolf dropping a bloody rabbit at my feet.
“Breakfast is served.” Zane said tearing a leg of the rabbit and laying down to eat it.
I changed into a wolf myself and tore off the other hind leg. I didn’t hunt much, I had grown quite accustomed to human food. Although nothing satisfied my hunger as a wolf like raw meat.
“Thank you.” I told Zane when we both had ate our fill.
“You’re welcome.” he laid his head on his paws looking at me lazily, “Have you made a decision?”
“Not exactly, but I have no where else to go at this point. So I guess going to a Gathering is as good a place as any.” I said, sitting. My bushy tail curling around my feet.
Zane stood up and shook himself, “It’s settled then, lets go. It’ll be all the way over on the West Coast. Better start heading that way now.”
Zane stretched out his legs preparing as if for a long run. Xantu ran fast, I don’t exactly know how fast we can go, it’s faster than a car, slower than a jet. But did Zane really want to run all the way to the West Coast?

“Zane, really? You want to run the whole way?” I asked.
He looked at me, confused, “Well I’m certainly not going to swim the whole way.”
I sighed, “Ever heard of an airplane?”
“I don’t like airplanes.” He frowned.
“It just makes more since.”
“You’ve spent too much time around humans.” Zane grumbled.
“Perhaps.”
Zane rolled his wolven eyes, “Okay Princess, we’ll do it your way.”
“Stop calling me that!” I snapped.
He laughed. “One request a day, Princess”
I shook my head, “Where are we anyway?”
“On the outskirts of the Catskills.
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Oh, why not... Opinions on Nanetta and Jade?

Yep, I guess I'll jump on this bandwagon
Just wondering you're guys' opinion on my two main characters.

Nanetta's changed a lot since I first created her... She started out shy and her experiances have changed her into to a bolder, cockier character. She's also sometimes overly emotional.
Jade's one I could see people having a problem with, she's pretty indifferent, and isn't afraid to hurt feelings. She gets involved in a lot of fights and disagrements.

Just pretty much wondering what you guys think of these two and if you have any advice to better my playing of them in forest and help with chacter development ^^. Also if there's any issues you'd like to adress.
I'd respect and like any opinion on either one or both characters, good or bad ^^.
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Leviathan (HAPPY late BIRTHDAY SELRUIL)

AH, im late, it was yesterday...
But I was absent of all muse yesterday soooooo
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ♥

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Steps of power and strength,
A breath of calm collection.
Words of the wise,
And knowledge of the mind.

Loyal and faithful,
Loving and true.
Unbridled devotion
Will always come through.

Bloodshed brings bloodlust.
Brings a powerful aggressor.
Emotion becomes the ruler
Fight chosen over flight.

Brings justice her own way.
Motives unseen.
Brings protection to loved ones.
No matter the cost.

Strong emotions
Lead to a feral mind.
A constant struggle,
Between mind and body.

Ever changing,
Evolving and growing,
Twisting and turning,
Coming and going.

A perfect contradiction,
Of a single mind.
A Labyrinth.
A puzzle.

Leviathan…


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Nanetta's Archive: Diary of a Doe

As some of you know I write diary entries on Nanetta's bio nearly every day.
I finally decided to store them in a blog instead of a word document.
This is mostly for me, but feel free to track.
These date back to 4.25.11 and go up until now.
I've broken it up into a few scroll boxes to keep from putting too much in one.
The dates start from the bottom and work their way up.

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Flammel: the untold story (HAPPY BIRTHDAY XEMI)

Happy birthday Han |D
... I may have gotten carried away with this....
I wan't expecting it to be so long : |
But yeah, here it is, I hope I didn't completely screw this up
As usual, my mind is an odd place, this is how I veiw Flammel's story, written out in a poem.
So some things may or may not be completely right
/ramble
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The tale in which was never told.
A life before you suddenly unfolds.


He felt it first when he was younger.
The unyielding will to protect and defend.
So with a valiant effort he grew stronger.
All he could do, he did.
His life lived for the ones he loved.
Yet never found solace in what he had done.

He tried to satisfy a hunger
To be better, to be stronger;
But felt he just never got it right.
Even though he’d give his life, Just to save one.
Always as a light to others,
Love always pure and true.

Then one day, light collided with the dark.
An innocent life was taken.
All hope, seemingly lost.
But then.. Something was sparked…
Life was given again, a second chance.
The past shattered to reveal him anew.

Changed, different on the outside.
Reveling in amazement on the inside.
Another chance at the battle of life.
To prove who he had been all along.
Finally the appearance matched the mindset.
Zealous power now held in both mind and body.

Yet, still, memories haunt.
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Leaving for a bit

Leaving tomorrow and coming back Friday.
They don't have any internet where I'm going either.
Just thought I'd let you guys know ^^
So you don't think I died or something...

Idk what Nanetta will do for a week.. Maybe hide under a rock or something...
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That fateful night (For Teradeer contest)

***Slight gore warning***
My entry for Terabetha's contest...
It's short... but I tried lol
I apologize for any character mistakes ^^'

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There are days when something just seems different. The hair on the back of your neck stands up, every noise makes you jump. You can’t tell what it is, but you know something is about to happen.
It was one of those days for Teradeer.

Moonlight shone down into the forest, dancing on the coat of a lone deer. An eerie breeze rushed through the trees rustling the leaves and causing a shiver to run up the spine of the deer. It walked slowly, ears set on a swivel. Something just wasn’t right. The deer didn’t even know where it was going, almost as if it was in a sort of dream-like state.
Every slight movement caused a twitch of muscle or a slight jerk of the head to the tense deer. It lifted up it’s head to draw in a breath of air, to catch a whiff of the wind. A strange scent made it’s brow furrow.
Almost against it’s will, the deer found it’s feet carrying it towards this strange scent to investigate.
The scent lead the deer up a winding path that wound up the side of a steep hill. The deer had a fleeting hope that what ever it found would be worth the climb. As it neared the top of the tall hill, the scent became stronger; it expected to come across the source of the smell shortly.
It didn’t expect that scent to find it first, though

Jumping seemingly from out of nowhere came a large, black wolf. In one spring, it flew out of the sheer darkness and into a ray of moonlight directly in front of Teradeer. It sported a toothy grin of gleaming, white teeth.
Teradeer jumped slightly as the predator jumped into it’s view. Although, the deer wasn’t terribly frightened by it; it had seen worse than a wolf. The deer held it’s head a little higher and peered down it’s nose at the canine.
The black wolf didn’t seem uneased at the lack of reaction.
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Can you hear them? (a concept)

Just a concept rolling around in my head.. Writing this down so I don't forget.


~Three voices

Reason- The voice of reason
Soul- Finds deeper meanings
Noise- Whispers nonesense

~One -currantly nameless- schizophrenic deer

He/She hears these voices, lives by these voices.
Each voice has it's own personality, it's own thoughts
The voices know things, they sometimes seem to know the future
They interact with each other.
They bring almost constant conversation in her head...



One, Two, Three

Why are you counting? What are you counting?

Four, Five, the time

You're counting time?

You can't count time... It's infinate. It holds no beginning, no end.

I suppose that's true...

Perhaps he's counting the time untill something happens.

Wait... What's going to happen?

No one could know... There are endless possibilities...

But you can guess. I guess something amazing will happen.

Of course you do...

So something amazing will happen?

Fourteen, fifteen, amazing, sixteen, seventeen

But when?

Now
Now
...Now
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Writing/Poetry for Gen 1 picto

I feel like an idiot...
jumping on this bandwagon.

Would anyone be willing to give up a Gen 1 picto in exchange for a writing or poetry from me?
Looking for picto for my Nanetta or perhaps another deer... but it would be on a deer i'm on frequently. So I'd love a none glitching picto.
Thanks for your time!
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Dear community members, with love <3 (yeah, i had to do it)

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and a billion other amazing people I can't even list you all

You're loved
STAY on the site

Thanks,
- A billion other other members and I

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