. . : : F o u r . V i l l i a n s . a n d . O n e . U n s u c c e s s f u l . S a v i o r : : . .

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The fur along his neck rose, and he shivered involuntarily. Mortuusago knew what was coming... Cruel laughter echoed as they drew nearer. Unfortunately, there was nowhere to run, to escape to. They were too close already, and the ground was treacherous. Lavender eyes stared into bloody, violent pools, accented by the mask on his face. Hot wax slowly dripped from the antlers and down onto the mask, which already possessed a thick, cracked coating. A weak whimper rose from Mortuus’s closed lips. “Problem?” the ghostly deer crooned.





Hey!!! I need some people, as in those who participated in this little story to proofread this for me. I want it to be as accurate to everyone's characters as possible. I also need some criticism. Of course, I will accept help from people other than those involved. I may just send pieces as I don't want to spoil it for everyone. I might also ask if people can contribute other things a well.



All you need to do is give me your email. Just post it here, ok? Like I said, I need criticism, and it can be from anybody.



Cast
~Mortuusago (Acurna)
+Silence (shimmyshimmy)
-Banter (eternalslumber)
-Darkweaver (Zergarikiaka)
-Lantern (ocean)
-Spangled (Fenqua)

My email

My email is~
orcasarefat@aol.com

Weird email, I know right? XD;
*can't wait to see the story~*


Zergarikiaka's picture

qtktdragon@aol.com yes ^^

qtktdragon@aol.com yes ^^

ocean's picture

Just a note (and it'll be a

Just a note (and it'll be a pain, sorry): Lantern only speaks in nursery rhymes/quotes/anything but his own words. ^^ He doesn't necessarily make that much sense either; the rhymes can have the vaguest connect to what you actually want to say. xD
Uh...
swirlingriver@gmail.com

^^

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Thankies~ Also, I plan on

Thankies~ Laughing out loud Also, I plan on doodling everything. Y'all don't mind being drawn, do you? I might ask you to email me a ref, as at school, I can't see most pics, and at home, I can't get on the website. XD

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I play Mortuusago and Evangeline. Eva is a fawn! Mort is my big baby boy~
ocean's picture

'Course not, I'd love it. x3

'Course not, I'd love it. x3 I just have to remember to sign in to my account. |D

Acurna's picture

XD I just need to get the

XD I just need to get the ending wrapped up

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I play Mortuusago and Evangeline. Eva is a fawn! Mort is my big baby boy~