Brilliant and cheesy idea! (my Divine series)

quadraptor's picture
HEYA! I just came up with a great but really tacky idea.

This is for my Divine series, particularly about certain characters in the story. If you haven't read the series, this might be a little spoiler, but I GOTTA get some opinions on this before I follow through with it!

Please read below if you have read the stories or if you don't really mind being spoiled.

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So those of you who have read know that Quad has three older siblings - Una, Duo, and Trio. I've already introduced Pent as his younger brother, but with the older ones, I never really defined who they were.

Originally I was going to have them be three other characters, who never appeared in the series, ect ect ect...

But then I got the idea that a certain other three characters of mine could be them!



Caw, Blixt, and Trunks could be Quad's long lost brothers!

Obviously I might have to make a couple of adjustments to accommodate this idea, but really, what do you think? Caw, Blixt, and Trunks never had any kind of relation to Quad or each other, but what I could explain is that they had been living their own lives the whole time Quad had been living his, all of them really unaware that they were siblings.

If it sounds really cheesy, please let me know. I'd like honest opinions on this - if it sounds like it doesn't really work, then tell me and I may leave the stories alone. I just was like, "Hey, I have three deer that could be Quad's siblings!" this morning.

And that way, my six deer would all be family...I really like the idea personally.

3's picture

You're Blixt? I guess it

You're Blixt?


I guess it sounds like an OK idea, but a deer with that many siblings sounds.. uncalled for to me, but then again, this is TEF- we have much stranger things around here.

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Pegasicorn's picture

If the idea works for you..

If the idea works for you.. =] Considering most of my deer are related, I'm not sure I can give an opinion. XD;
Alecsander's picture

I don't see why not. I mean

I don't see why not.

I mean deer DO live in herds and males spread out after maturing.
It wouldn't be hard to imagine at all that a bunch of related male deer lost touch.