Clammy green carpet, among wooden giants' feet.
Bed of the forest under dancing red leaves.
A tickle on my lids, from a golden fount of light,
flowing like river through the pitch black night.
And when I looked up high, up to granny oak's crown,
I saw a cage for the bird songs and a new born dawn.
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My very first little poem, I did in english, so please have mercy on me.
I'm still new in the forest and absolutely fascinated! The proof, that even games can be art.
If I did a grammatic mistake, feel free to correct me. I'm still learning.
Beautiful and
The only issue in the whole thing that I found are your lack of apostrophes.
giants' (because giants is plural the apostrophe goes after the s to show the possession of many i.e. many feet possessed by many giants)
oak's (before the s because it is a single possessor i.e. the single oak possesses the crown)
I'm excited to read much more of your writing as it is most definitely colorful, detailed, and your word choices are wonderful!
Welcome to the forest and the community!
Thank you very much, I'm
Yes, these apostrophes are quite a weakness of mine, good thing, you mentioned that.
It should be corrected now (hope, I got it right).
Nice, to be in the forest.
Wow! So, just, wow. To me you
and the world loves you,
and this my friend, is true.