Flour-salted spring ((a poem by Taint))

Anzel's picture
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May soft, the flower spread her wings
And fly her way a-home
May gentle, all but kiss, what sings
In flour-salted dome
The spring will come again one day
And worm to cool my heart
The moon will numb again, some way
I'm far too well my part


I am a flour-salted spring
A winter in the mists
An illogic of fantasies
A-spur, the wind of liste's
For know, when waters jump away
In springing, fancied fly
That one day soon, she shall return
That winter, in my eye


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FINE. No explanation for you x3;;
Fenqua's picture

You shouldn't explain them,

You shouldn't explain them, it kinda destroys the beauty in my opinion. The beauty of mystery!
I'm glad the meds didn't ruin your poetic skills, it's beautiful as always <3


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul


To pray is to believe, to believe is to purify one's soul
dovev's picture

Beautiful <33 How long does

Beautiful <33
How long does it take you to come up with these? I'm horrible at rhyming >_< ^_^


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Your poetry always has such

Your poetry always has such a natural flow to it, a beginning, middle , and end but without the strict guidelines of 'textbook' poetry. A pleasure to read, as always! Smiling
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Queze;
~Aztec priest of The Forest~
Anzel's picture

Fine, I removed the info

Fine, I removed the info about the poem x3;; Lol. But gracias to everyone.

It took me about 5 minutes to write that poem, and with editting, maybe 8 minutes? 10 max. The words just flow out. That's why it's difficult to write about specific things, because then the words don't come out as naturally.

You're gifted to have that

You're gifted to have that ability. As a writer never waste a writing urge, as I know it may not come again for a ling time! Great job!

Proud Founder of The Lightbringers
Hubalaboo's picture

Lol NOOOO I missed the

Lol NOOOO I missed the explanation xD

Yeah, see, that's the thing... I don't quite get it, as usual. But seriously, your words are fantastic and it all flows together beautifully <333 I love your poetry.
... And of course, Plume loves to hear anything Taint says. x3

Anzel's picture

Basically...my meds work,

Basically...my meds work, but I know that I'll still get pms depression/anxiety (menstruation lasts about 28 days, lol...in sync with the moon, which goes from full moon to full moon in 28 days). And right now, I feel depressed. So it's not all gone yet. :/

Hubalaboo's picture

Aw, that sucks. *hug* At

Aw, that sucks. *hug* At least it's better than before.