[ drown me ]

The wind blew down from the North that day
Casting skulls and dust from the earth's debris
I looked out at the never-ending sea
And begged you just to drown me

Twins and triplets came to watch
The ticking of the final clock
Time can slow but never stops
As long as someone's waiting

We searched the shoreline, you and I
I sat you down so you could cry
Without the cruel and prying eyes
Of those who sought to hurt you

A decade's year became a day
You treated me another way
Changed and never quite the same
Compared to memory

The sun was dead in the West that night
The war was lost on either side
Sought help from God and he replied
That you would someday drown me

He didn't help, he didn't care
I looked for Satan and found him there
Sprawled on silk he'd rip and tear
Trying to impress

The moon rose up with sinner's fear
The devil took your soul from here
Cast it out away from me
And silently, I drowned
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He didn't help, he didn't

He didn't help, he didn't care
I looked for Satan and found him there
Sprawled on silk he'd rip and tear
Trying to impress


Hnngh
Hnnngh
Hnnnngh

I love your writing, so much, but that line there particularly caught me ♥
ickydog's picture

I think this one is my

I think this one is my favorite.
Kobal Snuff
Kumiko's picture

I envy the way you string

I envy the way you string words together.
ocean's picture

Kumiko wrote:I envy the way

Kumiko wrote:
I envy the way you string words together.

This.

Also your rhythm. I want it. -snatches-

♥♥ it slightly

♥♥

it slightly reminds me of this

Sanguine; I'm quite fond of

Sanguine; I'm quite fond of using Satan in poetry, for some reason |: Thankyou <3
Ickydog; ddlgjhsdf~ I feel like it could have been better, being fairly rushed and flurried, but thankyou ;;
Kumiko; ♥!
Ocean; -growl- give that back before I hurt you BC <3
theswan; dsfdf I had a listen and ;A; me gusta ♥