Simply a story of my 2nd day playing. Please post comments, I like to know if people like what they read or their critics. ^^ I don't mind negatives.

It had all started with me... My second day playing.
I was hopping about, as normal, in the Pond, creating little ripples. The magic of the forest sprinkled snow like dust around me, like tiny white ashes floating away.
There was a small group of fawns at the waves' edge, playing and hopping near the bridge. Naturally, I joined, wanting to hop in circles with a spotted friend.
After a while, I decided I wanted to learn about the Forest community ingame a little more. I approached a few deer, but they merely ignored my existence and walked away. A little discouraging, but this was Zylix. Not Soundstar. I would continue....
And I found a friendly buck with large antlers and a coat much like Lucifers' (I mentioned him because he is really cool). A loud bellow and a soft step. Friendly.
He took me under his wing almost instantaneously, walking forward and waiting for my short legs to catch me up. A few other curious fawns attempted to follow, but we were too well coordinated in stride and follow-up that they couldn't catch up with us longer than a few seconds.
We entered De Drinkplaats, where I was turned into a fuzzy little bunny while he was transformed into what I assumed was a dove. We waddled around and soon became bored with the idea, leaving for another romp. We returned to the Pond and he let me play with the other fawns. Ten minutes later, he was laying beside what I perceived as a friend near a birch, at the outskirts of the group of spotted baby deer. His friend seemed like a colorful peacock, laying beside him and watching what could be a fawn of her own.
He walked to the Pond's edge and lay happily in the water. I trotted after him and lay on his flank, happy to have him as a friend. And then... He fell asleep. Were deer supposed to fall asleep that fast?
And then he disappeared. In a sudden mass of black smoke, he was gone. I looked around, confused- This had never happened to me before.... Where had he gone? Why had he left?
I lay down, saddened and a little discouraged. His friend was laying a little ways away, sleeping in the water. I trotted over and lay beside her.
And in a shriek of black smoke, she was gone.